MERI SHAYRI BURI.........(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on October 04, 2008, 07:18:00 AM
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MERI SHAYRI BURI MERE BAYAAN BURE HAIN
Q KAHE GHAYEL ABD AUR JABEEN KADAR_DAN BURE HAIN

HO JATI MUKAMMAL MANGI THI JO DUAYE
RAB SE KARU Q SHIKWA MERE ARMAAN BURE HAIN

TERI MEHFIL KE ADAB KO HUM HI NA SAMAJ PAYE
Q TOHMAT LAGAYE HUM MEZBAN BURE HAIN

KIYA INSANIYAT KO ZALEEL APNI SHAYRI SE
AUR BHOOL BHAITHE HUM BHI INSAN BURE HAIN

KYA MUH LEKAR JAOO APNE KHUDA KE AAGE
DUNIYA ME JO KAMAYE WOH SAMAN BURE HAIN

MERI SHAYRI BURI MERE BAYAAN BURE HAIN
Q KAHE GHAYEL ABD AUR JABEEN KADARDAN BURE HAIN

                                 -SAJID GHAYEL-
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2008, 08:52:29 AM »
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kya hi khoob likha..hai aapne....ghayel
ek puarana DOHA (qtar wala nahi) shayad kabir ji ka likha hua yaad aa gaya,

bura jo dekhan mai chala, bura na milya koi,
jo man khoja aapana, mujhse bura na koi
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2008, 09:13:45 AM »
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aapne doha kaha to aapko bata du main bhi doha me hi service karta hu kabir wale nahi qatar wale  Giggle and thanks for the compliment bekarar 3 gante me ek sirf aapka reply aaya hai. DOH
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2008, 09:15:33 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 04, 2008, 09:13:45 AM
aapne doha kaha to aapko bata du main bhi doha me hi service karta hu kabir wale nahi qatar wale  Giggle and thanks for the compliment bekarar 3 gante me ek sirf aapka reply aaya hai. DOH


Welcome to my town qatar wale sajid ji   tongue3...bohat umda likha hai aapne.... Applause Applause

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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2008, 09:16:33 AM »
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bohat hi khoob kaha aapne..ghayel ji... Applause Applause

"Auron ki aapzabaan se hum kya kahein,
girebaan mein khaak kam kuchh apne bhi nahi hai"--Tanha

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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2008, 09:23:32 AM »
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bohot khoob likha hai sajid ji..aap toh humare padosi ho phir toh..doha wale Winking

sanjeev ji u're right..yeh kabir ji ka likha hua hai..unke dohe shayad hi koi bhool paaye!!

acha likha hai saurabh aapne bhi..
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2008, 09:25:24 AM »
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thanks honey aur qatar me koi kuch problem kare to apne ko bolne ka main mere right hand samnoj ko bhej duga  Laughing hard Laughing hard
Quote from: honeyrose on October 04, 2008, 09:15:33 AM

Welcome to my town qatar wale sajid ji   tongue3...bohat umda likha hai aapne.... Applause Applause

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«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2008, 09:27:20 AM »
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arey sanjeev ki jagah samnoj likh diya sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 04, 2008, 09:25:24 AM
thanks honey aur qatar me koi kuch problem kare to apne ko bolne ka main mere right hand samnoj ko bhej duga  Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2008, 09:29:04 AM »
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bohat bohat khoob likha hain aapne saurabh maza aa gaya
Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on October 04, 2008, 09:16:33 AM
bohat hi khoob kaha aapne..ghayel ji... Applause Applause

"Auron ki aapzabaan se hum kya kahein,
girebaan mein khaak kam kuchh apne bhi nahi hai"--Tanha

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«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2008, 09:29:50 AM »
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Bahut achchhaa likhaa hai sajid_ghayel ji,

Buraa naheen hai kaheen koyee: hai khayaal apnaa!
Us kee taameer mein, kaheen koyi buraayi naheen!
Zahar, zahar bhi hai, dawaa bhi hai; magar, ae dost,
Zahar hai mout hamaarey liye, hayaat naheen!!
                               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: October 04, 2008, 09:49:38 AM »
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Quote from: sanya310 on October 04, 2008, 09:23:32 AM
bohot khoob likha hai sajid ji..aap toh humare padosi ho phir toh..doha wale Winking

sanjeev ji u're right..yeh kabir ji ka likha hua hai..unke dohe shayad hi koi bhool paaye!!

acha likha hai saurabh aapne bhi..
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 04, 2008, 09:13:45 AM
aapne doha kaha to aapko bata du main bhi doha me hi service karta hu kabir wale nahi qatar wale  Giggle and thanks for the compliment bekarar 3 gante me ek sirf aapka reply aaya hai. DOH

abhi sanya ke birthday wale thread me ghayel ne likha tha ki wo gift nahi de payega to sirf dua-yen..hi de sakta hun...
to ab mai yahi kahunga....ki ghayel ab to tumhe pata ho hi gaya hai ki ye tumhaari padosi hai.....fata-fat gift le ke pahunch jaana... Laughing hard
aur sanya tum chaho to ghayel ko party-shrty de dena... Winking
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«Reply #11 on: October 04, 2008, 09:53:26 AM »
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aapka jawab sar aakho par tareef ke liye bhi shukriya

samje bhi to kya samje zehar ki fitrat samje
unko samja hota jo has kar ise pee gaye
apni hayat ko tum rakhna sambhal kar
hum to woh hain jo mar ke bhi jee gaye
                                  
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 04, 2008, 09:29:50 AM
Bahut achchhaa likhaa hai sajid_ghayel ji,

Buraa naheen hai kaheen koyee: hai khayaal apnaa!
Us kee taameer mein, kaheen koyi buraayi naheen!
Zahar, zahar bhi hai, dawaa bhi hai; magar, ae dost,
Zahar hai mout hamaarey liye, hayaat naheen!!
                               - abd bundeli

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«Reply #12 on: October 04, 2008, 09:56:42 AM »
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Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on October 04, 2008, 09:16:33 AM
bohat hi khoob kaha aapne..ghayel ji... Applause Applause

"Auron ki aapzabaan se hum kya kahein,
girebaan mein khaak kam kuchh apne bhi nahi hai"--Tanha

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wah ustad koi mauka khali jane mat dena  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard lekin yaar baat to sahi hain badi baddi nahi fekna chahiye warna kabhi kabhi aadmi khud fas jata hain  Feared. ab yaar puri duniya me use bhi doha hi mila tha birthday celebrate karne ke liye   Crying anyway agar party sharty degi to hum dono ki behalf pe present kar dooga yaar.  DOH
Quote from: bekarar on October 04, 2008, 09:49:38 AM
abhi sanya ke birthday wale thread me ghayel ne likha tha ki wo gift nahi de payega to sirf dua-yen..hi de sakta hun...
to ab mai yahi kahunga....ki ghayel ab to tumhe pata ho hi gaya hai ki ye tumhaari padosi hai.....fata-fat gift le ke pahunch jaana... Laughing hard
aur sanya tum chaho to ghayel ko party-shrty de dena... Winking
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«Reply #14 on: October 04, 2008, 10:01:06 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 04, 2008, 09:29:50 AM
Bahut achchhaa likhaa hai sajid_ghayel ji,

Buraa naheen hai kaheen koyee: hai khayaal apnaa!
Us kee taameer mein, kaheen koyi buraayi naheen!
Zahar, zahar bhi hai, dawaa bhi hai; magar, ae dost,
Zahar hai mout hamaarey liye, hayaat naheen!!
                               - abd bundeli

tasweer ka dusra rukh dikhata aapka sher kabil-e-taarif hai abd ji
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