Mhbt ki nishani hai....

by brokenbyluv on December 17, 2010, 02:03:10 PM
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Mhbt jab do tarfa hoti hai tabhi poori hoti hai,
maine hamesha ek tarfa mhbt ki thi,

chaha tha jise bhi poore dil se maine,
usne mujhe tohfe mein ruswai di thi,

koi sawal na kiya maine kyunki jawab dene wala na tha,
dubti rahi main mujhe bachane wala na tha,

kayi martaba khud ko tut'te dekha hai maine,
khud ko manane k liye khud se ruthte dekha hai maine,

aaina dekhti hu tou kayi chehre nazar aate hai,
kabhi rulate hai dariya ki tarah kabhi inteha tak hasate hai,

main kya batau dosto ki kya merri kahani hai,
bus aaj jo merri zindgi hai vo kisi ki bepanah mhbt ki nishani hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2010, 02:09:39 PM »
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brknlv ji...........kya kahu.....bas rula diya apne ......itna katil likha he ki bas bar bar padte raho.........

ek choti si koshish ki he apke hi rhythm me likhne ki jaha apne khatam kiya tha wahi se...umiid he apko pasand ayega

apni zindagi ki to bas itni si kahani he
ek dard-e-dil he aur ankho se bahta pani he

jane kya rishta he is ehsaas ka meri umarrr se khuda
jise log kahte daur-e-jawani he

kya mila kya khoya ye na pucho ab humse
hume to har haal me mohhabat nibhani he

zid samjo to zid aur junun samjo to bhi he kubul
meri zindagi to bas kisi ki bepanaah mohhabat ki nishani he
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2010, 02:22:51 PM »
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wah wah ----
broken by luv aapki kahani to sachhi hai aur itni masumiyat se likha aapne Superb -- aur haan mene apna Hat utar ke Badhai di abhi aapko.
duaon ke saath Khus rahiye.
+++Matrix ji aapne bhi kamaal kar dia---bahut sundar likha aisa laga bas kisi ek ne hi likha hai...aapko dil se 5 kilo daad hai mera.
++++soch raha hu iss rachna ko mai bhi thoda aage badhau-!!!!!!   
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2010, 02:25:18 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 17, 2010, 02:03:10 PM
Mhbt jab do tarfa hoti hai tabhi poori hoti hai,
maine hamesha ek tarfa mhbt ki thi,

chaha tha jise bhi poore dil se maine,
usne mujhe tohfe mein ruswai di thi,

koi sawal na kiya maine kyunki jawab dene wala na raha,
dubti rahi main mujhe bachane wala na raha,

kayi martaba khud ko tut'te dekha hai maine,
khud ko manane k liye khud se ruthte dekha hai maine,

aaina dekhti hu tou kayi chehre nazar aate hai,
kabhi rulate hai dariya ki tarah kabhi inteha tak hasate hai,

main kya batau dosto ki kya merri kahani hai,
bus aaj jo merri zindgi hai vo kisi ki bepanah mhbt ki nishani hai.........



khoobsurati si likhi gayi
padkar achha laga

Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2010, 02:51:05 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on December 17, 2010, 02:09:39 PM
brknlv ji...........kya kahu.....bas rula diya apne ......itna katil likha he ki bas bar bar padte raho.........

ek choti si koshish ki he apke hi rhythm me likhne ki jaha apne khatam kiya tha wahi se...umiid he apko pasand ayega

apni zindagi ki to bas itni si kahani he
ek dard-e-dil he aur ankho se bahta pani he

jane kya rishta he is ehsaas ka meri umarrr se khuda
jise log kahte daur-e-jawani he

kya mila kya khoya ye na pucho ab humse
hume to har haal me mohhabat nibhani he

zid samjo to zid aur junun samjo to bhi he kubul
meri zindagi to bas kisi ki bepanaah mohhabat ki nishani he

