nakamiyon ka matam

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nakamiyon ka matam kuch yun manaya jaye,
sabak sikh ke inse, sabko bataya jaye,

jo na mil saka uska gila, aur nahi ab aur nahi,
bin mange jo mila, usi ka jashn manaya jaye,

ghamo ke saath bhi thi kuch khushiyan chipi hui,
aao unhi khushiyon pe ab kah-kaha lagaya jaye,

kab talak kisi aur ke ujaalon pe ho gujara
buland karke khudi ko, housalon ka deep jalaya jaaye

har chot pe tera shukr ata karta hai bekarar,
ye tujhi pe hai ki mujhe neend se kaise jagaya jaye,

na sheron me koi jor, na behar ka thikana,
sukhanwari ke ustadon ko ab mehfil me bulaya jaaye



नाकामियों का मातम कुछ यूँ मनाया जाए,
सबक सीख के इनसे, सबको बताया जाए,

जो ना मिल सका उसका गिला, और नही अब और नही,
बिन माँगे जो मिला, उसी का जश्न मनाया जाए,

गमों के साथ भी थी कुछ खुशियाँ छिपी हुई,
आओ उन्ही खुशियों पे अब कह-कहा लगाया जाए,

कब तलक किसी और के उजालों पे हो गुज़ारा
बुलंद करके खुदी को, हौसलों का दीप जलाया जाए

हर चोट पे तेरा शुक्र अता करता है बेकरार,
ये तुझी पे है की मुझे नींद से कैसे जगाया जाए,

ना शेरों मे कोई ज़ोर, ना बहर का ठिकाना,
सुखनवरी के उस्तादों को अब महफ़िल मे बुलाया जाए

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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2010, 12:52:57 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro...Ek ek Sher dil Mein Utrata Hua..Bahut Hi khoobsurat jazbaat!!!!Hauslo Se bharpoor!!!Seekh dei hui aapki yeh peshkash,dil ko bhaa gayi...

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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2010, 12:55:41 PM »
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Wah Bekarar ji wah, kya hi khoob rachna hai aapki. Behad khoobsurat aur seekh dene wali, hausla badhane wali aur nirasha door karne wali. Aisi kaamyaab rachna ke liye badhaai aur daad.
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2010, 02:08:49 PM »
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Wah Bekarar ji waah... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... aapke har rachna ki tarha bahut hi khoob ... bahut hi umda...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2010, 04:57:39 AM »
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nakamiyon ka matam kuch yun manaya jaye,
sabak sikh ke inse, sabko bataya jaye,

jo na mil saka uska gila, aur nahi ab aur nahi,
bin mange jo mila, usi ka jashn manaya jaye,

ghamo ke saath bhi thi kuch khushiyan chipi hui,
aao unhi khushiyon pe ab kah-kaha lagaya jaye,

kab talak kisi aur ke ujaalon pe ho gujara
buland karke khudi ko, housalon ka deep jalaya jaaye

har chot pe tera shukr ata karta hai bekarar,
ye tujhi pe hai ki mujhe neend se kaise jagaya jaye,

na sheron me koi jor, na behar ka thikana,
sukhanwari ke ustadon ko ab mehfil me bulaya jaaye



नाकामियों का मातम कुछ यूँ मनाया जाए,
सबक सीख के इनसे, सबको बताया जाए,

जो ना मिल सका उसका गिला, और नही अब और नही,
बिन माँगे जो मिला, उसी का जश्न मनाया जाए,

गमों के साथ भी थी कुछ खुशियाँ छिपी हुई,
आओ उन्ही खुशियों पे अब कह-कहा लगाया जाए,

कब तलक किसी और के उजालों पे हो गुज़ारा
बुलंद करके खुदी को, हौसलों का दीप जलाया जाए

हर चोट पे तेरा शुक्र अता करता है बेकरार,
ये तुझी पे है की मुझे नींद से कैसे जगाया जाए,

ना शेरों मे कोई ज़ोर, ना बहर का ठिकाना,
सुखनवरी के उस्तादों को अब महफ़िल मे बुलाया जाए



Very Nice creation.........Bekarar Ji ! dil se daad !
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2010, 11:30:30 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro...Ek ek Sher dil Mein Utrata Hua..Bahut Hi khoobsurat jazbaat!!!!Hauslo Se bharpoor!!!Seekh dei hui aapki yeh peshkash,dil ko bhaa gayi...

