Na Ankhon Mein Nami Ho

by riyaz106 on June 16, 2010, 12:22:09 PM
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GHAZAL
Bahot khoobsurat meri zindagi ho             
Na mujhko koi gham na koi khushi ho 

Wahi surkhru hoga dono jahan mein
Adaa jis bashar se haq-e-bandagi ho

Jahan ke masaa-il sulajh jayenge, gar
Muhabbat ka haamil har ik aadmi ho

Yun maa-baap ko khush rakhen zindagi bhar
Kabhi bhi na ankhon mein unki nami ho

Pareshaniyan khud hi ho jayengi kam
teri zindagi mein agar saadgi ho


Riyaz Ashna
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«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2010, 01:22:56 PM »
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Nice Riyaz-bhai....
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2010, 01:59:03 PM »
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Bohout khoob RIYAZ Ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2010, 03:06:21 PM »
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beautiful poetry!
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«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2010, 04:28:26 PM »
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Bahut khoob Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2010, 06:33:41 PM »
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Koyal bahan aapko mera likha pasand aaya iske liye main aapka abhaar prakat karta hun.
Quote from: KOYAL46 on June 16, 2010, 01:22:56 PM
Nice Riyaz-bhai....
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2010, 10:03:56 PM »
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Riyaz bhaijan, apki iss peshkash main kuch seekhne mila hai..kuch kya kafi kuch seekhne mila hai..bahaut sachayi likhi hai apne...Bahaut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2010, 02:19:40 AM »
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SB ji aapka behad shukria.
Quote from: Sky Blue on June 16, 2010, 01:59:03 PM
Bohout khoob RIYAZ Ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2010, 04:27:26 AM »
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bahot hi dil ko chhu jane wali gazal likhi he riyaz ji.. Clapping Smiley  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2010, 05:05:02 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on June 16, 2010, 12:22:09 PM
GHAZAL
Bahot khoobsurat meri zindagi ho             
Na mujhko koi gham na koi khushi ho 

Wahi surkhru hoga dono jahan mein
Adaa jis bashar se haq-e-bandagi ho

Jahan ke masaa-il sulajh jayenge, gar
Muhabbat ka haamil har ik aadmi ho

Yun maa-baap ko khush rakhen zindagi bhar
Kabhi bhi na ankhon mein unki nami ho

Pareshaniyan khud hi ho jayengi kam
teri zindagi mein agar saadgi ho


Riyaz Ashna


Bahot khoob Riyaz ji ... bahot hi behtreen alfazon mein apne wo baaten bata di hain jin pe chal ke aadmi waqai zindagi ko sahi mayno main jee sakta hai, apki kahi har ek line bahot gahrai hai.....
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2010, 06:35:32 AM »
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Aaliaa ji aapka behad shukriya ke aapko meri kaawish achhi lagi.
Quote from: aaliaa on June 16, 2010, 03:06:21 PM
beautiful poetry!
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«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2010, 06:55:39 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on June 16, 2010, 12:22:09 PM
GHAZAL
Bahot khoobsurat meri zindagi ho             
Na mujhko koi gham na koi khushi ho 

Wahi surkhru hoga dono jahan mein
Adaa jis bashar se haq-e-bandagi ho

Jahan ke masaa-il sulajh jayenge, gar
Muhabbat ka haamil har ik aadmi ho

Yun maa-baap ko khush rakhen zindagi bhar
Kabhi bhi na ankhon mein unki nami ho

Pareshaniyan khud hi ho jayengi kam
teri zindagi mein agar saadgi ho


Riyaz Ashna



naaaaaaaaaice riyaz sb
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«Reply #12 on: June 17, 2010, 07:16:51 AM »
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Wah Riyaz saheb ,, apka to jawab hi nahi , hamesha lajwab kahete ho yaara ,Apki is umda ghazal pe hazaro dad hazir hain , qubool karen ,, Kaunsa ashar ziyada acha hai kahene mushkil hai bhai , Ghazar sar se pa tak ghazab hai ,,

Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe


Duwa go


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«Reply #13 on: June 17, 2010, 07:39:04 AM »
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Aapka behad shukriya Rajesh ji ke aapne waqt diya aur ghazal ko pasand farmaya.
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 16, 2010, 04:28:26 PM
Bahut khoob Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #14 on: June 17, 2010, 08:05:05 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyaz Bhai...Bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur Seekh dene Wale Jabzbaat Pesh Kiye Hai Aapne...Lajawaab!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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