Naynon main neer bhare hun main......

by manjum on March 07, 2011, 04:24:21 AM
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kal mahila divas ke lie kayi kaitaen likhi hain linme se ek aaj aap sab samne pesh hai... jo ek Aurat ki kahani hai... chand line main.... bayan karne koshish hai Aurat ko...

Naynon main neer bhare hun main.
Aanchal main chheer bhare hun main.

Aurat hun main is karan se,
Hirday main peer bhare hun main.

Mujhko hota koi dard nahin,
Kuchh eise deer dhare hun main......
Naynon main neer bhare hun main....

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2011, 07:54:04 AM »
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absolutely mindblowing creation manjum ji....
lafz kam hai aapke is kalam ki tareef ke liye...
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2011, 10:51:57 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya manzilji....
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2011, 11:25:48 AM »
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wah bahut hi baddiya Manjum ji,kamaal ki peshkash,great work,keep it up,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2011, 11:33:45 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya.... madhuweshji....
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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2011, 12:03:34 PM »
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very truely lines manjum heads of u
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«Reply #6 on: March 08, 2011, 03:28:39 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya saahilji.... yuni sath rahiyega...
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«Reply #7 on: March 08, 2011, 03:29:39 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shihabji......  sath rahiega....
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2011, 07:30:28 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2011, 03:16:56 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya adilji..... sath rahie... khush rahie...
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«Reply #10 on: March 10, 2011, 09:29:33 AM »
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kal mahila divas ke lie kayi kaitaen likhi hain linme se ek aaj aap sab samne pesh hai... jo ek Aurat ki kahani hai... chand line main.... bayan karne koshish hai Aurat ko...

Naynon main neer bhare hun main.
Aanchal main chheer bhare hun main.

Aurat hun main is karan se,
Hirday main peer bhare hun main.

Mujhko hota koi dard nahin,
Kuchh eise deer dhare hun main......
Naynon main neer bhare hun main....

manju "mann"


Bahut Kam Lafzon mein Aapne Gehri Baatein ki Hai Manju ji..

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: March 10, 2011, 09:31:56 AM »
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bahutbahut shukriya khwaishji.... pada aur samjha...

sath rahie...
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