Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi.... ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on April 21, 2012, 10:19:05 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 23, 2012, 08:36:04 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 21, 2012, 01:35:14 PM
bahut bahut khooob parwaaz Ji

Har ek A'shaar Lajawaab

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khawahish Jee aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab... houNslaa afzai aur tareef ke liye..
aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: April 23, 2012, 08:39:25 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on April 21, 2012, 02:27:22 PM
waah bro--
bht khoob kalaam likhi h aapne--
humara dili daad aur mubarakbad kubul karen
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bro--jab bhi aapko padhta hoon
mera dil krta h ki mai bhi ek ghazal likhu--
aapse inspire ho jata hoon--:)

agr kbhi kuch likh gya to zimmedar aap hi honge janaab tongue3

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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Aadaab Bro...!

Bahut bahut shukriyaa Bro ... yeH bhi puraani kalaam hai ... tongue3
Kia karuN kalam chalti hi nahi hai aajkal...  Embarrased

Bhai aap bahut achcha likhte haiN aur humari kisi koshish se aapki
kalam chaleNgi toH hume behad khushi hoNgi janab.... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
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«Reply #17 on: April 23, 2012, 09:46:59 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 21, 2012, 04:52:44 PM
laajwaab parwaaz bhaai bahut hee umdaa kalaam

Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab bahut bahut shukriyaa aapki is purkhulus tareef ke liye... Usual Smile
Aage bhi apna saath banaaye rakhiye... aate rahiye.. Usual Smile

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: April 23, 2012, 10:04:48 AM »
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Quote from: dolly on April 22, 2012, 01:54:05 PM
woooow awesome parwaaz jii...bahut khoob....Usual Smile

Dolly Jee Aadaab!

Bahut bahut shukriyaa jee... aage bhi aise hi sath banaaye
rakhiye... Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: April 23, 2012, 03:23:27 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob Parwaaz ji...!!!
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«Reply #20 on: April 23, 2012, 06:29:12 PM »
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Kya kahiye Parwaaz Sahab...kya kahiye aapki kalaam ki taarif mein...
adhoori mohabbat, benaam dard , adhhore khwaab.....ye zindagi bhi kya khoob hai jnaab.....behtarin , umda....har lafj lajwaab...
karna mujhe badnaam...pehle naam to juda ho jaane do....khoob kha..
dard hai,judayi hai , dhokha hai.. phir bhi parvaah hai...ajab junoon hai
Dheron daad kabul karein...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause....
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«Reply #21 on: April 23, 2012, 07:07:31 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 21, 2012, 10:19:05 AM











Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi abhi shaam to hone do
Main Khud Hii Laut JauNGa Mujhe NaaKaam to hone do

Karna mujhe badnaam phir tumhe mujh per haq hoNga
Pahele mere naam se judaa Tumhara Naam to hone do

Na Lagaunga dil kabhi Phir itni deewangii ki hadh tak
Mairi Iftadayi Mohobbat Kaa koyiN Anjaam to hone do

dekhlo ek nazar chahe khak bhi na dalo tum mujh per
Dard Basar is Dil Ko Sanam Zarra Aaraam to hone do

Sirf justajuu hai ParwaaZ" Manzil -E- Mohobbat ki
Khanabadosh huN is rah mujhe ba maaqaam to hone do
Har sher Lajawab ParwaaZ ji..daad kabool kare.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: April 23, 2012, 09:25:32 PM »
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"Na Lagaunga dil kabhi phir itni deewangi ki hadh tak"

Wah Wah Wah Wah..
Yeh line dil dil tak ponch gayi sahab..
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Puri kalam badi khubsoorat hai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #23 on: April 25, 2012, 11:48:54 AM »
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ParwaaZ Ji,

Khoobsoorat khayal...waah waah
kya kahne..

Dili mubaarakbaad aur shubhkaamnaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #24 on: April 28, 2012, 10:21:52 AM »
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Quote from: ymmittal on April 22, 2012, 04:38:09 PM
Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause

YM Mittal jee aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab is khoobsurat tareef ka...
aage bhi apna saath banaaye rakhiye.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: April 28, 2012, 10:23:20 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 22, 2012, 06:22:00 PM
bahut bahut kooooooooobsoooooooooorat parwaaz sahab

Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Bahut bahut shukriyaa jee is khoobsurat tareef ke liye...
Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: April 28, 2012, 10:25:25 AM »
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bahut khoob kaha Parwaaz Bhai,  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: April 28, 2012, 10:26:01 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on April 23, 2012, 05:43:55 AM
bahut khoob pareaaz bhai laajavaab peshkash, shaandaar ehsaas bayaan kiye hai aapne, iikhte rahiye.

MKV Jee Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab... houNsla afzai aur tareef ke
liye tah e dil se shukriyaa ... Usual Smile

Aage bhi aapna saath banaaye rakhiye... Usual Smile
Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez...Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: April 28, 2012, 10:52:10 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 21, 2012, 10:19:05 AM











Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi abhi shaam to hone do
Main Khud Hii Laut JauNGa Mujhe NaaKaam to hone do
waah waah kya kahne janab
Karna mujhe badnaam phir tumhe mujh per haq hoNga
Pahele mere naam se judaa Tumhara Naam to hone do
goood ji
Na Lagaunga dil kabhi Phir itni deewangii ki hadh tak
Mairi Iftadayi Mohobbat Kaa koyiN Anjaam to hone do
waah
dekhlo ek nazar chahe khak bhi na dalo tum mujh per
Dard Basar is Dil Ko Sanam Zarra Aaraam to hone do
Applause:clap:clap:
Sirf justajuu hai ParwaaZ" Manzil -E- Mohobbat ki
Khanabadosh huN is rah mujhe ba maaqaam to hone do
lajawab h ye gajal
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«Reply #29 on: April 30, 2012, 06:02:51 PM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Zah e naseeb humaare jo aap aayi... badi khushi mehsus
ho rahi hai aapko bazm meiN dekhkar... Usual Smile woh aaye
humare ghar khuda ki khudrat hai... kabhi hum unko
kabhi apne ghar ko dekhte hai... Usual Smile

Kasak jee aapne itne dil se itni khoobsurat tareef ki hai
ke kia kaheN... Lafz nahi humare paas shukriya ke siva... Usual Smile

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya jee jo apne apna kimti waqt
nikal kar humari naakaam si koshish ko itni mohobbat se
saraha... Usual Smile
aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... bazm ki ronak badhate rahiye... Usual Smile
shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on April 23, 2012, 06:46:10 AM
parwazzz jiiiiiiiiii .......... shabd nahin mil pa rahe tareef keliye ..aapki iss nai gazal ne to fir se likhne ki ichcha jaga di man me...... haye kya gazab kalikhte ho aap.......
postmartum karenge aapki post ka fir baad me .... kuch waqt aaye hain jaldijaldi sari post dekhni hai...... yunhi likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye
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