Merri kahani merra kissa...

by brokenbyluv on March 19, 2010, 05:54:33 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 22, 2010, 08:04:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji...
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«Reply #16 on: March 23, 2010, 09:25:36 AM »
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Sakhee ye Kiski kahani hai ye kis ka kissa hai...
Kalpana teri hai,par nari ka kirdaar kamjor hai....

"poori zindgi bus pyar hi merri manzil raha hai,
per jane kitno ne merre dil se khela..
tu kabhi unme merri barbadi ko dekhna,"

Di ye line kuchh jami nahi.....
Log tou ek thoker se sambhal jaate hain...
Phir baat kitno tak kaise pahunchi...
Mazaak hai kya har-koi naari k dil se khelta chala jaayega....
Nari ko bahut kamjor dikhaya hai aapki is line ne....
khilona banaa k rakh diya hai naari ko......

Sorry kuchh jayada likh diya ho tou maaf karna.....

Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 19, 2010, 05:54:33 PM
Ae shakhs tu aaj merre alfazo ko padh raha hai,
per zara inki gehrai ko dekhna,

yu mat uda merre jazbato ko hasi mein,
merre ankahe dard ko dekhna,

kuch nhi hai merre paas sirrf in lafzo k,
merre likhe in ehsaso ko dekhna,

shayad hi koi aaj tak mujhe jaan paya hai,
tu padhke ise merre toote hue khuabo ko dekhna,

maine kisi ko dhokha nhi diya kabhi,
phir bhi mujhpe lage ilzamo ko dekhna,

poori zindgi bus pyar hi merri manzil raha hai,
per jane kitno ne merre dil se khela..
tu kabhi unme merri barbadi ko dekhna,

keh lo tum bhi gunehgar mujhe per..
EK BAR TUM MERRI NAZRO MEIN MERRE LACHAAR HALAATO KO DEKHNA......
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«Reply #17 on: March 23, 2010, 09:56:22 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 19, 2010, 05:54:33 PM
Ae shakhs tu aaj merre alfazo ko padh raha hai,
per zara inki gehrai ko dekhna,

yu mat uda merre jazbato ko hasi mein,
merre ankahe dard ko dekhna,

kuch nhi hai merre paas sirrf in lafzo k,
merre likhe in ehsaso ko dekhna,

shayad hi koi aaj tak mujhe jaan paya hai,
tu padhke ise merre toote hue khuabo ko dekhna,

maine kisi ko dhokha nhi diya kabhi,
phir bhi mujhpe lage ilzamo ko dekhna,

poori zindgi bus pyar hi merri manzil raha hai,
per jane kitno ne merre dil se khela..
tu kabhi unme merri barbadi ko dekhna,

keh lo tum bhi gunehgar mujhe per..
EK BAR TUM MERRI NAZRO MEIN MERRE LACHAAR HALAATO KO DEKHNA......

Bahut khoob Geet ji
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«Reply #18 on: March 23, 2010, 12:36:35 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 19, 2010, 05:54:33 PM
Ae shakhs tu aaj merre alfazo ko padh raha hai,
per zara inki gehrai ko dekhna,

yu mat uda merre jazbato ko hasi mein,
merre ankahe dard ko dekhna,

kuch nhi hai merre paas sirrf in lafzo k,
merre likhe in ehsaso ko dekhna,

shayad hi koi aaj tak mujhe jaan paya hai,
tu padhke ise merre toote hue khuabo ko dekhna,

maine kisi ko dhokha nhi diya kabhi,
phir bhi mujhpe lage ilzamo ko dekhna,

poori zindgi bus pyar hi merri manzil raha hai,
per jane kitno ne merre dil se khela..
tu kabhi unme merri barbadi ko dekhna,

keh lo tum bhi gunehgar mujhe per..
EK BAR TUM MERRI NAZRO MEIN MERRE LACHAAR HALAATO KO DEKHNA......