Tahe dil se apka shukriya matrix ji..behad khubsurat lafz likhe hai apne..bahut bahut shukriya ek baar phir se...Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2010, 02:52:00 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on December 17, 2010, 02:22:51 PM
wah wah ----
broken by luv aapki kahani to sachhi hai aur itni masumiyat se likha aapne Superb -- aur haan mene apna Hat utar ke Badhai di abhi aapko.
duaon ke saath Khus rahiye.
+++Matrix ji aapne bhi kamaal kar dia---bahut sundar likha aisa laga bas kisi ek ne hi likha hai...aapko dil se 5 kilo daad hai mera.
++++soch raha hu iss rachna ko mai bhi thoda aage badhau-!!!!!!   



Quote from: thegrimreaper on December 17, 2010, 02:25:18 PM
khoobsurati si likhi gayi
padkar achha laga

Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut shukriya nirala ji aur reaper ji...
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2010, 04:42:17 PM »
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BBl jee Aadaab!

Kafi khubsurti se aapne dil ke ahsaasat bayaaN kiye hai...
Sabhi khayaal umdaaH hai.....

Hume aapke yeH do ashaar behad khoob lage...
Dil se daad kabool kijiye.....

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile           


Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 17, 2010, 02:03:10 PM



kayi martaba khud ko tut'te dekha hai maine,
khud ko manane k liye khud se ruthte dekha hai maine,

aaina dekhti hu tou kayi chehre nazar aate hai,
kabhi rulate hai dariya ki tarah kabhi inteha tak hasate hai



These lines are realy Mindblowing.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause           
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2010, 06:02:10 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 17, 2010, 02:03:10 PM


Mhbt jab do tarfa hoti hai tabhi poori hoti hai,
maine hamesha ek tarfa mhbt ki thi,

chaha tha jise bhi poore dil se maine,
usne mujhe tohfe mein ruswai di thi,

koi sawal na kiya maine kyunki jawab dene wala na tha,
dubti rahi main mujhe bachane wala na tha,

kayi martaba khud ko tut'te dekha hai maine,
khud ko manane k liye khud se ruthte dekha hai maine,

aaina dekhti hu tou kayi chehre nazar aate hai,
kabhi rulate hai dariya ki tarah kabhi inteha tak hasate hai,

main kya batau dosto ki kya merri kahani hai,
bus aaj jo merri zindgi hai vo kisi ki bepanah mhbt ki nishani hai.........



Bahut khoob Geet Ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2010, 03:38:11 AM »
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as slamu ale kum

 

Zindgi ki raah mei chale gaye sehte gaye

Gam mila khushiyan mili ham to bas hans te gaye

 

Seaj phoolon ki thi ham hans te rahe khil te rahe

Par chubhan kanton ki bhi hans -hans ke ham sehte gaye

 

Phool murjhayei hei  khali aaj dekho khaar hei

Zindgi bhar ham to kanton par hi bas chalete gaye

 

(bibbo) phir bhi khush hi rehti raaz kya he ye bataa

gale dono ko lagaaya khushiyan gam hans te  gaye

 

apna khayal rakhna

ALLAH HAFIZ

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«Reply #9 on: December 18, 2010, 07:20:36 AM »
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superb lines geet ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 18, 2010, 07:28:23 AM »
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baht hi umda peshkash h ji keep writting
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«Reply #11 on: December 18, 2010, 02:21:26 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Geetji..Padhte-Padhte Yuh mehsoos Hua Jaise har Lafz Dil Se Nikal Ka Kalam Par Utra Ho..Bahut Ache

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Matrix Ji Aapne Bhi khoob Likha  Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: December 18, 2010, 02:23:57 PM »
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Bahut hi sunder likha hai aapne ji padhkar accha laga
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«Reply #13 on: December 19, 2010, 07:19:47 AM »
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very good.............................. mera b yahi haal hai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2010, 11:12:25 AM »
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mast likha hai ji Applause Applause Applause

its really heart-touching  Crying
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