Neem ke phool...:Shairi - E

asif faiz

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Ye to dastoor-e- mohabbat hai,
Log milkar bichad jaate hain...

Jazbaat dil ke bayaan hote ho jinme,
Alfaaz wo ankahe rah jaate hain...

Daulat ki chaah me judte hain jo,
Rishte wo aksar toot jaate hain...

Unki badkismati ki bhi kya misaal ho,
Bachpan me hi jo yatim ho jaate hain...

Mohabbat aur apnepan ka daava karnewale,
Museebat me tanha chor jaate hain...

Aisi bulandi bhi kis kaam ki "asif"
Apne agar aankho se door ho jaate hain...

- Asif faiz


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2013, 02:49:02 PM »

Ghazal achhi hai , asif sahib . Lekin pahle 2 sher , agar main ghalat nahi hoon to, Tahir Faraz sahib ke hain . Barai mehrbani wazaahat kareiN . Agar main ghalat hoon to muafi ka talabgar hoon . Agar nahin to aap apni ghalti tasleem karein aur aayenda aisa karne se gurez karein .HASAN


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asif faiz

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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2013, 02:54:00 PM »

Siddiqui saahab...yakeen maniye na maine kabhi ye 2 sher kahin padhe hain na sune hain....main hairaan hun aapki baat sunkar...


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2013, 03:06:15 PM »

Quote from: asif faiz on May 14, 2013, 02:54:00 PM

Siddiqui saahab...yakeen maniye na maine kabhi ye 2 sher kahin padhe hain na sune hain....main hairaan hun aapki baat sunkar...

Mohtaram, Abhi Sat/Sun (May 11/12 2013)ko Etv Urdu se Dubai ka eik mushaira telecast hua thha , us mein yeh ashaar parhe gaye thhe . Is se pahle bhi mushayere mein parhe jaa chuke hain . Ho sakta hai ki aap ke sub - conscious mein hon aur aap ne jaan boojh kar na naqal kiya ho. Lekin , waise bhi aapki ghazal qafiyon aur Matle se aari hai . Ye sher baaqi ashaar se meil nahi khaate. Meri baat pe hairaan hone ke bajaai check kar lein . Agar ghalti ho gai hai to uske aitraaf mein koi buri baat nahin hai. Hum sub insaan hain aur ghalti ain mumkin hai.


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asif faiz

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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2013, 03:09:50 PM »

ho sakta hai sub-conscious me hua ho..maine jaan bujh kar nahi kiya hai...aur phir kehta hun..maine p[ahle kabhi kahin b ye nahi sune hain na padhe hain.


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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #5 on: May 14, 2013, 03:14:59 PM »

Quote from: asif faiz on May 14, 2013, 02:41:52 PM

Waqt se pooch raha hai koi,
Zakhm kya wakayi bhar jaate hain...

Zindagi tere ta-aakub me hum,
Itna chalte hain k mar jaate hain...

Ye to dastoor-e- mohabbat hai,
Log milkar bichad jaate hain...

Jazbaat dil ke bayaan hote ho jinme,
Alfaaz wo ankahe rah jaate hain...

Daulat ki chaah me judte hain jo,
Rishte wo aksar toot jaate hain...

Unki badkismati ki bhi kya misaal ho,
Bachpan me hi jo yatim ho jaate hain...

Mohabbat aur apnepan ka daava karnewale,
Museebat me tanha chor jaate hain...

Aisi bulandi bhi kis kaam ki "asif"
Apne agar aankho se door ho jaate hain...

- Asif faiz

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Ji Bilkul Hasan saheb...Yeh pehle 2 Ashaar Tahir Faraz Ji Ke Hai..

Aur Baaki Ke Ashaar Ke Kaafiye Bhi Aapas Mein Mail Nahi Khaate Par Haan Asif Bhai Aapke Jazbaat Ghehre Hain.. Inhe Zaroor Sahee LafzoN Mein Utaarte Rahe..


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2013, 03:15:31 PM »

Quote from: asif faiz on May 14, 2013, 03:09:50 PM

ho sakta hai sub-conscious me hua ho..maine jaan bujh kar nahi kiya hai...aur phir kehta hun..maine p[ahle kabhi kahin b ye nahi sune hain na padhe hain.

Thanks , asif sahib ki aapne wo ashaar apni ghazal se remove kar diye .


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asif faiz

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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2013, 03:18:26 PM »

ji ...lekin main ab bhi ...apni baat par kaayam hun..maine wo nakal nahi kiye the...


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laaiba

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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2013, 03:47:57 PM »

bohat khoob asif ji,..............daad,........


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asif faiz

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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2013, 03:54:58 PM »

shukriya laaiba ji..


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Bhupinder Kaur

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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2013, 07:57:19 PM »

Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley


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asif faiz

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Re: Neem ke phool...

«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2013, 09:10:43 PM »

shukriya bhupinder ji..


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