Merri kahani merra kissa...

by brokenbyluv on March 19, 2010, 05:54:33 PM
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Ae shakhs tu aaj merre alfazo ko padh raha hai,
per zara inki gehrai ko dekhna,

yu mat uda merre jazbato ko hasi mein,
merre ankahe dard ko dekhna,

kuch nhi hai merre paas sirrf in lafzo k,
merre likhe in ehsaso ko dekhna,

shayad hi koi aaj tak mujhe jaan paya hai,
tu padhke ise merre toote hue khuabo ko dekhna,

maine kisi ko dhokha nhi diya kabhi,
phir bhi mujhpe lage ilzamo ko dekhna,

poori zindgi bus pyar hi merri manzil raha hai,
per jane kitno ne merre dil se khela..
tu kabhi unme merri barbadi ko dekhna,

keh lo tum bhi gunehgar mujhe per..
EK BAR TUM MERRI NAZRO MEIN MERRE LACHAAR HALAATO KO DEKHNA......
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2010, 06:55:11 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2010, 07:03:25 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2010, 08:26:04 PM »
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Very touchy behad umda awsome... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2010, 08:33:10 PM »
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thnx pari ji...
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2010, 03:48:26 PM »
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Toooooooo toooooooooooo goooood..........bahut bahut bahut hiiiiiiiiiii pyare aur dil ko chune waale alfaaz likhe hai aapne.......behtrin.......umda......
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2010, 03:55:18 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai geet .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2010, 03:58:32 PM »
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Tahe dil se apka shukriya nikhar ji n sophiji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2010, 04:13:42 PM »
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Nice creation BBL. Ahsaasaat ko badi khubsurti se lafzon mein piroya.
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2010, 04:16:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya riyaz ji...
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2010, 04:17:19 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji..

Apaki Likhi Har Kalaam Dil Ko Chu Rahi hai..Bahut Jazbaati Aur Khoobsurat Peshkash..Bhaut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2010, 06:15:25 PM »
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itni tarif karne k liye bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji..
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«Reply #12 on: March 20, 2010, 09:24:04 PM »
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Good Job Brokenbyluv Ji
Badi Hi Sadgi Aur Khoobsurti Se
Aapne Haal e Dil Ko Shabdon Men Piroya Hai.
Aapki Bechaini Aapka Dard Hume Aapke Shabdon
Ke Zariye Mehsoos Hua...Bahut Khub Ji... Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 20, 2010, 11:14:26 PM »
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Great work Geet ji.dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.wonderful creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:keep it up. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: March 22, 2010, 10:38:38 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya hum dum ji n madhu ji,...
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