Mujhy ek khaab likhna hai

by Dr Maqsood Hasni on March 30, 2009, 02:34:40 PM
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Mujhy Ek Khaab likhna hai

Mujhy ek khaan likhna hai
Aankhoon main mahtaab likhna hai
Aankhain hi kiya
Sar “Bil” ki tajori main para hai
Mairay purkhoon ki yah kamae
Os kay hath kaisay aae
Mairay kisi apnay nay
Apni zarorat kay liay
Kuch takoon main
Kahein os ko na day aaya ho
Pochna to ho ga
Maira sar borida jism
Mohtasib tak ja’ay kaisay
Faraz ka qaraz choka’ay kaisay
Kiya sonay, sona’ay kaisay
Aaj baishak,
Mal-o-manal aziz rakhta hai
Apni aankhoon kay evaz
Day sakta hoon mein
Khizr ki chaap
Jo ab mairi zarorat nahain
Mujhy ek khaab likhna hai
Aankhoon main mahtaab likhna hai
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2009, 02:37:48 PM »
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Nice One Again Maqsood Ji,.
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2009, 02:40:33 PM »
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Wah wah dr. sb. aap bahut accha likhte ho. Daad kabul kijiyega. and be regular.
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2009, 02:50:52 PM »
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Mujhy Ek Khaab likhna hai

Mujhy ek khaan likhna hai
Aankhoon main mahtaab likhna hai
Aankhain hi kiya
Sar “Bil” ki tajori main para hai
Mairay purkhoon ki yah kamae
Os kay hath kaisay aae
Mairay kisi apnay nay
Apni zarorat kay liay
Kuch takoon main
Kahein os ko na day aaya ho
Pochna to ho ga
Maira sar borida jism
Mohtasib tak ja’ay kaisay
Faraz ka qaraz choka’ay kaisay
Kiya sonay, sona’ay kaisay
Aaj baishak,
Mal-o-manal aziz rakhta hai
Apni aankhoon kay evaz
Day sakta hoon mein
Khizr ki chaap
Jo ab mairi zarorat nahain
Mujhy ek khaab likhna hai
Aankhoon main mahtaab likhna hai


Once again so nice to read such lines from you..

You write really well.. Keep writing plz
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2009, 03:26:19 PM »
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lafzoon kay moamla main kam hi kamzoor parta hoon likin aaj janay lafz kahaan gay kah shukarreya ada karnay k qabil bhi nahain raha.
aap sab maira asasa hain.
Eshvar aap sab ko hamaisha salamat rakhy.
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2009, 03:59:44 PM »
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Wow Very nice DrJi. kya khoob likha hai. keep writing....
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2009, 04:00:57 PM »
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Khoobsurat Alfaazon ko hamesha taarifein hi milti hia...

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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2009, 09:45:55 AM »
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shukarreya janab
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«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2009, 10:00:27 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Dr. Hasni ji!
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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2009, 11:38:09 AM »
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tovajo k liay,
bari bari mehar'bani janab.
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