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nazar uthaake dekho humein hamesha paas paoge,
hamaari dosti se bachke tum ab kahaan jaoge,

raah pe chalke kisi paththar ko dekh ruk jaoge,
to kahaan is jeewan ke safar me aage badh paoge,

kya hua agar khwaabon ka aaina tumse tut gaya aaj,
kal tanha they, ab in tukdo me hazaaron nazar aaoge,

apni parchhai me khud ko dhund lo tum ek baar,
apne hi ruh se tum kis tarha muh mod paoge,

nahi hai ab lambi ye raat judai ki mere dost,
kab tak yunhi andheron me khud ko chhupaoge,

nafraton ki is duniya me ab bhi mohabbat bachi hai,
in pyaar ke rishton se bachke tum kahaan jaa paoge,

zindagi hai chaar din ki ro ke kyun khatam karna,
muskura ke ji lo aaj, ye mauka fir kahaan tum paoge...


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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2010, 02:05:44 PM »
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tooooooo goodddddddd k;askar ji......
mastam re.....
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2010, 02:10:15 PM »
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Mastam to thik hai... par jawaab kab milega iska .... Usual Smile

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 18, 2010, 02:05:44 PM
tooooooo goodddddddd k;askar ji......
mastam re.....
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2010, 02:12:22 PM »
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jab likhne ka man hoga tab.....abhi to aisa kuch man nahin hai ji k kuch achcha likha jaye...
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2010, 02:15:34 PM »
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ok ji...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 18, 2010, 02:12:22 PM
jab likhne ka man hoga tab.....abhi to aisa kuch man nahin hai ji k kuch achcha likha jaye...
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2010, 05:23:21 PM »
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Achhi dil ko chhuti ek behtareen rachna......kapilji.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lijiye kuchh likhne ka hamaara bhi mann ho gaya.....itna lamba likhne ki koshish.....


Dil k ander baste ho nazar uthaake kya dekh paaungi
Dosti hamaari kaayam rahegi usse nahi bhula paungi

Yaado ki dhund me shayad hum kuchh ruk  bhi jaaun
Jeevan ka safar kat hi jaayga mein chahu ya na chahu

Khawab humne hi bune they toot gaye koi gam nahi
Milan ki wo ek ghadi ab hazaro khawab ban jaayegi

Andhero se rishta ban gaya hai parchhai ab kahaan
Ruh tou kaid he tere pyaar me mud k jaayegi kahaan

Nafraton ki es duniya ab hum jee k bhi kya karenge
Pyaar k rishton ko yaad rakh k bhi ab kya karenge

Chhin gayee hai muskurahat ab na lauta paayenge
Tum laakh kaho ab teri jindagi mai na aa paayenge
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2010, 05:31:03 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 18, 2010, 05:23:21 PM
Achhi dil ko chhuti ek behtareen rachna......kapilji.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lijiye kuchh likhne ka hamaara bhi mann ho gaya.....itna lamba likhne ki koshish.....


Dil k ander baste ho nazar uthaake kya dekh paaungi
Dosti hamaari kaayam rahegi usse nahi bhula paungi

Yaado ki dhund me shayad hum kuchh ruk  bhi jaaun
Jeevan ka safar kat hi jaayga mein chahu ya na chahu

Khawab humne hi bune they toot gaye koi gam nahi
Milan ki wo ek ghadi ab hazaro khawab ban jaayegi

Andhero se rishta ban gaya hai parchhai ab kahaan
Ruh tou kaid he tere pyaar me mud k jaayegi kahaan

Nafraton ki es duniya ab hum jee k bhi kya karenge
Pyaar k rishton ko yaad rakh k bhi ab kya karenge

Chhin gayee hai muskurahat ab na lauta paayenge
Tum laakh kaho ab teri jindagi mai na aa paayenge


KYA BAAT HAI KOYAL.......DIL KHUSH KHUSH KAR DIYA TUMNE TO.....BHTTTTTTTTTTT PYARA LIKHA HAI...MASTAM RE.....

HAR LAFZ DIL SE NIKLI BAAT HO JAISE
TUNE MERE SURR SAJAYEE HON  JAISE
ANKAHI DAASTAAN AA GAI JO NAZAR K SAAMNE
KHWAAB KAI ANJANE HI TUT GAYE HON JAISE.......
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 05:42:57 PM »
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bahot bahot umda likha hai janaab aap ne ,har sher pe daad qubool karein..kya huwa agar khwaabaon ka aina ...bahot khoob janaab wah..daad hi daad
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 05:45:54 PM »
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your comments are most valuable for me.....sach kehna...jo kami hai bataa dena....
thanks....

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 18, 2010, 05:31:03 PM
KYA BAAT HAI KOYAL.......DIL KHUSH KHUSH KAR DIYA TUMNE TO.....BHTTTTTTTTTTT PYARA LIKHA HAI...MASTAM RE.....

HAR LAFZ DIL SE NIKLI BAAT HO JAISE
TUNE MERE SURR SAJAYEE HON  JAISE
ANKAHI DAASTAAN AA GAI JO NAZAR K SAAMNE
KHWAAB KAI ANJANE HI TUT GAYE HON JAISE.......
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 05:52:48 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 18, 2010, 05:45:54 PM
your comments are most valuable for me.....sach kehna...jo kami hai bataa dena....
thanks....


sach me bht pyara likha hai gudiya rani......
u r the best
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 05:57:02 PM »
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Thats a certificate from an expert......honoured..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 18, 2010, 05:52:48 PM
sach me bht pyara likha hai gudiya rani......
u r the best
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 07:34:27 PM »
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Klaskar sahab AadaaB!

