Merra naya saal...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on January 07, 2011, 12:51:10 PM
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Band ankho mein tumhare sapne aate hai
khuli ankho mein tumhara khayal aata hai,

dhundhti rehti hu har nafs taqdir k uljhe sawalo ko,
jawab milne se pehle hi har dafa ek naya sawal aata hai,

zindgi sulagti rehti hai dhadkane uljhati rehti hai,
tumhari yado ka bawander bite lamho ka malaal aata hai,

ansu dariya ban jab girte hai nigaho se ek pal mein toot jati hu,
phir sochti hu jab tumhe tou gum mein dooba tumhara haal aata hai,

mhbt ki dori bandhi hai jisse kabhi kabhi vo jane kahan gum ho jata hai,
pal pal theher theher k tanahiyo ka manzar bhi kya kamaal aata hai,

koi bichad jata hai mujhse tou koi khafa ho jata hai,
har baar dard ko apni agosh mein liye merra naya saal aata hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2011, 12:54:19 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2011, 01:09:24 PM »
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Quote from: ruku on January 07, 2011, 12:54:19 PM
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Thnx ruku...
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2011, 01:10:09 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 07, 2011, 12:55:36 PM
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kya hua nirala ji..kuch kaha nhi...  icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2011, 01:43:27 PM »
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kya  kahta mai Broknluv ji--
aapki peshkash ne to azeeb sa feel de diya.
uff ye haal e dil ka bayan.
ye kaha koi kavita hai--
ye to dil ki baat hai.
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thanx
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2011, 02:29:27 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 07, 2011, 01:43:27 PM
kya  kahta mai Broknluv ji--
aapki peshkash ne to azeeb sa feel de diya.
uff ye haal e dil ka bayan.
ye kaha koi kavita hai--
ye to dil ki baat hai.
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thanx
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Ohh aesa hi sorry ji apko bad feel karwane ka koi irada nhi tha...
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2011, 03:23:16 PM »
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bad kahan feel kiya.
kya mast likha aapne .
maza aa gaya--
socho kitna ehsaas hai.
achha lagta hai mujhe kuki
mai to aisa likh nahi sakta
hehehe issliye
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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2011, 03:29:49 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 07, 2011, 03:23:16 PM
bad kahan feel kiya.
kya mast likha aapne .
maza aa gaya--
socho kitna ehsaas hai.
achha lagta hai mujhe kuki
mai to aisa likh nahi sakta
hehehe issliye
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thanx
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Aesa nhi hai aap bahut umda likhte hai..shukriya itni taarif karne k liye...
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«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2011, 03:40:09 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 07, 2011, 12:51:10 PM


Band ankho mein tumhare sapne aate hai
khuli ankho mein tumhara khayal aata hai,

dhundhti rehti hu har nafs taqdir k uljhe sawalo ko,
jawab milne se pehle hi har dafa ek naya sawal aata hai,

zindgi sulagti rehti hai dhadkane uljhati rehti hai,
tumhari yado ka bawander bite lamho ka malaal aata hai,

ansu dariya ban jab girte hai nigaho se ek pal mein toot jati hu,
phir sochti hu jab tumhe tou gum mein dooba tumhara haal aata hai,

mhbt ki dori bandhi hai jisse kabhi kabhi vo jane kahan gum ho jata hai,
pal pal theher theher k tanahiyo ka manzar bhi kya kamaal aata hai,

koi bichad jata hai mujhse tou koi khafa ho jata hai,
har baar dard ko apni agosh mein liye merra naya saal aata hai.........










Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahuttttt bahuttt Khoob Geetji..

Humesha Di Tarah Lajawaab!!!!

par Main Te humesha Ehi chaavanga Ke tussi humesha Khush Raho Aur har Naya saal Khobbsurat Ranga Naal Sajeya Ho..Rab Raakha!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: January 07, 2011, 03:44:22 PM »
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ohhh geet ji.........

no words for it.........

bas padta rah gaya...jaan hi nikal ke rakh di........

har para apne aap me dard ki misaal he........

tussi cha gaye ji.......gajab ka dard baya kiya he...superb
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«Reply #11 on: January 07, 2011, 06:59:16 PM »
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BBL jee Aadaab!

Very nice thoughts and expression...
Keep writting keep posting.....

Khush o aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez......Usual Smile           



         
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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2011, 07:13:04 PM »
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Jahan mei manoj mere aksar bus ek yehi shawaal aata hai
duao se bhi meri kismat ka tala kyu khul nahi paata hai

khayal jab kabhi kisi acche shayer ki jindgi per jaata hai
mujse to haale dil unka bus behaal sa he nazer aata hai

dekh chuka hu mei to itne gum apni jara si jindgani mei
chahakar bhi kabhi ek aansu nahi meri  aankh se aata hai

Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 07, 2011, 12:51:10 PM


Band ankho mein tumhare sapne aate hai
khuli ankho mein tumhara khayal aata hai,

dhundhti rehti hu har nafs taqdir k uljhe sawalo ko,
jawab milne se pehle hi har dafa ek naya sawal aata hai,

zindgi sulagti rehti hai dhadkane uljhati rehti hai,
tumhari yado ka bawander bite lamho ka malaal aata hai,

ansu dariya ban jab girte hai nigaho se ek pal mein toot jati hu,
phir sochti hu jab tumhe tou gum mein dooba tumhara haal aata hai,

mhbt ki dori bandhi hai jisse kabhi kabhi vo jane kahan gum ho jata hai,
pal pal theher theher k tanahiyo ka manzar bhi kya kamaal aata hai,

koi bichad jata hai mujhse tou koi khafa ho jata hai,
har baar dard ko apni agosh mein liye merra naya saal aata hai.........
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«Reply #13 on: January 07, 2011, 10:20:12 PM »
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Khub likha hai di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: January 08, 2011, 10:25:26 AM »
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bht khoob geet ji...
specially 2nd one
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