Nind khuli to...

by Pooja on May 23, 2008, 06:45:09 PM
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«Reply #60 on: October 17, 2008, 07:03:11 PM »
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nice lines Kanta!!
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«Reply #61 on: February 11, 2009, 05:20:39 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 23, 2008, 06:45:09 PM
Ek ladki hai jo jab kisi se mili to uske liye uski sari dunia wahin thum gai thi..usne wo hi jiya, wo he kiya, jo uske premi ne kaha. Magar ajj jab wo usse juda ho gaya hai to use aise lag raha hai jaise wo ek lambi nind se uthi ho.. aor nind se uthne ke baad jo khayal uske man mai hai wo hi likhne ki koshish ki hai...

Nind khuli to khud ko bahoot tanha paaya
Khwab main hi beet gaya ek yug, khud se juda paaya
Bichard kar tujhse laga ki main kho gai hu kahin
Aor kabhi laga  jaise barso ke baad khud ko hai paaya

Ruk gai thi jameen meri barso se, ruk gaya tha asmaan
Ajj khule asmaan ke tale, khud ko jameen per paaya
Badal gai kab kaise yah dunia, dekh kar hairan hai man
Khud ko to maine ajj bhi waise ka waisa he paaya

Sikh rahi hu, sikhna hai bahoot kuch ab tere bin
Khud ki zindagi ko, khud-b-khud badlta paaya
Dard hota hai bahoot, aor ankhon mai aa jaati hai barsaat
Jab bhi khayalo main us beete khwabo ko paaya

Nind khuli to khud ko bahoot tanha paaya
Khwab main hi beet gaya ek yug, khud se juda paaya......

waah Didi, Kya Khoob Likha Hai,.
Sorry Pardhne Mein Bohat Dairi Kardi,.
Lekin Mashallah Bohat Hi Badhiya Likha Hai,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,
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«Reply #62 on: February 17, 2009, 04:40:00 PM »
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Thanks Lil Bro!!
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«Reply #63 on: February 17, 2009, 04:55:19 PM »
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bahoot hi khoob pooja ji Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #64 on: February 25, 2009, 05:20:55 PM »
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Thanks salma!!
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«Reply #65 on: February 25, 2009, 05:52:58 PM »
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Kalpana hai ya hakikat aap jaane......Kavita badi sunder ban aayee hai...
Hamne bhi jab "Neend Khuli tab..." padha isse... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #66 on: February 25, 2009, 05:57:28 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on February 25, 2009, 05:52:58 PM
Kalpana hai ya hakikat aap jaane......Kavita badi sunder ban aayee hai...
Hamne bhi jab "Neend Khuli tab..." padha isse... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Apko kon se wali kavita achi lagi.. agar app Quote kar dete to samjhne main asaani hoti!!!

Apne pada aor saraha iske liye bahoot bahoot shukaria smardia ji!!
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«Reply #67 on: April 28, 2009, 07:45:50 PM »
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Nind khulati hai aor khumari rahti hai
insaan ko kyun umeendo ki bimaari rahti hai

Khumari bhi rahti hai magar kuch waqat sath
Phir zindagi ki haqiqat ki sawaari rahti hai
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«Reply #68 on: May 15, 2009, 10:44:44 PM »
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good poetry pooja, where r u
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«Reply #69 on: May 15, 2009, 10:49:31 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 28, 2009, 07:45:50 PM
Nind khulati hai aor khumari rahti hai
insaan ko kyun umeendo ki bimaari rahti hai

Khumari bhi rahti hai magar kuch waqat sath
Phir zindagi ki haqiqat ki sawaari rahti hai


Nice lines Pooja Ji
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«Reply #70 on: May 16, 2009, 03:31:23 AM »
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shukaria Rajesh ji
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«Reply #71 on: July 06, 2009, 09:17:38 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 27, 2008, 04:42:56 PM
sawalon ka kafila kuch yun chala,
tanhaiyon me hum kadam ban kar mila,
ab to maine chod din koshishen jawab ki,
har baar jab mera jawab sabko khala


nice lines Bekarar ji!!
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«Reply #72 on: July 06, 2009, 09:55:18 PM »
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Wow I feel like neend khul hee gaee

good job by everybody. Mostly found nazm poetry.
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«Reply #73 on: July 09, 2009, 04:12:08 PM »
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Quote from: MHussain on July 06, 2009, 09:55:18 PM
Wow I feel like neend khul hee gaee

good job by everybody. Mostly found nazm poetry.



Shukaria MHussain ji
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