Kia baat hai janab aapke khayaal aur ahsaas behad khoob hai..
Dil ki baatoN ko aap achche lafzoN meiN dhalte hai...
Daad kabool kijiye....
Nice creation.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 09:40:30 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 18, 2010, 02:01:11 PM

nazar uthaake dekho humein hamesha paas paoge,
hamaari dosti se bachke tum ab kahaan jaoge,

raah pe chalke kisi paththar ko dekh ruk jaoge,
to kahaan is jeewan ke safar me aage badh paoge,

kya hua agar khwaabon ka aaina tumse tut gaya aaj,
kal tanha they, ab in tukdo me hazaaron nazar aaoge,

apni parchhai me khud ko dhund lo tum ek baar,
apne hi ruh se tum kis tarha muh mod paoge,

nahi hai ab lambi ye raat judai ki mere dost,
kab tak yunhi andheron me khud ko chhupaoge,

nafraton ki is duniya me ab bhi mohabbat bachi hai,
in pyaar ke rishton se bachke tum kahaan jaa paoge,

zindagi hai chaar din ki ro ke kyun khatam karna,
muskura ke ji lo aaj, ye mauka fir kahaan tum paoge...


*****HRIDAY*****

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 18, 2010, 05:23:21 PM
Achhi dil ko chhuti ek behtareen rachna......kapilji.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lijiye kuchh likhne ka hamaara bhi mann ho gaya.....itna lamba likhne ki koshish.....


Dil k ander baste ho nazar uthaake kya dekh paaungi
Dosti hamaari kaayam rahegi usse nahi bhula paungi

Yaado ki dhund me shayad hum kuchh ruk  bhi jaaun
Jeevan ka safar kat hi jaayga mein chahu ya na chahu

Khawab humne hi bune they toot gaye koi gam nahi
Milan ki wo ek ghadi ab hazaro khawab ban jaayegi

Andhero se rishta ban gaya hai parchhai ab kahaan
Ruh tou kaid he tere pyaar me mud k jaayegi kahaan

Nafraton ki es duniya ab hum jee k bhi kya karenge
Pyaar k rishton ko yaad rakh k bhi ab kya karenge

Chhin gayee hai muskurahat ab na lauta paayenge
Tum laakh kaho ab teri jindagi mai na aa paayenge


Aap dono ne hi khoob likha hai....wah kya sama bandha hai....love this thread.
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«Reply #13 on: August 19, 2010, 05:57:17 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji... aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne... aur ek bahut hi achchi koshish hai ye aapki... yunhi likhte rahiye...

kuch likha hai humne iske jawaab me...

zindagi itni bhi zaalim nahi ki muskuraane ki wajaah na rahe,
tumhaari dard bhari daastaan sunke ab aur tumse kya kahen,

dard koi saathi nahi jise seene se lagaake rakha jaaye,
dosti hamaari abaad rahegi chaahe hum rahen ya na rahen,

na aa paaoge hamaari zindagi me tum ab to kya ghum karen,
jise dil me basaa rakha hai use jeewan me aane ko kya kahen,

tumhaare ek khayaal se hi meri raatein roshan ho jaati hain,
tumhaare na hone se andheri hain raatein ye hum kyun kahen,

muskuraane ke bahut se kaaran hain hamaari zindagi mein,
to ek tere dard ko dil se lagaake hum rotey kyun rahen,

tum to khud hi bahut samajhdaar ho koyal rani,
ab tumse samajhdaari ki baaton ke baare me kya kahen...


Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 18, 2010, 05:23:21 PM
Achhi dil ko chhuti ek behtareen rachna......kapilji.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lijiye kuchh likhne ka hamaara bhi mann ho gaya.....itna lamba likhne ki koshish.....


Dil k ander baste ho nazar uthaake kya dekh paaungi
Dosti hamaari kaayam rahegi usse nahi bhula paungi

Yaado ki dhund me shayad hum kuchh ruk  bhi jaaun
Jeevan ka safar kat hi jaayga mein chahu ya na chahu

Khawab humne hi bune they toot gaye koi gam nahi
Milan ki wo ek ghadi ab hazaro khawab ban jaayegi

Andhero se rishta ban gaya hai parchhai ab kahaan
Ruh tou kaid he tere pyaar me mud k jaayegi kahaan

Nafraton ki es duniya ab hum jee k bhi kya karenge
Pyaar k rishton ko yaad rakh k bhi ab kya karenge

Chhin gayee hai muskurahat ab na lauta paayenge
Tum laakh kaho ab teri jindagi mai na aa paayenge
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«Reply #14 on: August 19, 2010, 05:59:59 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Nazar ji... maine aapki daad dil se qubool ki... shukriya janaab...!!!

Quote from: nazar.ghouri on August 18, 2010, 05:42:57 PM
bahot bahot umda likha hai janaab aap ne ,har sher pe daad qubool karein..kya huwa agar khwaabaon ka aina ...bahot khoob janaab wah..daad hi daad
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