Nadia Sagar

by thycreator on January 11, 2005, 09:11:49 AM
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Kya hoti hai dunia aakhir, khud ko mujhko samjhana tha,
Yahi soch kar chal pada mai, jab so raha sara jamana tha,
Guzar raha mai shamshan se, suni cheekh ek kali thi,
Nikal pada mai cheekh dhudhne, dikhi dur ek nari thi.

Shweth wastr the chinn bhinn, wo hirni si thi dari dari,
Sehmi hui wo simti hui si,aankhen thi uski bhari bhari
Kuchale hue arman uske, ghayal tha uska yauwan,
Karuna se paripurit tha, balatkar ka wah darshan.

Bikhare hue the kesh uske, suni uski hatheli thi,
Nikali thi sajan se milne, wo toh ja rahi akeli thi.
Usko kya pata uska humdum uska bhogi ban jayega,
Jiske liye thi wo purn samarpit, wo hi lutne aayega.

Dekh ye aalam phir toh, man mein mere ye prashan raha,
Ek ki dunia luth hi gayi aur duje ka ye jasn raha

Pareshan iss atyachar se, maine toh sir par hath rakha,
Nazar aa gaya in ankhon ko, iss dunia ka wah maun sakha.
Chalti hai ye dunia jiske dam se, jo bana hua adhinayak hai,
Iss beeti puri ghatna ka wo ek matr khalnayak hai.

Kaun hai wo ghayal nari, jisne khoya astitva apna?
Hai kaun wo premi ki jisne toda uska sunder sapna?

Wo nari hai behti nadiya,uska premi samandar hai,
Meri iss puri kavita mein, nadiya sagar ka manjar hai.
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2005, 09:22:42 AM »
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Kya hoti hai dunia aakhir, khud ko mujhko samjhana tha,
Yahi soch kar chal pada mai, jab so raha sara jamana tha,
Guzar raha mai shamshan se, suni cheekh ek kali thi,
Nikal pada mai cheekh dhudhne, dikhi dur ek nari thi.

Shweth wastr the chinn bhinn, wo hirni si thi dari dari,
Sehmi hui wo simti hui si,aankhen thi uski bhari bhari
Kuchale hue arman uske, ghayal tha uska yauwan,
Karuna se paripurit tha, balatkar ka wah darshan.

Bikhare hue the kesh uske, suni uski hatheli thi,
Nikali thi sajan se milne, wo toh ja rahi akeli thi.
Usko kya pata uska humdum uska bhogi ban jayega,
Jiske liye thi wo purn samarpit, wo hi lutne aayega.

Dekh ye aalam phir toh, man mein mere ye prashan raha,
Ek ki dunia luth hi gayi aur duje ka ye jasn raha

Pareshan iss atyachar se, maine toh sir par hath rakha,
Nazar aa gaya in ankhon ko, iss dunia ka wah maun sakha.
Chalti hai ye dunia jiske dam se, jo bana hua adhinayak hai,
Iss beeti puri ghatna ka wo ek matr khalnayak hai.

Kaun hai wo ghayal nari, jisne khoya astitva apna?
Hai kaun wo premi ki jisne toda uska sunder sapna?

Wo nari hai behti nadiya,uska premi samandar hai,
Meri iss puri kavita mein, nadiya sagar ka manjar hai.
bhaav vyanjana achhi hai,shabd chayan bhi achha hai,prateek bhi naye hain....in all a good work ...keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2005, 09:24:20 AM »
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Kya hoti hai dunia aakhir, khud ko mujhko samjhana tha,
Yahi soch kar chal pada mai, jab so raha sara jamana tha,
Guzar raha mai shamshan se, suni cheekh ek kali thi,
Nikal pada mai cheekh dhudhne, dikhi dur ek nari thi.

Shweth wastr the chinn bhinn, wo hirni si thi dari dari,
Sehmi hui wo simti hui si,aankhen thi uski bhari bhari
Kuchale hue arman uske, ghayal tha uska yauwan,
Karuna se paripurit tha, balatkar ka wah darshan.

Bikhare hue the kesh uske, suni uski hatheli thi,
Nikali thi sajan se milne, wo toh ja rahi akeli thi.
Usko kya pata uska humdum uska bhogi ban jayega,
Jiske liye thi wo purn samarpit, wo hi lutne aayega.

Dekh ye aalam phir toh, man mein mere ye prashan raha,
Ek ki dunia luth hi gayi aur duje ka ye jasn raha

Pareshan iss atyachar se, maine toh sir par hath rakha,
Nazar aa gaya in ankhon ko, iss dunia ka wah maun sakha.
Chalti hai ye dunia jiske dam se, jo bana hua adhinayak hai,
Iss beeti puri ghatna ka wo ek matr khalnayak hai.

Kaun hai wo ghayal nari, jisne khoya astitva apna?
Hai kaun wo premi ki jisne toda uska sunder sapna?

Wo nari hai behti nadiya,uska premi samandar hai,
Meri iss puri kavita mein, nadiya sagar ka manjar hai.

bhaav vyanjana achhi hai,shabd chayan bhi achha hai,prateek bhi naye hain....in all a good work ...keep it up



Thanx a lot tarav
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2005, 09:34:10 AM »
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A Beautiful creation Amit....
Great Work.
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2005, 09:39:59 AM »
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A Beautiful creation Amit....
Great Work.


