Nanhe haath

by bekarar on July 13, 2010, 10:31:38 AM
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abhi na todo in foolon ko, bagiya me mahkne do,
andhera ho bhale kitna, sitaaron ko chamkne do,

na lo kaam nanhe haathon se, inki bediyan kaato,
choone do aasma inko, baadal sa machlne do,

shamo-sahar ki zad me, is bahav ko na roko,
ye nanhi boonden baarish ki, inhe rimjhim barsne do,

aazadi do inhe bhi, padhne ki padhane ki,
galiyon aur bagichon me inhe titli pakdne do,

bach-pan me jis panchi ke par, katre jaate hain,
wo fir ud nahi paate, ise sabko samjhne do
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2010, 11:01:55 AM »
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dil me dard jaga gai aapki ye peshkash.......
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2010, 11:14:36 AM »
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bahut khub bekarar ji

gajab ki bekarari se aap ne ye peshkas di hai
maja aagaya bachon ke prati jo aap ne kaha hai aisa hi ek maine bhi likha hai kabhi wo dairy nikaal ke aap logon ko jarur sunaonga
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2010, 06:29:53 AM »
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bahut khoob Bekarar ji... samaaj ki ek samasya ko aapne apne shabdon me bahut hi sundar roop me pesh kiya hai... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2010, 01:17:51 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 13, 2010, 11:01:55 AM
dil me dard jaga gai aapki ye peshkash.......

is rachna ke marm ko samjhne ke liye aapka shukriya KDK ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2010, 01:19:58 PM »
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Quote from: Rahi2001 on July 13, 2010, 11:14:36 AM
bahut khub bekarar ji

gajab ki bekarari se aap ne ye peshkas di hai
maja aagaya bachon ke prati jo aap ne kaha hai aisa hi ek maine bhi likha hai kabhi wo dairy nikaal ke aap logon ko jarur sunaonga

shukriya Rahi ji.....lekin bekarari to tab khatm hogi jab aapki rachna dairy se nikal-kar yoindia pe post hogi.....intzaar me
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2010, 01:21:30 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 14, 2010, 06:29:53 AM
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bahut khoob Bekarar ji... samaaj ki ek samasya ko aapne apne shabdon me bahut hi sundar roop me pesh kiya hai... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

bahoot shukriya klaskar ji meri ye koshish aapko achchi lagi...housla afzai ka tah-e-dil se shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2010, 05:29:49 AM »
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    Ek nay khayal par poem likhi hai aapne.Bahut khoob Bekaraar ji.
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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2010, 05:32:40 AM »
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wah wah wah bekarar ji... wah

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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2010, 06:07:04 AM »
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Wah wah kya baat hai bahut khoobsoorat rachna hai AAPKI SANJEEV-JI........ Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Na maslo kaliyon ko khilne se pehle
Na ukhado paudho ko badhne se pehle

Ye nanhi-jaan he hain bhavishya apne desh ka
Inhe phalne-do phulne-do rakhho dhayaan inka



Quote from: bekarar on July 13, 2010, 10:31:38 AM
abhi na todo in foolon ko, bagiya me mahkne do,
andhera ho bhale kitna, sitaaron ko chamkne do,

na lo kaam nanhe haathon se, inki bediyan kaato,
choone do aasma inko, baadal sa machlne do,

shamo-sahar ki zad me, is bahav ko na roko,
ye nanhi boonden baarish ki, inhe rimjhim barsne do,

aazadi do inhe bhi, padhne ki padhane ki,
galiyon aur bagichon me inhe titli pakdne do,

bach-pan me jis panchi ke par, katre jaate hain,
wo fir ud nahi paate, ise sabko samjhne do
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«Reply #10 on: July 15, 2010, 12:40:34 PM »
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Quote from: tamanna.pt on July 15, 2010, 05:29:49 AM

    Ek nay khayal par poem likhi hai aapne.Bahut khoob Bekaraar ji.

bahoot shukriya tamanna ji
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on July 15, 2010, 05:32:40 AM
wah wah wah bekarar ji... wah

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bahoot shukriya jas bro...
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2010, 12:43:14 PM »
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Wah wah kya baat hai bahut khoobsoorat rachna hai AAPKI SANJEEV-JI........ Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Na maslo kaliyon ko khilne se pehle
Na ukhado paudho ko badhne se pehle

Ye nanhi-jaan he hain bhavishya apne desh ka
Inhe phalne-do phulne-do rakhho dhayaan inka




bahoot abhar aapka koyal ji.......aapki ye char panktiyan bhi bahoot prabhavshali hain is vishay par.
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«Reply #13 on: July 15, 2010, 12:45:47 PM »
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Shukriya Sanjeev-ji.....

Quote from: bekarar on July 15, 2010, 12:43:14 PM
bahoot abhar aapka koyal ji.......aapki ye char panktiyan bhi bahoot prabhavshali hain is vishay par.
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«Reply #14 on: July 16, 2010, 09:55:56 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob sanjeev Bro..

bahut Hi khoobsurat.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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