MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.....BUDAAPA-e-HAQEEKAT----cara

by cara on January 13, 2009, 07:29:40 AM
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chahakar bhi mein daud sakta nahin,
is yug ki daur mein.......
    THAKSA GAYA HUN MEIN ,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


aaj ki mahefil mein, kuj is tarha sa nazar aata hun mein,
jawaano ki bheed mein mano kachda para hun mein........
       BEKAR HOGAYA HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


waqt-waqt ki baat hai,ek waqt apna bhi tha,
jab bhi ham kuj kahete,us baat mein hota tha dum,
aaj toh koi sunta hi nahin,jo kuj bhi kahete hai hum........
           BAKWAS KAR RAHA HUN MEIN,BOODHA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


jab hamare dum par chalta tha yeh ghar,
tab uncha raheta tha hamesha,apna sar,
aaj toh ghar ke,choton ke samne bhi,neecha raheta hun mein........
            JUKSA GAYA HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


yun toh kahene mein ghar sansaar hai,pura pariwaar hai,
par koi sang, waqt bhitane ko nahin tahiyar hai..........
             TANHAA RAHE GAYA HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


dosh kisi ka bhi nahin hai,yeh aaj ke halaath hai,samaj ta hun mein,
bas dua karo ,khuda se uthale hamein..........
            JAANE KO TAHIYAR  HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.







 
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2009, 08:32:35 AM »
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Tan hoga beshak ,Man nahi hota Boodhaa
Yaar mere tu man se daud,mat ho nirash
Aatma amar hai,tan to bus ek chola hai
Sahare mil jayenge tu bus kadam badha 2.....
Quote from: cara on January 13, 2009, 07:29:40 AM
chahakar bhi mein daud sakta nahin,
is yug ki daur mein.......
    THAKSA GAYA HUN MEIN ,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


aaj ki mahefil mein, kuj is tarha sa nazar aata hun mein,
jawaano ki bheed mein mano kachda para hun mein........
       BEKAR HOGAYA HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


waqt-waqt ki baat hai,ek waqt apna bhi tha,
jab bhi ham kuj kahete,us baat mein hota tha dum,
aaj toh koi sunta hi nahin,jo kuj bhi kahete hai hum........
           BAKWAS KAR RAHA HUN MEIN,BOODHA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


jab hamare dum par chalta tha yeh ghar,
tab uncha raheta tha hamesha,apna sar,
aaj toh ghar ke,choton ke samne bhi,neecha raheta hun mein........
            JUKSA GAYA HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


yun toh kahene mein ghar sansaar hai,pura pariwaar hai,
par koi sang, waqt bhitane ko nahin tahiyar hai..........
             TANHAA RAHE GAYA HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


dosh kisi ka bhi nahin hai,yeh aaj ke halaath hai,samaj ta hun mein,
bas dua karo ,khuda se uthale hamein..........
            JAANE KO TAHIYAR  HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.







 
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2009, 09:51:37 AM »
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sukhriya -smardiaji.....

kis ko pasand hai,gujra huwa zamana,
jab har daur mein nikalta ho naya zamana.
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2009, 10:08:18 AM »
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WAH CARA, kya khoob likha hai, ek sachayi ....

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2009, 10:13:05 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on January 13, 2009, 08:32:35 AM
Tan hoga beshak ,Man nahi hota Boodhaa
Yaar mere tu man se daud,mat ho nirash
Aatma amar hai,tan to bus ek chola hai
Sahare mil jayenge tu bus kadam badha 2.....

WAH KYA KHOOB KAHI SMARDIA


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2009, 10:27:18 AM »
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sukhriya jasbirji....aap ko pasand aayi...
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2009, 01:21:33 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Cara......
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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2009, 11:49:11 AM »
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sukhriya- gayelji.......
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«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2009, 11:57:40 AM »
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Cara Ji.. Aapka likha bahut pasand aaya..  Applause  Applause

Aakhiri line, "bas dua karo ,khuda se uthale hamein.. JAANE KO TAHIYAR  HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN." padh kar kuch khatak si jaroor hui, lekin Smardia Ji.. ke reply ne woh khatak bhi duur kar di..

