Merra naya saal...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on January 07, 2011, 12:51:10 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 09, 2011, 11:59:41 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 07, 2011, 03:40:09 PM
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Bahuttttt bahuttt Khoob Geetji..

Humesha Di Tarah Lajawaab!!!!

par Main Te humesha Ehi chaavanga Ke tussi humesha Khush Raho Aur har Naya saal Khobbsurat Ranga Naal Sajeya Ho..Rab Raakha!!!!

Bahut shukriya khwaish ji..ki kawa hun rab kare tuadi dua kubul ho ji...khushiya da te intezar mainu vi hai..
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«Reply #16 on: January 09, 2011, 12:05:15 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on January 07, 2011, 03:44:22 PM
ohhh geet ji.........

no words for it.........

bas padta rah gaya...jaan hi nikal ke rakh di........

har para apne aap me dard ki misaal he........

tussi cha gaye ji.......gajab ka dard baya kiya he...superb

Tahe dil se apka shukriya matrix ji....
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«Reply #17 on: January 09, 2011, 12:06:22 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 07, 2011, 06:59:16 PM
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BBL jee Aadaab!

Very nice thoughts and expression...
Keep writting keep posting.....

Khush o aabad rahiye....
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Adaab parwaz ji..bahut bahut shukriya merri kavita ko pasand krne k liye...
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«Reply #18 on: January 09, 2011, 12:06:59 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on January 07, 2011, 07:13:04 PM
Jahan mei manoj mere aksar bus ek yehi shawaal aata hai
duao se bhi meri kismat ka tala kyu khul nahi paata hai

khayal jab kabhi kisi acche shayer ki jindgi per jaata hai
mujse to haale dil unka bus behaal sa he nazer aata hai

dekh chuka hu mei to itne gum apni jara si jindgani mei
chahakar bhi kabhi ek aansu nahi meri  aankh se aata hai

Bahut khoob likha hai manoj ji.
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«Reply #19 on: January 09, 2011, 12:08:44 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 07, 2011, 08:43:21 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv...


Khuda Apako Shad o Aabad Rakhe...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~
Shukriya shihab ji...
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«Reply #20 on: January 09, 2011, 12:09:18 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on January 07, 2011, 10:20:12 PM
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Khub likha hai di..
Khush rahiye..!
Shukriya rahim...
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«Reply #21 on: January 09, 2011, 12:09:45 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on January 08, 2011, 10:25:26 AM
bht khoob geet ji...
specially 2nd one

Shukriya priya ji...
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«Reply #22 on: January 09, 2011, 12:11:36 PM »
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wah geet ji.
aapne ek baar fir dard e dil
saamne beth kar bayan kiya.
wahi feel fir se.
bas kya kahun ab.
khus rahiye
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«Reply #23 on: January 09, 2011, 12:14:11 PM »
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Shukriya killbill ji...
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«Reply #24 on: January 09, 2011, 02:27:58 PM »
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wwah wah bahut khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #25 on: January 11, 2011, 08:44:06 AM »
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Bahut Khub Geet  Ji
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«Reply #26 on: January 11, 2011, 01:10:36 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya parinde ji n rishi ji...
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«Reply #27 on: April 25, 2012, 07:06:31 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai... dard me doobi aapki ye daastaan dil ko chhuuu gayi....!!!
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