Nazm...{Adab}

by drpandey on June 04, 2015, 09:21:02 AM
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एक  नज़्म {अदब}
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मैं अभी काँच का इक टुकड़ा हूँ
अपने हाथों से मुझे मत छूना  
वरना नाज़ुक सी तेरी उँगली पर    
ज़ाबिदा ज़ख्म सा बन जाऊँगा।
कल मेरा वक़्त मुझे पिघला कर
मेरा खारों सा बदन सहला कर
फिर तेरा आइना बनायेगा,
और तू मुझमें तलाशेगी खुद को  
तब तेरी सूरतें सजाऊँगा।
शब्र कर मुझको पिघल जाने दे  
मुझको शीशे में बदल जाने दे  
आज फिर डूब के एक साँचे में
अपने पैमाने में ढल जाने दे  
मैं तेरी शाम बनके आऊँगा।
फिर तेरी सूरतें सजाऊँगा।।
~अदब~
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2015, 09:57:53 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2015, 05:13:31 PM »
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एक  नज़्म {अदब}
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मैं अभी काँच का इक टुकड़ा हूँ
अपने हाथों से मुझे मत छूना 
वरना नाज़ुक सी तेरी उँगली पर   
ज़ाबिदा ज़ख्म सा बन जाऊँगा।
कल मेरा वक़्त मुझे पिघला कर
मेरा खारों सा बदन सहला कर
फिर तेरा आइना बनायेगा,
और तू मुझमें तलाशेगी खुद को   
तब तेरी सूरतें सजाऊँगा।
शब्र कर मुझको पिघल जाने दे   
मुझको शीशे में बदल जाने दे   
आज फिर डूब के एक साँचे में
अपने पैमाने में ढल जाने दे   
मैं तेरी शाम बनके आऊँगा।
फिर तेरी सूरतें सजाऊँगा।।
~अदब~



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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2015, 09:22:32 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2015, 01:06:14 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2015, 08:28:23 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2015, 09:03:55 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2015, 11:23:05 AM »
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Kya baat hai. Bahut umda.
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Thanks a lot Khamosh_Aawaaz Ji....!!

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bahut hee sunder Adab Sahib.
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Tahe dil se shukriya Surindarn Sahib....!!

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Dhanyvaad Vaibhav Ji....!!

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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2015, 05:53:28 AM »
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Bohat bohat umda waaaahhhh
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