Nanhi Si Jaan

by harishsharmapilot on July 24, 2008, 03:01:13 PM
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 read2Nanhi si jaan-Nanhi si jaan
Aur etne sare kaam

Jab bhi dekhta hu uneko,
Kaam karti nazar atti hai

Baat Karta hu jab unsey,
Kaam ko hi dohrati hai

Magta ho samay jab unsey,
Waqt dekar Bhool jati hai

Mai Phir deakh unhey,
Hoo jata ho preshan

Ki dekho yeh,

Nanhi si jaan
Aur etne sare kaam

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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2008, 03:04:12 PM »
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Wah kaya baat hai Harish ji!! Bahoot khoob!! bahoot he pyare shabdo main apne apni bhawnao ko kavita ka roop diya hai!!

Jaldi he kuch likhne ki Koshish karugi!! Good Creation!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2008, 03:08:52 PM »
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kya baat hai harish ji....nanhi si jaan,
aur kitne kaam
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2008, 03:14:16 PM »
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hello pooja ji
aap hamara marg darshan kare to bahut accha lagega.
lot of thanks
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2008, 03:24:48 PM »
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hi bekarar ji
Thanks for your beautiful comments, actually i do not know too much   about poems. so guide me wherever you feel necessary.
lot of love, again thanks. 
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2008, 03:40:15 PM »
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Quote from: harishsharmapilot on July 24, 2008, 03:01:13 PM
read2Nanhi si jaan-Nanhi si jaan
Aur etne sare kaam

Jab bhi dekhta hu uneko,
Kaam karti nazar atti hai

Baat Karta hu jab unsey,
Kaam ko hi dohrati hai

Magta ho samay jab unsey,
Waqt dekar Bhool jati hai

Mai Phir deakh unhey,
Hoo jata ho preshan

Ki dekho yeh,

Nanhi si jaan
Aur etne sare kaam

by Harish(ss)

Harish ji bahut khoob bahut acha laga...sach me aisa hi hota hai..par samjhne wale samjhe na.....k Nanhi si jaan hai kya kya kare...
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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2008, 03:48:51 PM »
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punam ji namstey
i am very thankful to see your responce and i will feel more happy if you can also write two lines on this title, please write when you want to write.
thanks again.
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2008, 08:52:08 AM »
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waah bohut khoob harish ji
bohut sundar likha hai aapne

ek nanhi si jaan
jise kitne saare hain kaam
fir bhi sab use karte rehte hain pareshaan
kehte hain wo vyast ho gayi hai
har apne se bekhabar ho gayi hai
par kaise samjhye wo unhe
jo rehne lagi hai wo vyast
to karti hai to vo sirf apno k liye hi kaam
kaam jisse paisa ghar mei aayega
jiske paate hi har ek ka chehra khil jaayega
bas apno ko khushi dene mei hi
wo itni vyast ho chali hai
par log kehte hain use ki
wo matlabi ho chali hai
kaun samjh paaya hai waqt ki kadar
kaun dei paaya hai har farz ko anjaam
bas yahi soch k kuch khushiyaan de paaye apno ko
isliye wo din raat karti rehti hai kaam
ek nanhi si jaan..........
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2008, 09:34:25 AM »
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very nice all of you
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«Reply #9 on: July 25, 2008, 09:39:56 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kaushikbhawna ji...

Quote from: harishsharmapilot on July 24, 2008, 03:48:51 PM
punam ji namstey
i am very thankful to see your responce and i will feel more happy if you can also write two lines on this title, please write when you want to write.
thanks again.

Thanx Harish ji... samjh me nahi aata kya bolun...aap itna bole toh chalo theek hai..aap k reply me jo bana yehan post kar rahi pasand na aaye toh maaf karna..

Nanhi jaan kyun pareshaan
Kaam kaam kaam kaisa kaam

Samjhao usse arey naadan
Kaam kar par kar thoda araam

Baat karni hai to baat maan
Pyar se usko dede zara daant

Phir use karao veshraam
Subah ko likho naya kalaam

Batana ki phir nanhi jaan
Hui khush ya ho gayi pareshaan...
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2008, 09:59:14 AM »
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 :clap:Hi Punam ji
please accept my thanks for your beautiful response and I hope so you will do the same in future.
Again Thanks
Harish Pilot
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2008, 04:37:11 PM »
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Quote from: punam on July 25, 2008, 09:39:56 AM
Bahut khoob Kaushikbhawna ji...

Thanx Harish ji... samjh me nahi aata kya bolun...aap itna bole toh chalo theek hai..aap k reply me jo bana yehan post kar rahi pasand na aaye toh maaf karna..

Nanhi jaan kyun pareshaan
Kaam kaam kaam kaisa kaam

Samjhao usse arey naadan
Kaam kar par kar thoda araam

Baat karni hai to baat maan
Pyar se usko dede zara daant

Phir use karao veshraam
Subah ko likho naya kalaam

Batana ki phir nanhi jaan
Hui khush ya ho gayi pareshaan...


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Bahoot khoob Punam, bahoot he acha jawab likha hai apne!! Good job!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2008, 05:43:01 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 25, 2008, 08:52:08 AM
waah bohut khoob harish ji
bohut sundar likha hai aapne

ek nanhi si jaan
jise kitne saare hain kaam
fir bhi sab use karte rehte hain pareshaan
kehte hain wo vyast ho gayi hai
har apne se bekhabar ho gayi hai
par kaise samjhye wo unhe
jo rehne lagi hai wo vyast
to karti hai to vo sirf apno k liye hi kaam
kaam jisse paisa ghar mei aayega
jiske paate hi har ek ka chehra khil jaayega
bas apno ko khushi dene mei hi
wo itni vyast ho chali hai
par log kehte hain use ki
wo matlabi ho chali hai
kaun samjh paaya hai waqt ki kadar
kaun dei paaya hai har farz ko anjaam
bas yahi soch k kuch khushiyaan de paaye apno ko
isliye wo din raat karti rehti hai kaam
ek nanhi si jaan..........


Good one Bhawna!!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2008, 06:42:33 PM »
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Quote from: harishsharmapilot on July 24, 2008, 03:01:13 PM
read2Nanhi si jaan-Nanhi si jaan
Aur etne sare kaam

Jab bhi dekhta hu uneko,
Kaam karti nazar atti hai
..........
Ki dekho yeh,

Nanhi si jaan
Aur etne sare kaam

by Harish(ss)

Zindagi par shayiri kam hi milti hai aur aap ne to wah jee wah...
Kya khoob title chuna hai... Nanhi Si Jaan...
Buhat Achha laga...
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«Reply #14 on: July 25, 2008, 06:44:34 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 25, 2008, 08:52:08 AM
waah bohut khoob harish ji
bohut sundar likha hai aapne

ek nanhi si jaan
jise kitne saare hain kaam
fir bhi sab use karte rehte hain pareshaan
kehte hain wo vyast ho gayi hai
...............
kaun samjh paaya hai waqt ki kadar
kaun dei paaya hai har farz ko anjaam
bas yahi soch k kuch khushiyaan de paaye apno ko
isliye wo din raat karti rehti hai kaam
ek nanhi si jaan..........

Zabardast,,, kya kahne aapke Kaushik Saahib,,, Nanhi si jaan ki daastan likh daali... pasand aaya...
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