Mizaz-e-basar:Shairi - E

saaz_haldwanvi

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Woh apne dil ki karta raha
Kahne wala bas kahta raha,

Woh mashware baham karte rahe [baham - aapas main]
Aawaam musalsal jalta raha,

Natvani hai roti uski [natvani - kamjori,majboori]
Woh dekhta raha sahta raha

Is baras vaadon ke mausam mein
Shahar bhar dhu_an ud_ta raha,

[Ta-umr dono apni zid ke sath rahe]
[Ek kahta raha duja sunta raha,]

Baad mere meri achhaiyon ka
Kissa der tak chalta raha,

Do pal chain ki khatir bashar
Tamam umr bad-hawas bhagta raha,

Jindgi ka haNsil kya ho'saaz'
ki main to bas yuN hi jita raha,
'saaz haldwanvi'written on 21 jan 00


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k.shael

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Re: Mizaz-e-basar

«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2009, 06:56:46 AM »

Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on May 06, 2009, 06:42:13 AM

Woh apne dil ki karta raha
Kahne wala bas kahta raha,

Woh mashware baham karte rahe [baham - aapas main]
Aawaam musalsal jalta raha,

Natvani hai roti uski [natvani - kamjori,majboori]
Woh dekhta raha sahta raha

Is baras vaadon ke mausam mein
Shahar bhar dhu_an ud_ta raha,

Ta-umr dono apni zid ke sath rahe
Ek kahta raha duja sunta raha,

Baad mere meri achhaiyon ka
Kissa der tak chalta raha,

Do pal chain ki khatir bashar
Tamam umr bad-hawas bhagta raha,

Jindgi ka haasil kya ho"saaz"
Main to bas yu hi gujarta raha
'saaz haldwanvi'written on 21 jan 00

Bahut Khoob Saaj Ji,

Zindagi ki sachayi ko parbashit kiya hai aapki lines ne,

Umda Work...

Shally.


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deepika_divya

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Re: Mizaz-e-basar

«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2009, 09:01:54 AM »

bahoot khoob Saaz ji.. Keep writing...


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saaz_haldwanvi

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Re: Mizaz-e-basar

«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2009, 06:56:21 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on May 06, 2009, 06:56:46 AM

Bahut Khoob Saaj Ji,

Zindagi ki sachayi ko parbashit kiya hai aapki lines ne,

Umda Work...honsla afjayi k liye shukriya shael

Shally.


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shab

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Re: Mizaz-e-basar

«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2009, 07:58:03 AM »

lajawaab qalaam Saaz ji


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saaz_haldwanvi

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Re: Mizaz-e-basar

«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2009, 05:12:03 AM »

Quote from: shab on June 15, 2009, 07:58:03 AM

lajawaab qalaam Saaz ji

shukriya shab ji


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madhuwesh

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Re: Mizaz-e-basar

«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2009, 05:20:40 AM »

Wah wah Saaz ji,very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley


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saaz_haldwanvi

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Re: Mizaz-e-basar

«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2009, 04:57:11 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 26, 2009, 05:20:40 AM

Wah wah Saaz ji,very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley

jarre-nawaji ka shukriya madhu ji


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