Nahi milegi sahara unki

by priyanka.jasmine on July 16, 2010, 01:48:09 PM
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Ansuon ko rokne ke liye

ankhon ko band kiya tha

unke yaadon ne meri ansuon ko rokne na diya

isliye char diwaron ke beech khud ko kaid kiya tha

unke liye dhadakte huye

har ek dhadkan ko mana kiya tha

milenge nahi wo tujhe

naseeb nahi hai wo tere

ye baat dil ko samjhane ki bahut koshish kiya tha

unki sahara nahi milegi

isliye tanhayiyon me jeena seekh liya tha

koi pehchan na le  meri is haalat ko

isi wajah se na jaane hamne kitno se baatein karna band kiya tha   crybaby2
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2010, 02:11:31 PM »
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bahut hi sundar peshkash hai ye aapki Priyanka ji... maine aapki sabhi rachnaayein padhi hai aur sabhi ek se badhkar ek hain... bahut achcha likhti hain aap... bahut hi khoob... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2010, 07:24:28 PM »
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bahut bahut hi khooob Jasmine ....

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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2010, 05:00:50 AM »
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Ansuon ko rokne ke liye

ankhon ko band kiya tha

unke yaadon ne meri ansuon ko rokne na diya

isliye char diwaron ke beech khud ko kaid kiya tha

unke liye dhadakte huye

har ek dhadkan ko mana kiya tha

milenge nahi wo tujhe

naseeb nahi hai wo tere

ye baat dil ko samjhane ki bahut koshish kiya tha

unki sahara nahi milegi

isliye tanhayiyon me jeena seekh liya tha

koi pehchan na le  meri is haalat ko

isi wajah se na jaane hamne kitno se baatein karna band kiya tha   crybaby2

Nice poetry......Priyanka Ji ! dil se daad !
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2010, 05:25:21 AM »
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hmmmm

har sitam khud pe kar haar gaye hum
lekin teri yaadein ab bhi dil me jami hain
nikaal dena chahte hain tujhe khayalon se
lekin tujhi se hi ye saansein chal rahi hain
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2010, 02:37:21 PM »
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