Mujhse Meri Tanhai Naa Cheeno "Khwaish"

by khwaish on August 10, 2012, 04:42:47 PM
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Gair Parro Par Udd Sakte Ho, Had Se Had DeewaroN Tak
Aasman Par Waheen Udega Jiske Apne Par Honge...


Sirf Ro Dene  Se Zindagi Men Guzaara Nahi Hota
Koi Itna Bhi Majbooriyon Ka Maara Nahi Hota

Halaat Aksar Badal The Rehte HaiN Insaan ke
Khuda Ke Ilaawa Koi Kisi Ka Sahaara Nahi Hota

Dard-o-Gham Se Kabhi Kuch Bhi Nahi Haasil
Har Kashti Ke Taqdeer Men Kinaara Nahi Hota

Musaafir Hoon Chalta Rehta Hoon Har Haal Men
Naa Rukhta Kabhi, Agar Kisi Ne Pukaara Nahi Hota

Mujhse Meri Tanhai Naa Cheeno Tum, Khuda ke Liye
Har Tanha Rehna Wala Insaan Awaara Nahi Hota

"Khwaish" Dil Men Samundar Ki Gehrai Rakhta Hai...!!!!
Woh Khaak Likh Paayega Jo Dard Ka Maara Nahi Hota


          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2012, 04:47:22 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB BAHUT HI LAJAWAB KALAAM DHERO DDAD AUR MUBARAKBAD KHAWAHISH JI.... WAISE TO PURI RACHNA HI LAJWAB HAI PAR  MUJHE DO SHER BAHUT JYADA UMDA LAGE........

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Halaat Aksar Badal The Rehte Hai Insaan ke
Khuda Ke Ilaawa Koi Kisi Ka Sahaara Nahi Hota

Mujhse Meri Tanhai Naa Cheeno Tum, Khuda ke Liye
Har Tanha Rehna Wala Insaan Awaara Nahi Hota



          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~[/i][/b]
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2012, 04:49:52 PM »
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wah wah wah

waah ...kya baat hai khwaish jee

bahut umda likha hai...jindgee kee gahraaiyo ko bakhoobi utaara hai aapne kaagaj par..jitnee bhi taareef kee jaaye kam hai.
har ashaar...ek nayee kahani kahta hua...
seedhe dil pe asar karta huaa.
behatreen...nihayat shaandaar kalaam..
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2012, 05:40:06 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2012, 05:46:07 PM »
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Excelent khowaish ji   bahut bahut umda kalam pesh kiya h aap ne.... TANHAIYO ME RAHNE WALA HER INSAAN AWARA NHI HOTA MAT POOCHO MERI TANHAI KA ALAM KHOWAHIS DUNYA ME HER KISI KO MAHFILO M RAHNA KA DHIKANA NHI MILTA  ...~m.a~...
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2012, 07:25:08 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 10, 2012, 04:42:47 PM
Gair Parro Par Udd Sakte Ho, Had Se Had DeewaroN Tak
Aasman Par Waheen Udega Jiske Apne Par Honge...


Sirf Ro Dene  Se Zindagi Men Guzaara Nahi Hota
Koi Itna Bhi Majbooriyon Ka Maara Nahi Hota

Halaat Aksar Badal The Rehte Hai Insaan ke
Khuda Ke Ilaawa Koi Kisi Ka Sahaara Nahi Hota

Dard-o-Gham Se Kabhi Kuch Bhi Nahi Haasil
Har Kashti Ke Taqdeer Men Kinaara Nahi Hota

Musaafir Hoon Chalta Rehta Hoon Har Haal Men
Naa Rukhta Kabhi, Agar Kisi Ne Pukaara Nahi Hota

Mujhse Meri Tanhai Naa Cheeno Tum, Khuda ke Liye
Har Tanha Rehna Wala Insaan Awaara Nahi Hota  MAAF KAREIN YE SHER SAMAJH NAHIN AAYA Usual Smile Usual Smile

"Khwaish" Dil Men Samundar Ki Gehrai Rakhta Hai...!!!!
Woh Khaak Likh Paayega Jo Dard Ka Maara Nahi Hota


          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


GUD ONE KHAWAISH SB
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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2012, 07:40:14 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 10, 2012, 07:25:08 PM