Thanx Rahul.....
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2005, 04:01:50 PM »
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Kya hua jo meri iss nazam ko na dekhta koi,
     Humne badi nazon se likha hai ye labz e bayan.
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2005, 07:46:39 AM »
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Kya hua jo meri iss nazam ko na dekhta koi,
     Humne badi nazon se likha hai ye labz e bayan.




Har samajh ko samajhne ke liye samajh hona jaroori hai,
jo samjha hi nahi hai wo dekh ke bhi kya bolega..??
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2005, 08:08:07 AM »
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Kya hua jo meri iss nazam ko na dekhta koi,
     Humne badi nazon se likha hai ye labz e bayan.




Har samajh ko samajhne ke liye samajh hona jaroori hai,
jo samjha hi nahi hai wo dekh ke bhi kya bolega..??


Wah rahul ji, kya bat hai.Bahut Khub....
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2005, 08:13:09 AM »
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Thanks Amit...
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2005, 12:56:25 PM »
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Kya hoti hai dunia aakhir, khud ko mujhko samjhana tha,
Yahi soch kar chal pada mai, jab so raha sara jamana tha,
Guzar raha mai shamshan se, suni cheekh ek kali thi,
Nikal pada mai cheekh dhudhne, dikhi dur ek nari thi.

Shweth wastr the chinn bhinn, wo hirni si thi dari dari,
Sehmi hui wo simti hui si,aankhen thi uski bhari bhari
Kuchale hue arman uske, ghayal tha uska yauwan,
Karuna se paripurit tha, balatkar ka wah darshan.

Bikhare hue the kesh uske, suni uski hatheli thi,
Nikali thi sajan se milne, wo toh ja rahi akeli thi.
Usko kya pata uska humdum uska bhogi ban jayega,
Jiske liye thi wo purn samarpit, wo hi lutne aayega.

Dekh ye aalam phir toh, man mein mere ye prashan raha,
Ek ki dunia luth hi gayi aur duje ka ye jasn raha

Pareshan iss atyachar se, maine toh sir par hath rakha,
Nazar aa gaya in ankhon ko, iss dunia ka wah maun sakha.
Chalti hai ye dunia jiske dam se, jo bana hua adhinayak hai,
Iss beeti puri ghatna ka wo ek matr khalnayak hai.

Kaun hai wo ghayal nari, jisne khoya astitva apna?
Hai kaun wo premi ki jisne toda uska sunder sapna?

Wo nari hai behti nadiya,uska premi samandar hai,
Meri iss puri kavita mein, nadiya sagar ka manjar hai.


Wah...Bohat khoob thycreator....
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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2005, 07:27:16 PM »
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Kya hoti hai dunia aakhir, khud ko mujhko samjhana tha,
Yahi soch kar chal pada mai, jab so raha sara jamana tha,
Guzar raha mai shamshan se, suni cheekh ek kali thi,
Nikal pada mai cheekh dhudhne, dikhi dur ek nari thi.

Shweth wastr the chinn bhinn, wo hirni si thi dari dari,
Sehmi hui wo simti hui si,aankhen thi uski bhari bhari
Kuchale hue arman uske, ghayal tha uska yauwan,
Karuna se paripurit tha, balatkar ka wah darshan.

Bikhare hue the kesh uske, suni uski hatheli thi,
Nikali thi sajan se milne, wo toh ja rahi akeli thi.
Usko kya pata uska humdum uska bhogi ban jayega,
Jiske liye thi wo purn samarpit, wo hi lutne aayega.

Dekh ye aalam phir toh, man mein mere ye prashan raha,
Ek ki dunia luth hi gayi aur duje ka ye jasn raha

Pareshan iss atyachar se, maine toh sir par hath rakha,
Nazar aa gaya in ankhon ko, iss dunia ka wah maun sakha.
Chalti hai ye dunia jiske dam se, jo bana hua adhinayak hai,
Iss beeti puri ghatna ka wo ek matr khalnayak hai.

Kaun hai wo ghayal nari, jisne khoya astitva apna?
Hai kaun wo premi ki jisne toda uska sunder sapna?

Wo nari hai behti nadiya,uska premi samandar hai,
Meri iss puri kavita mein, nadiya sagar ka manjar hai.


wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwww!

 :D
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2005, 08:34:18 PM »
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wah!!! bahoot khoob thycreator!!!
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2005, 03:57:20 PM »
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwww!

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Thanx a lot meena ji...........found this post of mine after a long time, so cudnt thank u before........
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2005, 03:58:51 PM »
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wah!!! bahoot khoob thycreator!!!


Thanx a lot Pooja ji...........kahan hai aap....dikhti nahi hai aajkal...........
Kahan khoye ho tum iss bhid mein jahan ke aye dost,
Kabhi aao yahan, deewano ki mehfil hai saji hui.....;-)
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2005, 04:03:30 PM »
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Wah...Bohat khoob thycreator....


Thanx a lot aryaan ji...........
Kya kya hame sikhati hai kudrat ki ye dastaan,
Jane kyu insaa khoya hai iss dunia ki galiyon mein.....
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