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Jaane kya hona tha aur kya ho gaya
Raste ka musafir, raste me so gaya
Nikla tha manzil ki talaash mein wo
Beech safar me khud kaheen kho gaya
Hausla bahut tha zazba bhi bahut tha
Yaadon ko bhi apne ashkon se dho gaya
Sab khwahishe bhula kar chala tha wo
Toote jo khwaab to palkein bhigo gaya
Jo baras jaate the kabhi bin baadal bhi
Na jaane un mausamo ko ab kya ho gaya
Jis ke saaye mein gujaari thi usne raate
wo chaand bhi aaj baadlo me kho gaya
Neend khuli to khud ko nam paaya humne
Jane kal raat kaun daaman se lag kar ro gaya
Dekh k ab kaha ka rukh karti hai zindagi Intezar
Maajhi to meri kashti beech majhdhaar me dubo gaya !
Shukriya
Intezar !
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2011, 05:26:35 AM » |
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intzaar !!
kaafi dino baad apki kalaam mili parhne ko…
wah dost kya baate likhi aatne …
2 - 3 para to bht anmol hai nagme ki…
jaan nikaal do ese nagmo se mujh patthar dil ka bhi…
dil se likhi iss kalaam ko dil se daad miya…
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2011, 09:53:42 AM » |
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Intezar mere dost.. Kitne dino baad kuch parra apka likha.. Yaar fan hun apka main..Kya khoob dard pe likhte ho.. Maza agaya..Dil ko sukun milta hai aisi kalam parrkar..  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2011, 11:11:24 AM » |
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Jaane kya hona tha aur kya ho gaya
Raste ka musafir, raste me so gaya
Nikla tha manzil ki talaash mein wo
Beech safar me khud kaheen kho gaya
Hausla bahut tha zazba bhi bahut tha
Yaadon ko bhi apne ashkon se dho gaya
Sab khwahishe bhula kar chala tha wo
Toote jo khwaab to palkein bhigo gaya
Jo baras jaate the kabhi bin baadal bhi
Na jaane un mausamo ko ab kya ho gaya
Jis ke saaye mein gujaari thi usne raate
wo chaand bhi aaj baadlo me kho gaya
Neend khuli to khud ko nam paaya humne
Jane kal raat kaun daaman se lag kar ro gaya
Dekh k ab kaha ka rukh karti hai zindagi Intezar
Maajhi to meri kashti beech majhdhaar me dubo gaya !
Shukriya
Intezar !
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2011, 02:03:29 PM » |
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bht khoob intezaar ji...
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2011, 03:47:57 PM » |
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Kasak ji... Aapki Khaamsoh taareef ka bahut bahut Shukriya... Intezar ! |
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2011, 03:48:54 PM » |
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Shukriya Manjum ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka... ! Intezar ! |
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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2011, 03:51:25 PM » |
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KB bhai bahut din se aap bhi gaayab the kahaan ho aajkal aap... aur aapne pasand kiya bahut bahut shukriya dost... aur jahaan tak jaan nikalne ki baat hai... khuda salaamat rakhe aapko... Intezar ! intzaar !!
kaafi dino baad apki kalaam mili parhne ko…
wah dost kya baate likhi aatne …
2 - 3 para to bht anmol hai nagme ki…
jaan nikaal do ese nagmo se mujh patthar dil ka bhi…
dil se likhi iss kalaam ko dil se daad miya…
khus rahiye
sukriya
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Rahim bhai tahe dil se aapka bahut bahut shukriya... aapne dil se padha aur aapke dil ko sukun pahuncha bahut bahut shukriya aapka... Intezar ! Intezar mere dost.. Kitne dino baad kuch parra apka likha.. Yaar fan hun apka main..Kya khoob dard pe likhte ho.. Maza agaya..Dil ko sukun milta hai aisi kalam parrkar.. Khush rahiye..! |
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Shukriya adil ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya... Intezar ! |
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Geet ji aapka saath mila achha laga... bahut bahut shukriya, aapko pasand aaya... Intezar ! Bahut hi umda peshkash intezar ji apki rachnao mein hamesha kuch alag paati hu aur bahut hi acha lagta hai apki likhi kavitaye padhkar....keep writing these kind of meaningful words..toooo gud...
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on eTI community..
