MERI SHAYRI BURI.........(GHAYEL)

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«Reply #15 on: October 04, 2008, 10:04:12 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 04, 2008, 09:59:12 AM
wah ustad koi mauka khali jane mat dena  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard lekin yaar baat to sahi hain badi baddi nahi fekna chahiye warna kabhi kabhi aadmi khud fas jata hain  Feared. ab yaar puri duniya me use bhi doha hi mila tha birthday celebrate karne ke liye   Crying anyway agar party sharty degi to hum dono ki behalf pe present kar dooga yaar.  DOH

 Laughing hard Laughing hard
mai to khud surprise hun ki saare doha wale is thread pe ikatthe ho gaye hain....honeyji ko bhi saath le lena...
aur haan ye akhiri wali baat mujhe bahoot achchi lagi...tumne dosti ka bharam to rakha.... Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #16 on: October 04, 2008, 10:09:18 AM »
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dont worry bill bhej dooga  Giggle thoda bohat bharam tum bhi rakh lena yaar  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Quote from: bekarar on October 04, 2008, 10:04:12 AM
Laughing hard Laughing hard
mai to khud surprise hun ki saare doha wale is thread pe ikatthe ho gaye hain....honeyji ko bhi saath le lena...
aur haan ye akhiri wali baat mujhe bahoot achchi lagi...tumne dosti ka bharam to rakha.... Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #17 on: October 04, 2008, 10:14:17 AM »
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rahne wale hindustaan ke, pade ho doha me aur dosti usa wali style me wah re wah waise mujhe ghayel se yahi umeed thi. notworthy....abe kanjoos - makkhichoos.....dosti ke beech ye bill kaisa..chup..chup... sad10..aur fir dua-yen to hum dono hi de chuke hain mai sochata hun shayad ab gift dene ki jaroorat nahi hai..kya khayal hai Is it SO!
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«Reply #18 on: October 04, 2008, 10:20:42 AM »
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sahi kaha yaar dua ke aage yeh gift kitni mamuli cheeze hain  Giggle waise hum gift dena chahte hain  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

aur yaar kanjoos wanjoos mat bola kar yeh sab andar ki baat hain yaar image mat kharab kar waise bhi doha me khud hi dekh rahe ho kitni raunak hain aajkal.  Giggle
Quote from: bekarar on October 04, 2008, 10:14:17 AM
rahne wale hindustaan ke, pade ho doha me aur dosti usa wali style me wah re wah waise mujhe ghayel se yahi umeed thi. notworthy....abe kanjoos - makkhichoos.....dosti ke beech ye bill kaisa..chup..chup... sad10..aur fir dua-yen to hum dono hi de chuke hain mai sochata hun shayad ab gift dene ki jaroorat nahi hai..kya khayal hai Is it SO!
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«Reply #19 on: October 04, 2008, 11:30:34 AM »
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Shukriyah bekarar ji!
Duniyaa mein chhah arab dimaag hain, yahaan, wahaan:
Paabandagee bhi, sochney pai, hai naheen kaheen!
Haalaanki, bolney pai, jubaan pai, lagaam hai!
Insaaniyat jahaan hai, taraqqee bhi hai waheen!!
                              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #20 on: October 04, 2008, 11:47:44 AM »
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Jo Ghayal hota hai usko kuch soojhta nahi
Jo man mein aata hai usko bayaan kar deta hai

Phir achcha ho bura, sahi ya galat jaanta nahi
Apne ko aur apne karam ko bhi bura kahta hai

Usko log pagal kahe ya dewaana ya kuch aur sahi
Woh toh ghayal hai uska koi sahara hai hi nahi

Ati sundar  Applause
uncha uncha sub chale neecha chale na koey
jo ek baar neecha chale subse uncha hoey

Kya Khayaal Hay Aap Ka
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«Reply #21 on: October 04, 2008, 01:10:20 PM »
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wah rajesh samaj me nahi aa raha hain aapke kalam ki tareef karu ya aapki tareef ki tareef karu itni izzat na de main uske kabil nahi  Crying
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 04, 2008, 11:47:44 AM
Jo Ghayal hota hai usko kuch soojhta nahi
Jo man mein aata hai usko bayaan kar deta hai

Phir achcha ho bura, sahi ya galat jaanta nahi
Apne ko aur apne karam ko bhi bura kahta hai

Usko log pagal kahe ya dewaana ya kuch aur sahi
Woh toh ghayal hai uska koi sahara hai hi nahi

Ati sundar  Applause
uncha uncha sub chale neecha chale na koey
jo ek baar neecha chale subse uncha hoey

Kya Khayaal Hay Aap Ka
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«Reply #22 on: December 23, 2008, 01:48:35 PM »
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Nice One,.
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«Reply #23 on: December 23, 2008, 01:51:36 PM »
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Koi Shayar Apni Shayari Kabhi Buri Nahi Likhta,.
Wo Dard Bayaan Karta Hai,.
Aur Kuch Dard Aise Hote Hain Jo Samajh Mein Nahi Aate,.

