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ParwaaZ
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Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi abhi shaam to hone do
Main Khud Hii Laut JauNGa Mujhe NaaKaam to hone do
Karna mujhe badnaam phir tumhe mujh per haq hoNga
Pahele mere naam se judaa Tumhara Naam to hone do
Na Lagaunga dil kabhi Phir itni deewangii ki hadh tak
Mairi Iftadayi Mohobbat Kaa koyiN Anjaam to hone do
dekhlo ek nazar chahe khak bhi na dalo tum mujh per
Dard Basar is Dil Ko Sanam Zarra Aaraam to hone do
Sirf justajuu hai ParwaaZ" Manzil -E- Mohobbat ki
Khanabadosh huN is rah mujhe ba maaqaam to hone do
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2012, 10:23:22 AM » |
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2012, 10:29:34 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2012, 10:54:54 AM » |
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Parwaaz saheb , bahut khushi hoti hai
aapka kalaam parh ke . Mubarakbaad
pesh hai . khush rahiye . Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2012, 02:27:22 PM » |
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waah bro-- bht khoob kalaam likhi h aapne-- humara dili daad aur mubarakbad kubul karen  bro--jab bhi aapko padhta hoon mera dil krta h ki mai bhi ek ghazal likhu-- aapse inspire ho jata hoon--:) agr kbhi kuch likh gya to zimmedar aap hi honge janaab  khus rahie muskurate rahie |
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«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2012, 04:52:44 PM » |
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laajwaab parwaaz bhaai bahut hee umdaa kalaam
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2012, 01:54:05 PM » |
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woooow awesome parwaaz jii...bahut khoob.... |
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«Reply #11 on: April 22, 2012, 04:38:09 PM » |
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2012, 06:22:00 PM » |
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Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi abhi shaam to hone do
Main Khud Hii Laut JauNGa Mujhe NaaKaam to hone do
Karna mujhe badnaam phir tumhe mujh per haq hoNga
Pahele mere naam se judaa Tumhara Naam to hone do
Na Lagaunga dil kabhi Phir itni deewangii ki hadh tak
Mairi Iftadayi Mohobbat Kaa koyiN Anjaam to hone do
dekhlo ek nazar chahe khak bhi na dalo tum mujh per
Dard Basar is Dil Ko Sanam Zarra Aaraam to hone do
Sirf justajuu hai ParwaaZ" Manzil -E- Mohobbat ki
Khanabadosh huN is rah mujhe ba maaqaam to hone do
bahut bahut kooooooooobsoooooooooorat parwaaz sahab |
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2012, 05:43:55 AM » |
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bahut khoob pareaaz bhai laajavaab peshkash, shaandaar ehsaas bayaan kiye hai aapne, iikhte rahiye.
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2012, 06:46:10 AM » |
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parwazzz jiiiiiiiiii .......... shabd nahin mil pa rahe tareef keliye ..aapki iss nai gazal ne to fir se likhne ki ichcha jaga di man me...... haye kya gazab kalikhte ho aap.......
postmartum karenge aapki post ka fir baad me .... kuch waqt aaye hain jaldijaldi sari post dekhni hai...... yunhi likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye
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