MUJHE ZAMAANAA KAR DIYAA.... "MohanN"

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Two versions of the same idea.

1. TEREE YAAD NE MUJH KO DUNIYA SE BEGAANAA KAR DIYAA,
    MERII BEGAANGEE KE SADKE, MUJHE ZAMAANAA KAR DIYAA!


2. UNH KEE YAAD MUJHE KYAA AAYEE, KE MAIN BEGAANAA HO GAYAA,
    ZAMAANAA BAA.KHABAR KYAA HUAA, MAIN ZAMAANAA HO GAYAA! 


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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2015, 03:50:43 AM »
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वाह! surindar ji .... वाह! ... दोनों ही लाज़वाब version अर्ज किये आपने।
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2015, 06:07:10 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

वाह! surindar ji .... वाह! ... दोनों ही लाज़वाब version अर्ज किये आपने।
bahut shukria JayRoy Sahib.
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2015, 03:03:50 PM »
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Two versions of the same idea.

1. TEREE YAAD NE MUJH KO DUNIYA SE BEGAANAA KAR DIYAA,
    MERII BEGAANGEE KE SADKE, MUJHE ZAMAANAA KAR DIYAA!


2. UNH KEE YAAD MUJHE KYAA AAYEE, KE MAIN BEGAANAA HO GAYAA,
    ZAMAANAA BAA.KHABAR KYAA HUAA, MAIN ZAMAANAA HO GAYAA! 


Surindar.N                                           "MohanN"

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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2015, 06:05:37 PM »
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