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!


bahoot shukriya khwaish bro....aapne rachna me chupi har baat ko bakhoobi pah-chan liya.....god bless you bro..
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2010, 11:33:06 AM »
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Wah Bekarar ji wah, kya hi khoob rachna hai aapki. Behad khoobsurat aur seekh dene wali, hausla badhane wali aur nirasha door karne wali. Aisi kaamyaab rachna ke liye badhaai aur daad.

riyaz bhai...shukriya aapka aapne rachna ke marm ko samjha..aur housla-aezai ki.
bahoot bahoot dhanywad
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2010, 11:34:41 AM »
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Wah Bekarar ji waah... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... aapke har rachna ki tarha bahut hi khoob ... bahut hi umda...!!!

har baar ki tarah is baar bhi manobal badhane ke liye dil se shukriya klaskar ji
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Very Nice creation.........Bekarar Ji ! dil se daad !
Thanks a ton anshumali ji....pdhne aur sarahne ke liye dil se shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2010, 06:23:25 PM »
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[]Bhai Sanjeev Ji Aadab...
Umeed Karta Hun Aap Khairiyat Se Honge...!.

Aur Bahut Waqt Baad Aapko Parhne Ka Maukaa Mila Hai
Bahut Hi Achcha Laga Ek Arse Ke Baad Aapko Parhke.
Har Line Maano Jaise Hausla Aur Koi Sikh Deti Hai
Badi Hi Khoobsurti Aur Sadgi Se Lafzon Ki Piroya Ha Aapne
Aagaz Se Lekar Anjaam Tak Behtareen Hi Behtareen
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash Hai Bhai....
Dhero Dad Hazir Hain Kabul kAREN...

Khush Rahiye...


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bahoot shukriya shihab bro..aapki har daad mere liye anmol hai.mai bilkul thik ..aap bhai logon ki duayen jo hamesha mere sath rahti hai.....ye rachna maine mere ek aziz ke liye likhi hai agar use ye padh-kar khud ki jaddo-jahad se kuch sukun mil sakega to samjhunga likhna safal hua
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«Reply #10 on: July 19, 2010, 08:57:04 AM »
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Bahut achchhi rachna hai janab ye aapki bekarar ji. Daad qubul kijiye.

(Waquif Ansari)

nakamiyon ka matam kuch yun manaya jaye,
sabak sikh ke inse, sabko bataya jaye,

jo na mil saka uska gila, aur nahi ab aur nahi,
bin mange jo mila, usi ka jashn manaya jaye,

ghamo ke saath bhi thi kuch khushiyan chipi hui,
aao unhi khushiyon pe ab kah-kaha lagaya jaye,

kab talak kisi aur ke ujaalon pe ho gujara
buland karke khudi ko, housalon ka deep jalaya jaaye

har chot pe tera shukr ata karta hai bekarar,
ye tujhi pe hai ki mujhe neend se kaise jagaya jaye,

na sheron me koi jor, na behar ka thikana,
sukhanwari ke ustadon ko ab mehfil me bulaya jaaye



नाकामियों का मातम कुछ यूँ मनाया जाए,
सबक सीख के इनसे, सबको बताया जाए,

जो ना मिल सका उसका गिला, और नही अब और नही,
बिन माँगे जो मिला, उसी का जश्न मनाया जाए,

गमों के साथ भी थी कुछ खुशियाँ छिपी हुई,
आओ उन्ही खुशियों पे अब कह-कहा लगाया जाए,

कब तलक किसी और के उजालों पे हो गुज़ारा
बुलंद करके खुदी को, हौसलों का दीप जलाया जाए

हर चोट पे तेरा शुक्र अता करता है बेकरार,
ये तुझी पे है की मुझे नींद से कैसे जगाया जाए,

ना शेरों मे कोई ज़ोर, ना बहर का ठिकाना,
सुखनवरी के उस्तादों को अब महफ़िल मे बुलाया जाए


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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2010, 09:20:40 AM »
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VERY NICE CREATION BEKARAAR-JI.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

MUJHE YE GEET YAAD HO AAYA.....