GUD ONE KHAWAISH SB


Zindagi MeN Kayi Baar waqt Aisa Aata Hai jab Insaan kehta Hai Ke "I Need Some Space" Mujhe Tanha Rehne Dijiye, Mujhe Akelapan Chahiye..Par Uskee Iss baat Ko Arrogance ka naam Diya Jaata Hai....Aur Akele Insaan Ko Yeh Bhi Suune Milta Hai ke "Kya Awaare Ki Tarah Yahan-Wahan  Phirta  Hai..Uss Hisaab Se maine Kahaa Hai Ke" Har Tanha Rehne Wala Insaan Awaara nahi Hota"  Shayad Main Jo Kehna Chaahta Tha Aap Samaj gaye..Khair Aapka Shukriya icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2012, 08:37:52 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut gehraayi hai aapke kalaam me.. bahut bahut khoob... dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye rachna ... bahut khoob Khwaish ji....!!!

main tanha hoon, mujhe mohabbat hai meri tanhaayi se,
kyun milte ho pal bhar ke liye, dar lagta hai judaai se...
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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2012, 08:41:04 AM »
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Dartay dartay mainnay par kholay
lore.h dainay lage hawae.
mujhse meri khushia naa cheeno
yowan ki rut khil kar aae. angel11
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2012, 09:43:54 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 10, 2012, 04:47:22 PM
BAHUT KHUB BAHUT HI LAJAWAB KALAAM DHERO DDAD AUR MUBARAKBAD KHAWAHISH JI.... WAISE TO PURI RACHNA HI LAJWAB HAI PAR  MUJHE DO SHER BAHUT JYADA UMDA LAGE........

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Halaat Aksar Badal The Rehte Hai Insaan ke
Khuda Ke Ilaawa Koi Kisi Ka Sahaara Nahi Hota

Mujhse Meri Tanhai Naa Cheeno Tum, Khuda ke Liye
Har Tanha Rehna Wala Insaan Awaara Nahi Hota



          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~[/i][/b]



Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Saudagar Ji..

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«Reply #10 on: August 12, 2012, 09:30:10 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut sunder beta tumhare dil kee tarah
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«Reply #11 on: August 12, 2012, 10:21:51 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on August 10, 2012, 04:49:52 PM
wah wah wah

waah ...kya baat hai khwaish jee

bahut umda likha hai...jindgee kee gahraaiyo ko bakhoobi utaara hai aapne kaagaj par..jitnee bhi taareef kee jaaye kam hai.
har ashaar...ek nayee kahani kahta hua...
seedhe dil pe asar karta huaa.
behatreen...nihayat shaandaar kalaam..
Applause Applause Applause




Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mukesh ji.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: August 12, 2012, 10:27:38 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 10, 2012, 04:42:47 PM
Gair Parro Par Udd Sakte Ho, Had Se Had DeewaroN Tak
Aasman Par Waheen Udega Jiske Apne Par Honge...


Sirf Ro Dene  Se Zindagi Men Guzaara Nahi Hota
Koi Itna Bhi Majbooriyon Ka Maara Nahi Hota

Halaat Aksar Badal The Rehte Hai Insaan ke
Khuda Ke Ilaawa Koi Kisi Ka Sahaara Nahi Hota

Dard-o-Gham Se Kabhi Kuch Bhi Nahi Haasil
Har Kashti Ke Taqdeer Men Kinaara Nahi Hota

Musaafir Hoon Chalta Rehta Hoon Har Haal Men
Naa Rukhta Kabhi, Agar Kisi Ne Pukaara Nahi Hota

Mujhse Meri Tanhai Naa Cheeno Tum, Khuda ke Liye
Har Tanha Rehna Wala Insaan Awaara Nahi Hota

"Khwaish" Dil Men Samundar Ki Gehrai Rakhta Hai...!!!!
Woh Khaak Likh Paayega Jo Dard Ka Maara Nahi Hota


          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

kya khoob likha hai aapne khwaish jee.... bahut bahut khoob  Thumbs UP
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Quote from: ripan dev on August 10, 2012, 05:40:06 PM
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«Reply #14 on: August 12, 2012, 09:05:32 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... bade achche khayaal aur behad
khoobsurat ashaar kahe hai.. sabhi ashaar aik se badhakr aik
rahe.... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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