----- /// Muskura ke ji lo zindagi /// -----

by klaskar on August 18, 2010, 02:01:11 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 19, 2010, 06:01:35 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji... humne aapki daad dil se qubool ki... shukriya janaab...!!!

Klaskar sahab AadaaB!

Kia baat hai janab aapke khayaal aur ahsaas behad khoob hai..
Dil ki baatoN ko aap achche lafzoN meiN dhalte hai...
Daad kabool kijiye....
Nice creation.... Usual Smile

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«Reply #16 on: August 19, 2010, 06:02:51 AM »
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shukriya Sajid ji jo aapne aapne apna waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiya....!!!

Aap dono ne hi khoob likha hai....wah kya sama bandha hai....love this thread.
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«Reply #17 on: August 25, 2010, 08:28:42 PM »
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nazar uthaake dekho humein hamesha paas paoge,
hamaari dosti se bachke tum ab kahaan jaoge,

raah pe chalke kisi paththar ko dekh ruk jaoge,
to kahaan is jeewan ke safar me aage badh paoge,

kya hua agar khwaabon ka aaina tumse tut gaya aaj,
kal tanha they, ab in tukdo me hazaaron nazar aaoge,

apni parchhai me khud ko dhund lo tum ek baar,
apne hi ruh se tum kis tarha muh mod paoge,

nahi hai ab lambi ye raat judai ki mere dost,
kab tak yunhi andheron me khud ko chhupaoge,

nafraton ki is duniya me ab bhi mohabbat bachi hai,
in pyaar ke rishton se bachke tum kahaan jaa paoge,

zindagi hai chaar din ki ro ke kyun khatam karna,
muskura ke ji lo aaj, ye mauka fir kahaan tum paoge...


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Bahut umda lekh hai Kapil
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«Reply #18 on: August 25, 2010, 08:29:59 PM »
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Achhi dil ko chhuti ek behtareen rachna......kapilji.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lijiye kuchh likhne ka hamaara bhi mann ho gaya.....itna lamba likhne ki koshish.....


Dil k ander baste ho nazar uthaake kya dekh paaungi
Dosti hamaari kaayam rahegi usse nahi bhula paungi

Yaado ki dhund me shayad hum kuchh ruk  bhi jaaun
Jeevan ka safar kat hi jaayga mein chahu ya na chahu

Khawab humne hi bune they toot gaye koi gam nahi
Milan ki wo ek ghadi ab hazaro khawab ban jaayegi

Andhero se rishta ban gaya hai parchhai ab kahaan
Ruh tou kaid he tere pyaar me mud k jaayegi kahaan

Nafraton ki es duniya ab hum jee k bhi kya karenge
Pyaar k rishton ko yaad rakh k bhi ab kya karenge

Chhin gayee hai muskurahat ab na lauta paayenge
Tum laakh kaho ab teri jindagi mai na aa paayenge


Aap ki koshish bahut ba.dhiya hai Koyal Ji
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«Reply #19 on: August 25, 2010, 08:31:45 PM »
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hausla afzaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Bahut umda lekh hai Kapil

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