Mujhe ab aaina bhi, sach ugalta sa nahi dikhta,-Beete palon ke saaye- 1998

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«Reply #15 on: August 01, 2013, 01:05:45 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah ram saraswatji. bahut bahut bahut hi umda peshkash rahi. mujhe aapki yeh rachna bahut zyaada pasand aayi. sabhi ashaar gehre khayalon se saje hue hai. aur kuch ashaar dil ko ek dam se chhooo gaye. is khoobsurat kalaam par mere dil se dee gayi hazaron daad ko qubool kijiyega...
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«Reply #16 on: August 01, 2013, 04:10:12 PM »
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बहुत खूब....ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद खास तौर पर इस आशार के लिए

मुझे अब आईना  भी, सच उगलता सा नहीं दिखता,
या फिर उस से नज़र मेरी ही, खुद कतराने लगी है

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«Reply #18 on: August 01, 2013, 06:48:22 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: August 01, 2013, 09:05:26 PM »
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Dheron daaaad...
Bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #20 on: August 01, 2013, 09:08:41 PM »
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ram sahab wah wah wah......! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Bahut bahut shukriya Sebaji
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«Reply #21 on: August 01, 2013, 09:09:39 PM »
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wah Applause Applause
Bahut bahut Shukriya nandbahuji
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«Reply #22 on: August 01, 2013, 09:10:24 PM »
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waah waah mubarak ho sir ji
Bahut bahut shukriya Dr. Saini
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«Reply #23 on: August 01, 2013, 09:11:34 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah ram saraswatji. bahut bahut bahut hi umda peshkash rahi. mujhe aapki yeh rachna bahut zyaada pasand aayi. sabhi ashaar gehre khayalon se saje hue hai. aur kuch ashaar dil ko ek dam se chhooo gaye. is khoobsurat kalaam par mere dil se dee gayi hazaron daad ko qubool kijiyega...
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«Reply #24 on: August 01, 2013, 09:12:50 PM »
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बहुत खूब....ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद खास तौर पर इस आशार के लिए

मुझे अब आईना  भी, सच उगलता सा नहीं दिखता,
या फिर उस से नज़र मेरी ही, खुद कतराने लगी है

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bahut bahut shukriya Premdeepji
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Bahut bahut shukriya Hridayji
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waah waah sir bahut khoob, bahut badhiya.
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waah waah sir bahut khoob, bahut badhiya.
Bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #29 on: August 02, 2013, 06:21:31 PM »
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Mein tan se theek hoon, kamzori man mein aane lagi hai.
Mujeh dunia badalati si bhi , nazer aane  lagi     hai.
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Mera  man sochata kuchh aur, dil kuchh  aur kahata hai,
Samajh  per  soch  havi  ho, mujhe bahkane  lagi   hai.
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Wo perchhaiin sabhi beete palon  ki,kya  miliin  dekho,  
Meri aankhon ke aage,  dhundh ban kar  chhane lagi hai.
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Mujhe  chehre  sabhi, lagne lage  ab   ek   hi   jaise,
Nazar ka fair kahiye, aankh   dhoka  khaane  lagi  hai.
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Mujhe ab aaina bhi, sach  ugalta    sa   nahi  dikhta,
Ya fir us  se  nazer  meri hi, khud katrane  lagi  hai.
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Kabhi  dekha tha  hanste mujh  pe, meine is zamane ko,
Hansi  ab haal per apne, mujhe khud  aane  lagi   hai.  
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Mera bachapan  gaya  tha, khelate hanste  jawani   se,
Mujhe shak ”Ram” hai,chhup ker,jawani  jane lagi  hai.
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में  तन  से  ठीक हूँ, कमज़ोरी मन में आने लगी है.
मुझे  दुनिया  बदलती  सी भी , नज़र आने लगी है.
 
मेरा मन सोचता कुछ और , दिल कुछ और कहता है,
समझ पर सोच  हावी  हो , मुझे बहकाने  लगी   है.
 
वो परछाईं सभी बीते  पलों  की, क्या  मिलीं  देखो,
मेरी आँखों  के आगे,   धुंध बन कर  छाने लगी है.
 
मुझे  चेहरे सभी, लगने  लगे  अब एक  ही   जैसे ,
नज़र का फेर  कहिये, आंख धोका  खाने  लगी  है.
 
मुझे अब आईना  भी, सच उगलता सा नहीं दिखता,
या फिर उस से नज़र मेरी ही, खुद कतराने लगी है.
 
कभी देखा था हंसते मुझ  पर, मैने इस ज़माने को,
हंसी अब हाल पर अपने, मुझे खुद आने लगी   है.
 
मेरा बचपन  गया  था, खेलते  हंसते जवानी  से,
मुझे शक "राम" है, छुप कर,जवानी जाने लगी है.
 


waah waah ram sahab.. bahut bahut aur bahut umda pesh kash.. Usual Smile

har sher ek se badkar ek..

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aise hi likhte rahe..
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