Nanhi Si Jaan

by harishsharmapilot on July 24, 2008, 03:01:13 PM
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syednaami
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«Reply #15 on: July 25, 2008, 06:55:54 PM »
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Nanhi jaan kyun pareshaan
Kaam kaam kaam kaisa kaam

Samjhao usse arey naadan
Kaam kar par kar thoda araam

Baat karni hai to baat maan
Pyar se usko dede zara daant

Phir use karao veshraam
Subah ko likho naya kalaam

Batana ki phir nanhi jaan
Hui khush ya ho gayi pareshaan...



Punam saahiba,,, aap to aaj kal har subject men shaandar likh rahi rahi hain...
Wah jee wah,,, buhat khoobsurat rachna... keep writing...
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harishsharmapilot
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«Reply #16 on: July 26, 2008, 10:31:57 PM »
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Nanhi-Si-Jaan,
Aur Zingadi Se Paresan

Har Dard Ka Bhi Hai Usey Ahesas,
Sahate Rahae hai Usey Wo Naari Bankar

Salaam Karta Hoe Unki Himmat Ko,
Aur Sochkar Ho Jata Hoo Paresan,

Bhir Bhi Dekho Mere Yaaro
Yeh,
Nanhi-Si-Jaan,
Aur Zingadi Se Paresan
by:harish sharma (ss)
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syednaami
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«Reply #17 on: July 26, 2008, 11:07:27 PM »
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Superb,,, Good to read...
Specially I like...


Har Dard Ka Bhi Hai Usey Ahesas,
Sahate Rahae hai Usey Wo Naari Bankar
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Pooja
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«Reply #18 on: July 31, 2008, 03:55:14 PM »
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nice lines Harish!!
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Roja
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«Reply #19 on: July 31, 2008, 03:58:26 PM »
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read2Nanhi si jaan-Nanhi si jaan
Aur etne sare kaam

Jab bhi dekhta hu uneko,
Kaam karti nazar atti hai

Baat Karta hu jab unsey,
Kaam ko hi dohrati hai

Magta ho samay jab unsey,
Waqt dekar Bhool jati hai

Mai Phir deakh unhey,
Hoo jata ho preshan

Ki dekho yeh,

Nanhi si jaan
Aur etne sare kaam

by Harish(ss)


Wah bahut khoob  Applause  Applause  Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #20 on: July 31, 2008, 04:01:03 PM »
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Nanhi jaan kyun pareshaan
Kaam kaam kaam kaisa kaam

Samjhao usse arey naadan
Kaam kar par kar thoda araam

Baat karni hai to baat maan
Pyar se usko dede zara daant

Phir use karao veshraam
Subah ko likho naya kalaam

Batana ki phir nanhi jaan
Hui khush ya ho gayi pareshaan...



Wah wah Punam bahut khoob  Applause  Applause Her ek line bahut accha ban pada hai.
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syednaami
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«Reply #21 on: July 31, 2008, 08:08:26 PM »
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Sab wah wah hi kar rahe hain... likho bhi kuchh... me too in the same list hehehe...
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: July 31, 2008, 08:10:36 PM »
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dikhne main nanhi si jaan
lagati hai her waqat preshan

jab dekho usko kuch na kuch kaam
dhoondein insaano main ek insaan Usual Smile

abhi aor kuch nahi bana sad5 issi se gujara karo tongue3
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syednaami
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«Reply #23 on: August 01, 2008, 01:26:15 PM »
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Buhat achha,,, kuchh to likha,,, thanks...
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Pooja
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«Reply #24 on: August 01, 2008, 01:32:24 PM »
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Usual Smile thanks!!!
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harishsharmapilot
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«Reply #25 on: August 02, 2008, 05:52:30 AM »
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Ye Nanhi Si Jaan,
Lagata Aaj hai Paresan

Kyo Na Ho,
Usko Apne Bhi Karte Hai Paresan

Suntee Hai Woo Sabkoo Phir Bhi,
Rakhtee hai woo Sabka Dhyan

Ye Nanhi Si Jaan,
Lagata Aaj hai Paresan

By Harish Pilot(SS)
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Pooja
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«Reply #26 on: August 02, 2008, 06:20:12 AM »
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nice one harish ji
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harishsharmapilot
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«Reply #27 on: August 02, 2008, 06:26:32 AM »
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nice one harish ji
Thanks Pooja ji,
Aap jase Sayar Ko kuch Likna Chaiye, One line is not enough.
 
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syednaami
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«Reply #28 on: August 03, 2008, 09:06:23 PM »
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Good work Pilot. -

Jaan hai meri
Nanhi nanhi

Beemar zara si
suni suni

Ghamgeen hai badi
dari dari

Baaten ab karti
Sahmi sahmi

Koi nazar lagi
jali jali

Chain kho rahi
ghadi gadhi

Kya karti aur
khadi kadhi

Jaan Nanhi si
dabi dabi. -


**Syed Naami**
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«Reply #29 on: August 05, 2008, 04:08:29 AM »
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Thanks syed ji
good respose, hope for the same in future.
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