Bohot Khoob BBL Ji
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«Reply #19 on: March 23, 2010, 01:07:04 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB BBL JI. JI  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #20 on: March 23, 2010, 11:13:27 PM »
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Bahut khoobsoorti se aapne dil k ehsaas ko shabdon me utaara hai....Bahut Khoob...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: March 24, 2010, 06:23:42 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 23, 2010, 09:25:36 AM
Sakhee ye Kiski kahani hai ye kis ka kissa hai...
Kalpana teri hai,par nari ka kirdaar kamjor hai....

"poori zindgi bus pyar hi merri manzil raha hai,
per jane kitno ne merre dil se khela..
tu kabhi unme merri barbadi ko dekhna,"

Di ye line kuchh jami nahi.....
Log tou ek thoker se sambhal jaate hain...
Phir baat kitno tak kaise pahunchi...
Mazaak hai kya har-koi naari k dil se khelta chala jaayega....
Nari ko bahut kamjor dikhaya hai aapki is line ne....
khilona banaa k rakh diya hai naari ko......

Sorry kuchh jayada likh diya ho tou maaf karna.....

nhi sweety sorry ki koi bat nhi hai..
"JANE KITNO NE MERRE DIL SE KHELA"

Is line mein main har us shakhs ki baat kar rahi hu jo kareeb aa kar logo ko apne keh kar unke jazbaato se khelte hai..aur vo koi bhi ho sakte hai koi dosi,lover,ghar wale ya baharwale..kayi baar apne kehne wale bhi piche se vaar karne se nhi chukte aur aese dhokhe kayi baar ek hi waqt pe mil jate hai tou aese mein kis kis ko parkhe insaan...iss kavita mein maine naari ka kirdar kamzor nhi dikaya..bus ye un logo k liye likha hai jo kayi baar smjh kar bhi kuch nhi smjhte aur aksar khamosh rehne wale log duniya mein ek bhada MAZAAK ban kar reh jate hai..

Ek khamosh shakhs k benaam se dard ko lafzo mein utarne ki koshish ki hai maine..nywayz thnx alot for ur suggestion n comment...take cre...
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«Reply #22 on: March 24, 2010, 06:26:14 PM »
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marvellous
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #23 on: March 24, 2010, 06:29:51 PM »
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Tahe dil se apka shukriya rajesh ji,celmira ji,suresh ji,klaskar ji n reaper ji...notworthy
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«Reply #24 on: March 25, 2010, 11:59:12 AM »
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Thanks for explanation Geet-di....
sahi hai mai us angle se nahi soch payee.....
Main tou PYARR K ek he ANGLE se soch rahi thee.....

Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 24, 2010, 06:23:42 PM
nhi sweety sorry ki koi bat nhi hai..
"JANE KITNO NE MERRE DIL SE KHELA"

Is line mein main har us shakhs ki baat kar rahi hu jo kareeb aa kar logo ko apne keh kar unke jazbaato se khelte hai..aur vo koi bhi ho sakte hai koi dosi,lover,ghar wale ya baharwale..kayi baar apne kehne wale bhi piche se vaar karne se nhi chukte aur aese dhokhe kayi baar ek hi waqt pe mil jate hai tou aese mein kis kis ko parkhe insaan...iss kavita mein maine naari ka kirdar kamzor nhi dikaya..bus ye un logo k liye likha hai jo kayi baar smjh kar bhi kuch nhi smjhte aur aksar khamosh rehne wale log duniya mein ek bhada MAZAAK ban kar reh jate hai..

Ek khamosh shakhs k benaam se dard ko lafzo mein utarne ki koshish ki hai maine..nywayz thnx alot for ur suggestion n comment...take cre...
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«Reply #25 on: March 25, 2010, 05:58:42 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 25, 2010, 11:59:12 AM
Thanks for explanation Geet-di....
sahi hai mai us angle se nahi soch payee.....
Main tou PYARR K ek he ANGLE se soch rahi thee.....


Koi baat nhi hota hai sweetu..take cre...n again thnx for luvly comment...
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«Reply #26 on: March 28, 2010, 07:25:07 AM »
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Really a wonderful creation. It touched the heart!
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«Reply #27 on: March 29, 2010, 08:28:45 AM »
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Thnx alot agp ji...
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