Mil mil kar Bichardna

by Pooja on March 24, 2009, 06:11:43 PM
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Mil kar hamesha ke liye bichard jaate to acha tha
Mil mil kar,  baar baar  ka Bichardna seha nahi jaata

Na bas main tere, na bas main mere
Itna bebas hokar bhi, raha nahi jaata

Khamoshi kahti hai jo, sun.ne ka honslla nahi
Apne he honsallo ko ab, Mujhse ajmaya nahi jaata

Yah kis raah per nikal aaye ab hum dono sathi
Jahan na juda hone ki kasam, aor sath bhi nibhaya nahi jaata!!

Mil kar hamesha ke liye bichard jaate to acha tha
Mil mil kar,  baar baar  ka Bichardna seha nahi jaata…………
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2009, 06:13:44 PM »
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Bohot din baad aapne kuch likha !! Bohot Khoob Pooja!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2009, 06:40:18 PM »
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wah pooja, wah, bahut khoob, bahut dard meh likha hai aap ney


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«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2009, 07:28:11 PM »
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Thanks Celmira and Jas ji!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2009, 07:31:39 PM »
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Asaan se akhsaro mein Sachai ko bayaan kiya hai aapne Pooja..

sach mein Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha hai aapne..3rd aur 4rth sher to lajaawab hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2009, 11:57:55 PM »
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Well done pooja ji, u write a beautiful poem, hope u will contiue this poem with more beautiful words.
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2009, 01:45:15 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on March 24, 2009, 06:11:43 PM
Mil kar hamesha ke liye bichard jaate to acha tha
Mil mil kar,  baar baar  ka Bichardna seha nahi jaata

Na bas main tere, na bas main mere
Itna bebas hokar bhi, raha nahi jaata

Khamoshi kahti hai jo, sun.ne ka honslla nahi
Apne he honsallo ko ab, Mujhse ajmaya nahi jaata

Yah kis raah per nikal aaye ab hum dono sathi
Jahan na juda hone ki kasam, aor sath bhi nibhaya nahi jaata!!

Mil kar hamesha ke liye bichard jaate to acha tha
Mil mil kar,  baar baar  ka Bichardna seha nahi jaata…………


 Applause Applause
Simply good Pooja di... As Persant Roy said... Me too expect you to continue this with yr wonderful wordings..
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«Reply #7 on: March 27, 2009, 06:22:02 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 24, 2009, 07:31:39 PM
Asaan se akhsaro mein Sachai ko bayaan kiya hai aapne Pooja..

sach mein Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha hai aapne..3rd aur 4rth sher to lajaawab hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thansk Khwaish ji.. magar ajj kal apka sath nahi mil raha hai ki maina gge bhi kuch aor likh saku... Shikayat nahi ki.. bas man ki baat kahi hai!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2009, 06:22:26 PM »
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Quote from: Persant Roy on March 25, 2009, 11:57:55 PM
Well done pooja ji, u write a beautiful poem, hope u will contiue this poem with more beautiful words.

Shukaria Roy ji!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2009, 06:23:03 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 26, 2009, 01:45:15 AM
Applause Applause
Simply good Pooja di... As Persant Roy said... Me too expect you to continue this with yr wonderful wordings..


Thansk Roja!! Magar agge likhne ke liye sath chahiye hota hai.. jo ajj kal Yoindia per bahoot kam mil raha hai!!
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«Reply #10 on: March 28, 2009, 12:41:23 AM »
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"Na Chupana koi baat Dil me ho agar,
Rakna thoda bharosa Aap humpar,
Hum nibhaege Ei.s rishte ko is kadar,
ki bhulane par bi na bhula paoge hume zindgi bhar"
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«Reply #11 on: March 28, 2009, 02:42:23 AM »
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Thansk Roja!! Magar agge likhne ke liye sath chahiye hota hai.. jo ajj kal Yoindia per bahoot kam mil raha hai!!

Mai hu na  Winking
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«Reply #12 on: March 28, 2009, 02:46:01 AM »
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Fursat nikal kar kabhi hame apne dil ki baat toh batao
Tumhari nazron mein aakhir kya hai hamari aukaad toh batao..

Tumhare khaton ke zariye ab dil behelta nahi hai hamara
Yu mil mil kar bichardana manzur nahi hai hame..

Gunjarish itni hai tumse sanam, kab hogi mulaqat toh batao.. sad7
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«Reply #13 on: March 30, 2009, 07:13:46 PM »
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WAH KAY ABAAT HAI ROJA!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 06, 2009, 10:47:10 PM »
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dil-e-haal sunaya nahi jaata
khud se khud ko samjhaya nahi jaata

ek mrigchika si ban gai hai khushia
kaya such hai kaya jhooth, antar batlaya nahi jaata

Mil kar bichard jaate hai kuch sathi jeevan main
mil jaaye jab wo phir se, shabdo main haal sunaya nahi jaata
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