Khoob likha hai aapne bhi Smardia Ji.., Aur bahut sahi baat kahi hai..  Applause  Applause


Kehte hai naa.. "Antt kabhi bhi sirf Antt nahin darshaata, ek nayi shuruwaat ki bhi Aas dikhaata hai..." Toh bus Aas banaaye rakhiye.. aur muskuraate rahiye, yehi jeevan hai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: January 14, 2009, 12:03:17 PM »
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Quote from: cara on January 13, 2009, 07:29:40 AM
chahakar bhi mein daud sakta nahin,
is yug ki daur mein.......
    THAKSA GAYA HUN MEIN ,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


aaj ki mahefil mein, kuj is tarha sa nazar aata hun mein,
jawaano ki bheed mein mano kachda para hun mein........
       BEKAR HOGAYA HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


waqt-waqt ki baat hai,ek waqt apna bhi tha,
jab bhi ham kuj kahete,us baat mein hota tha dum,
aaj toh koi sunta hi nahin,jo kuj bhi kahete hai hum........
           BAKWAS KAR RAHA HUN MEIN,BOODHA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


jab hamare dum par chalta tha yeh ghar,
tab uncha raheta tha hamesha,apna sar,
aaj toh ghar ke,choton ke samne bhi,neecha raheta hun mein........
            JUKSA GAYA HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


yun toh kahene mein ghar sansaar hai,pura pariwaar hai,
par koi sang, waqt bhitane ko nahin tahiyar hai..........
             TANHAA RAHE GAYA HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


dosh kisi ka bhi nahin hai,yeh aaj ke halaath hai,samaj ta hun mein,
bas dua karo ,khuda se uthale hamein..........
            JAANE KO TAHIYAR  HUN MEIN,BOODHAA HOGAYA HUN MEIN,MURJAA GAYA HUN MEIN.


Kya Bath Hai Cara Ji Bahoth Zabardast mere Bhai Allah Apke Qalam Aur Taqath Ata Farmaye..Ameen ..Dil khush hogaya Mere Bhai !1

Qadeer Toopchi






 
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«Reply #10 on: January 14, 2009, 12:05:54 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 14, 2009, 12:03:17 PM


Bhaoth Likha Hai Yaar Jitni Bhi Tareef Karoon Kamm Hogi mere Bhai Khuch Likhne nahi chahata mai itna acha likha tumne iske agge kya likhoon mind blowing bhai !!Allah apke qalam ko taqath ata farmaye ameen !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #11 on: January 14, 2009, 12:18:38 PM »
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sukhriya qadeerji....haqeekat waise bahut kam aadmi ko padhna pasand aati hai,aapne pasand kiya bahut bahut danyawaad aapka.
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«Reply #12 on: January 14, 2009, 12:38:30 PM »
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sukhriya  mahiyaji....

maine yeh kaine ki koshish ki hai ,ki budhaa aadmi sharir se bale budhaa hojaata hai,lekin us ka dimag budhaa nahin hota hai.wo har chiz samaj ta hai, ki us ko duniya wale kis nazar se dekhte hai. is liye us apne halaath zahir kiye hai.
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«Reply #13 on: January 14, 2009, 12:40:56 PM »
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Quote from: cara on January 14, 2009, 12:38:30 PM
sukhriya  mahiyaji....

maine yeh kaine ki koshish ki hai ,ki budhaa aadmi sharir se bale budhaa hojaata hai,lekin us ka dimag budhaa nahin hota hai.wo har chiz samaj ta hai, ki us ko duniya wale kis nazar se dekhte hai. is liye us apne halaath zahir kiye hai.

Very Well Said...  icon_thumleft I Agree..  notworthy
Thanks for the details.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: January 16, 2009, 08:43:11 AM »
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Shukriya---Dhanyavad...
Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 13, 2009, 10:13:05 AM
WAH KYA KHOOB KAHI SMARDIA


JASBIR SINGH
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