Nanhi Si Jaan

by harishsharmapilot on July 24, 2008, 03:01:13 PM
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Pooja
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«Reply #30 on: August 05, 2008, 04:09:56 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai sami
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«Reply #31 on: August 05, 2008, 04:25:21 PM »
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Thanks Pooja jee so nice of you. -

--> Harish Pilot,

Okay dear, but you've gotta write soon, else, you know, court again. - read2
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«Reply #32 on: August 08, 2008, 04:33:19 PM »
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Mai hoo nahni si gudia,
but hoo jadoo ki pudia

Rakhti hoo mai sabka dhyan,
but sab ho jate hai mujeh se paresaan 
 
Hoo mai apne dadu ki pyari,
hum dono ki baat hai nyari

Seh nahi sakti unsey ek minute ki doori,
but daant bhi khati hoo unsey poori

Dhyan rakti hu mai unka poora,
Itna ki, chorr deti hoo apna kaam adhura
 
Kahte hai wo mujhe apni, Nanhi Si Jaan,
Jo rehti hai unsey, har waqt paresaan. 
 
by My sweet daughter
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Rajbir
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«Reply #33 on: August 08, 2008, 04:51:35 PM »
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Harish

How sweet ! Applause

Lots of love to Nanhi si Jaan Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #34 on: August 08, 2008, 05:02:48 PM »
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Quote from: harishsharmapilot on August 08, 2008, 04:33:19 PM
Mai hoo nahni si gudia,
but hoo jadoo ki pudia

Rakhti hoo mai sabka dhyan,
but sab ho jate hai mujeh se paresaan
 
Hoo mai apne dadu ki pyari,
hum dono ki baat hai nyari

Seh nahi sakti unsey ek minute ki doori,
but daant bhi khati hoo unsey poori

Dhyan rakti hu mai unka poora,
Itna ki, chorr deti hoo apna kaam adhura
 
Kahte hai wo mujhe apni, Nanhi Si Jaan,
Jo rehti hai unsey, har waqt paresaan.
 
by My sweet daughter

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah kay abaat hai, bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hai apki beti ne Harish ji!!! chulbuli lines poori tarah se pyar main bhari hui!! bahoot bahoot pyar is nanhi si jaan ko!!


Sun "O" nanhi se jaan, tujhi se to hai ghar ka her ek insaan
teri in bholi bholi shararto se, kaise koi ho sakta hai preshan

dekh teri hansi, dil mehak jaata hai
jo ho jaaye tu udaas, dil dehal jaata hai

kabhi daddu kabhi dadi ka dil behlaati hai
din per din badati umar, teri dara jaati hai

na pahanchu jo ghar waqat per, call pe call lagati hai
teri her choti se choti baat, mujhe jeena sikhaati hai

Sun "O" nanhi se jaan, teri bholi baatein badi suhaati hai
Hans deti hai jo tu, yah sari kaynaat thum si jaati hai!!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #35 on: August 08, 2008, 05:26:48 PM »
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Pooja

Wah ! wah ! Tusi wi chaa gaye nanhi si jaan ke saath Usual Smile

Very good Thumbs UP
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syednaami
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«Reply #36 on: August 09, 2008, 11:40:27 AM »
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Harish your daughter wrote really exquisite.  Applause

Pooja jee, you are always commendable. -  Clapping Smiley
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harishsharmapilot
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«Reply #37 on: August 10, 2008, 04:23:27 PM »
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Hello all seniors,
thanks for your comments on Nahi si Jaan poem.
regards
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harishsharmapilot
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«Reply #38 on: January 11, 2009, 01:03:17 AM »
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Nanhi Si Jaan, Aur Etney Sare Kaam
Per Sayad Wo Aaj Kal
Kar Raahi Hai Aaram,

Challo Dosto Os Nanhi Jaan Ko Bhi
Karne Do Aaram
Kyoki Kal Phir Hooga Oose Kaam hi Kaam.
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Pooja
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«Reply #39 on: January 21, 2009, 05:34:58 PM »
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nice one Harish ji!!
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smardia
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«Reply #40 on: January 21, 2009, 06:16:36 PM »
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Nanhi Si Jaan....In this thread...Every body has written very well.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah ri beetiya nanhi jaan
Kya khoob hai teri pehchan
Papa pilot tu bharti unchi udaan
Khoob likhna karna shabdo ka daan

Surendra Mardia
Quote from: harishsharmapilot on August 08, 2008, 04:33:19 PM
Mai hoo nahni si gudia,
but hoo jadoo ki pudia

Rakhti hoo mai sabka dhyan,
but sab ho jate hai mujeh se paresaan 
 
Hoo mai apne dadu ki pyari,
hum dono ki baat hai nyari

Seh nahi sakti unsey ek minute ki doori,
but daant bhi khati hoo unsey poori

Dhyan rakti hu mai unka poora,
Itna ki, chorr deti hoo apna kaam adhura
 
Kahte hai wo mujhe apni, Nanhi Si Jaan,
Jo rehti hai unsey, har waqt paresaan. 
 
by My sweet daughter
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harishsharmapilot
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«Reply #41 on: January 23, 2009, 02:35:30 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 21, 2009, 05:34:58 PM
nice one Harish ji!!
Thanks Pooja ji
But it look more nice if u write some words.
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harishsharmapilot
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«Reply #42 on: January 23, 2009, 02:39:44 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on January 21, 2009, 06:16:36 PM
Nanhi Si Jaan....In this thread...Every body has written very well.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah ri beetiya nanhi jaan
Kya khoob hai teri pehchan
Papa pilot tu bharti unchi udaan
Khoob likhna karna shabdo ka daan

Surendra Mardia
Thanks a lot Smardia ji
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