Naari !

by salma786 on May 08, 2009, 07:34:34 AM
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Gaye wo din purane jab hum,
Band mutthi me raha karte the,
Samaaj ke thekedaro ke kadmo me,
Din-raat gira karte the!

Naari ban kar janam lene ka,
Saza hum bhoga karte the,
Apne astitva ki laash ko hum,
Kandho me dhoya karte the!

Na tha koi samman yaha,
Thi nahi koi pehchaan,
Apni juti se kuchal te the,
Samajh kar khud ko sab balwaan!

Naya suraj jab uday hua,
Jaagi duniya ye saari,
Mahatva mila jag me hum ko,
Hai shaktishaali har naari !
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2009, 07:37:59 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai, bhoot khoob Salma..
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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2009, 07:38:56 AM »
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Very well said Salma...
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2009, 07:46:22 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Salma Ji
Haqiqat bayan kiya hai aap ne
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2009, 07:52:54 AM »
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nice one salma ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2009, 08:06:39 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on May 08, 2009, 07:37:59 AM
Wah kya baat hai, bhoot khoob Salma..
Shukriya Sophi dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2009, 08:25:34 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 08, 2009, 07:38:56 AM
Very well said Salma...

Thanks Sajid ji.. for reading ma thread!
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2009, 08:29:37 AM »
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Aap ki kavitayen to har vishay par dhava bol rahi hai, Devi salma jee, aur jo bhi likhti hain khara aur chit karne wala hota hai...
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«Reply #8 on: May 08, 2009, 08:44:45 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 08, 2009, 07:46:22 AM
Bahut Khoob Salma Ji
Haqiqat bayan kiya hai aap ne


Shukriya Apke dil tak baat pahuchi mera likhna safal hua Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2009, 08:51:19 AM »
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bahoot khoob salma.... Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2009, 09:03:06 AM »
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Quote from: poppoetry1 on May 08, 2009, 07:52:54 AM
nice one salma ji

THanks Popoetry ji!
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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2009, 09:17:13 AM »
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 Applause  Applause  Applause
Bahut Khoob Likha hai Salma Dear,
Really Good One...

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: May 08, 2009, 09:22:34 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 08, 2009, 08:29:37 AM
Aap ki kavitayen to har vishay par dhava bol rahi hai, Devi salma jee, aur jo bhi likhti hain khara aur chit karne wala hota hai...


Shukriya Syed ji notworthy
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«Reply #13 on: May 08, 2009, 11:40:06 AM »
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Bohat acha likha hai salma dear..
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2009, 04:14:34 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on May 08, 2009, 08:51:19 AM
bahoot khoob salma.... Applause

Shukriya Bekarar ji
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