muradon ka safina

by saaz_haldwanvi on June 03, 2009, 07:04:26 PM
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Mouke bahut aate hain bhatkane ko
Baraye naam apne hain raah dikhane ko,

Akele aaye the akele chale jayenge
Sath nahi dundta hai kisi bahane ko,

Fisalta hai roj safina muradon ka
Loutti hain lehren jab muhane ko,

Rage-jigar mein kharas hai jab baqi
kyun gaate ho saaz bhule tarane ko,

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                                 saaz haldwanvi
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2009, 08:17:19 PM »
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Bohot khoob saaz haldwanvi ji.

Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on June 03, 2009, 07:04:26 PM
Fisalta hai roj safina muradon ka
Loutti hain lehren jab muhane ko,
                       

Waah waah bohot hi umda.....
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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2009, 08:22:10 PM »
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Mr. Haldwanvi a beautiful example of Urdu poetry, very interesting thoughts about life. Bravo
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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2009, 07:12:32 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 03, 2009, 08:17:19 PM
Bohot khoob saaz haldwanvi ji.

Waah waah bohot hi umda.....
housla afjai ka shukriya dost
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2009, 07:14:33 AM »
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Quote from: MHussain on June 03, 2009, 08:22:10 PM
Mr. Haldwanvi a beautiful example of Urdu poetry, very interesting thoughts about life. Bravo
poetry is te sister of sorrow hussain shaab. and life of a poet comes out of it. thanks a lot
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2009, 07:17:23 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 03, 2009, 08:43:51 PM
Bahot khoob likha hai Saaz ji,very nice
aye kaash hum bhi ek kassh ho jate
         is tarah chunache ek ahsas to ho jate;
         humari ghazal aapko pasand aayi..shukriya.
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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2009, 11:54:14 AM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on June 03, 2009, 07:04:26 PM
Mouke bahut aate hain bhatkane ko
Baraye naam apne hain raah dikhane ko,

Akele aaye the akele chale jayenge
Sath nahi dundta hai kisi bahane ko,

Fisalta hai roj safina muradon ka
Loutti hain lehren jab muhane ko,

Rage-jigar mein kharas hai jab baqi
kyun gaate ho saaz bhule tarane ko,

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                                 saaz haldwanvi

Bohot Khoob Saaz Ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2009, 01:51:58 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 04, 2009, 11:54:14 AM
Bohot Khoob Saaz Ji
khusaamdeid
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MHussain
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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2009, 09:01:45 PM »
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Wrong Mr. Haldwanvi, poetry is the evocation of feelings, thoughts, imagination, emotions, sorrow, grief, happiness, occurrence and any situation in metrical form or in rhythm.
According to you 'poetry is the sister of sorrow', well, then according to me it should be 'mother of happiness'.
Poetry is the recreation of feelings in balanced written format.
Do you agree?
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2009, 04:06:44 AM »
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Quote from: MHussain on June 06, 2009, 09:01:45 PM
Wrong Mr. Haldwanvi, poetry is the evocation of feelings, thoughts, imagination, emotions, sorrow, grief, happiness, occurrence and any situation in metrical form or in rhythm.
According to you 'poetry is the sister of sorrow', well, then according to me it should be 'mother of happiness'.
Poetry is the recreation of feelings in balanced written format.
Do you agree?
yes i agree.but you dont understand that all these words{to which you are trying to convince me} are the by product of sorrow, because they are meaningless untill unless sorrow occurr,
Isn't it? mera ek sh_er mulaiza fermaye--- ki
"ANDHERON NE MIT KAR UJALON KO JINDGI ATA KI,
 NAKHUDAON YE SHAME-NAUMMIDI BHI KAB TAK REHEGI"
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2009, 07:47:18 PM »
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I could not agree more.

Bahoot Khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2009, 08:46:54 PM »
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Saaz sahib, wah kya khoob farmaya aap ne, bha gayi aap ki shayiri hamen...
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2009, 01:08:31 PM »
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You agreed at least that's all Mr. Haldwanvi.

Andhera khud naheen mitita mitaney se
ik diya hi kafi hay roshni phelaney ko
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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2009, 07:00:52 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 07, 2009, 08:46:54 PM
Saaz sahib, wah kya khoob farmaya aap ne, bha gayi aap ki shayiri hamen...
jarre-nawaji hai syed saab aapki
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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2009, 07:09:04 AM »
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bahut khub saaj ji Applause Applause
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