Aur Hum Kehte Hain, Shayari Buri Thi,.
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«Reply #24 on: December 31, 2008, 07:05:26 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 04, 2008, 01:10:20 PM
wah rajesh samaj me nahi aa raha hain aapke kalam ki tareef karu ya aapki tareef ki tareef karu itni izzat na de main uske kabil nahi  Crying

Thanks - Jo aap ko achcha lage
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«Reply #25 on: December 31, 2008, 07:18:04 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 23, 2008, 01:51:36 PM
Koi Shayar Apni Shayari Kabhi Buri Nahi Likhta,.
Wo Dard Bayaan Karta Hai,.
Aur Kuch Dard Aise Hote Hain Jo Samajh Mein Nahi Aate,.

Aur Hum Kehte Hain, Shayari Buri Thi,.



haha.. nice guessing... but mai apne aap ko shayer nehi samajti but i can understand and i can pinpoint... tongue3

Aur jaanasheen bhaiya.... dard samaj ko dekh nahi sakte. dard ko ehsaas karna padta hai.. koyi b dard ho.... dard ka ehsaas jo dard sehta usko hi hota hai.. j
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«Reply #26 on: December 31, 2008, 04:57:25 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 04, 2008, 07:18:00 AM
MERI SHAYRI BURI MERE BAYAAN BURE HAIN
Q KAHE GHAYEL ABD AUR JABEEN KADAR_DAN BURE HAIN

HO JATI MUKAMMAL MANGI THI JO DUAYE
RAB SE KARU Q SHIKWA MERE ARMAAN BURE HAIN

TERI MEHFIL KE ADAB KO HUM HI NA SAMAJ PAYE
Q TOHMAT LAGAYE HUM MEZBAN BURE HAIN

KIYA INSANIYAT KO ZALEEL APNI SHAYRI SE
AUR BHOOL BHAITHE HUM BHI INSAN BURE HAIN

KYA MUH LEKAR JAOO APNE KHUDA KE AAGE
DUNIYA ME JO KAMAYE WOH SAMAN BURE HAIN

MERI SHAYRI BURI MERE BAYAAN BURE HAIN
Q KAHE GHAYEL ABD AUR JABEEN KADARDAN BURE HAIN

                                 -SAJID GHAYEL-

wah kaya baat hai SG Jee.. bahoot khoob kaha apne... good creation  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Boora kabhi koi insaan nahi hota
her ek ke jeena ka saleeka, ek sa nahi hota

kuch mil jaate hai mehfil main dost aise
jinhe dil-e-haal kahne ka, tarika nahi hota

na shayri boori is jahan main, na shayr boore
sun.ne walo ne, unki tarah ji kar dekha nahi hota

khuda ne banaya, khuda ne sajaya
khuda se chupa, yaha koi raj nahi hota

Apno se kha kha kar zakham, na Baaz aai Pooja
dil se nikal kar, jo shabd lubo per aa jaaye
wo shabd hai sirf, arth uska, koi, phir nahi hota
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«Reply #27 on: December 31, 2008, 05:00:45 PM »
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Abd ji, Rajesh ji and Lil bro apne acha sath nibhaya hai yaha.. good work all.
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«Reply #28 on: January 01, 2009, 12:37:01 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 04:57:25 PM
wah kaya baat hai SG Jee.. bahoot khoob kaha apne... good creation  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Boora kabhi koi insaan nahi hota
her ek ke jeena ka saleeka, ek sa nahi hota

kuch mil jaate hai mehfil main dost aise
jinhe dil-e-haal kahne ka, tarika nahi hota

na shayri boori is jahan main, na shayr boore
sun.ne walo ne, unki tarah ji kar dekha nahi hota

khuda ne banaya, khuda ne sajaya
khuda se chupa, yaha koi raj nahi hota

Apno se kha kha kar zakham, na Baaz aai Pooja
dil se nikal kar, jo shabd lubo per aa jaaye
wo shabd hai sirf, arth uska, koi, phir nahi hota




Bohat Khoobsurat kalam likha hain aapne POOJA JEE aur tareef ke liye shukriyaan.
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«Reply #29 on: December 20, 2011, 09:37:36 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 04, 2008, 07:18:00 AM
MERI SHAYRI BURI MERE BAYAAN BURE HAIN
Q KAHE GHAYEL ABD AUR JABEEN KADAR_DAN BURE HAIN

HO JATI MUKAMMAL MANGI THI JO DUAYE
RAB SE KARU Q SHIKWA MERE ARMAAN BURE HAIN

TERI MEHFIL KE ADAB KO HUM HI NA SAMAJ PAYE
Q TOHMAT LAGAYE HUM MEZBAN BURE HAIN

KIYA INSANIYAT KO ZALEEL APNI SHAYRI SE
AUR BHOOL BHAITHE HUM BHI INSAN BURE HAIN

KYA MUH LEKAR JAOO APNE KHUDA KE AAGE
DUNIYA ME JO KAMAYE WOH SAMAN BURE HAIN

MERI SHAYRI BURI MERE BAYAAN BURE HAIN
Q KAHE GHAYEL ABD AUR JABEEN KADARDAN BURE HAIN

                                 -SAJID GHAYEL-

bahut khoob...........!
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