Main Zindagi Ka Saath Nibhata Chala Gaya

Har fikra ko dhuwein Mein Udata Chala Gaya

Barbadiyon ka Shok Manana fizool tha ...

Barbadiyon ka Jashn manata chala gaya ...

Har fikra ko dhuwein mein udata chala gaya ...

Jo mil gaya usee ko mukaddar samaj liya

Jo Kho gaya mein usko bhulata chala gaya

Har fikra ko dhuwein mein udata chala gaya ...

Gham aur Khushi mein phark na mehsoos ho jahan

Mein dil ko uss mukaam pey lata chala gaya ...

mein zindagi kaa saath nibhata chala gaya

Har fikra ko dhuwein mein udata chala gaya ...

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nakamiyon ka matam kuch yun manaya jaye,
sabak sikh ke inse, sabko bataya jaye,

jo na mil saka uska gila, aur nahi ab aur nahi,
bin mange jo mila, usi ka jashn manaya jaye,

ghamo ke saath bhi thi kuch khushiyan chipi hui,
aao unhi khushiyon pe ab kah-kaha lagaya jaye,

kab talak kisi aur ke ujaalon pe ho gujara
buland karke khudi ko, housalon ka deep jalaya jaaye

har chot pe tera shukr ata karta hai bekarar,
ye tujhi pe hai ki mujhe neend se kaise jagaya jaye,

na sheron me koi jor, na behar ka thikana,
sukhanwari ke ustadon ko ab mehfil me bulaya jaaye



नाकामियों का मातम कुछ यूँ मनाया जाए,
सबक सीख के इनसे, सबको बताया जाए,

जो ना मिल सका उसका गिला, और नही अब और नही,
बिन माँगे जो मिला, उसी का जश्न मनाया जाए,

गमों के साथ भी थी कुछ खुशियाँ छिपी हुई,
आओ उन्ही खुशियों पे अब कह-कहा लगाया जाए,

कब तलक किसी और के उजालों पे हो गुज़ारा
बुलंद करके खुदी को, हौसलों का दीप जलाया जाए

हर चोट पे तेरा शुक्र अता करता है बेकरार,
ये तुझी पे है की मुझे नींद से कैसे जगाया जाए,

ना शेरों मे कोई ज़ोर, ना बहर का ठिकाना,
सुखनवरी के उस्तादों को अब महफ़िल मे बुलाया जाए


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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2010, 06:03:46 PM »
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Bahut achchhi rachna hai janab ye aapki bekarar ji. Daad qubul kijiye.

(Waquif Ansari)
bahoot shukriya ansaari ji...aapne padha aur saraha....

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«Reply #13 on: July 21, 2010, 06:15:56 PM »
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VERY NICE CREATION BEKARAAR-JI.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

MUJHE YE GEET YAAD HO AAYA.....

Main Zindagi Ka Saath Nibhata Chala Gaya

Har fikra ko dhuwein Mein Udata Chala Gaya

Barbadiyon ka Shok Manana fizool tha ...

Barbadiyon ka Jashn manata chala gaya ...

Har fikra ko dhuwein mein udata chala gaya ...

Jo mil gaya usee ko mukaddar samaj liya

Jo Kho gaya mein usko bhulata chala gaya

Har fikra ko dhuwein mein udata chala gaya ...

Gham aur Khushi mein phark na mehsoos ho jahan

Mein dil ko uss mukaam pey lata chala gaya ...

mein zindagi kaa saath nibhata chala gaya

Har fikra ko dhuwein mein udata chala gaya ...

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bahoot shukriya koyal ji.....aur ye refi sahab ka mera fav. songs me se bhi hai..bahoot achcha likha hai sahir ludhiyanvi ji ne......A real positive song...............BARBAADIYON KA SOK MANANA FIZUL THA
                   BARBAADIYON KA JASHN MANATA CHALA GAYA..WAH
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