Nirapraadh daman-pratarhan wyathit kartey hain hrudaya ko!

by abdbundeli on October 29, 2008, 06:04:28 AM
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Nirapraadh daman-pratarhan wyathit kartey hain hrudaya ko!
Nirarthak shhadyantra, poorwaagrah, prabal kartey anaya ko!
Asat ko, yadi siddh karnaa sahaj hotaa satya, chhal sey;
Samwidhaan sabhee hamaarey lupt hotey waangmaya sey!!

                                 - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2008, 06:46:45 AM »
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Shri Ram Prakash

Na gati na uplabhya na hetuvidyaa, parantu anvesha dayak.
Yadi na rochate, kshama.
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2008, 12:45:41 PM »
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Shri Ram Prakash
Na gati na uplabhya na hetuvidyaa, parantu anvesha dayak.
Yadi na rochate, kshama.

syednaami ji!
I'm sorry, I could not follow you! Are you referring from DARSHAN or what? I've written a book named 'Diggi Raja Key Naam', and this stanza is from the same. It's a long 'Kavya Patra'.
Does 'gati' stands for fluency? Then it has a near perfect fluency. 'Hetuvidyaa' term has never appeared before my eyes! But, the 'Hetu' of this stanza is that 'Nobody should be oppressed/punished without a crime or an anti-social activity, because it causes an unwanted-unnecessory heart-felt pain.'
Now for the convenience of Urdu-knowing people, I'm explaining the phrases that I've used in this stanza:
Nirapraadh daman-pratarhan = Opperession (of persons) without an offence/crime; wyathit kartey hain hrudaya ko = cause heart-felt pains; Nirarthak shhadyantra, poorwaagrah, prabal kartey anaya ko = Senseless conspiracies and prejudices strengthen the criminal-temperaments; Asat ko, yadi siddh karnaa sahaj hotaa satya, chhal sey = If it could have been possible to prove a truth as a falsehood, through deviousness/ deceit /deception(?); Samwidhaan sabhee hamaarey lupt hotey waangmaya sey = All our laws/acts/ constitutions should  have disappeared from our literature(s).
        Please, let me know if still there is some thing to be explained?
            Thanks!
                     - R.P.Garg 'abd bundeli'
 

 
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2008, 03:43:57 PM »
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Itani shudh Hindi  DOH
Mujhko achi tarah se kuch bhi samjh nahi aya  BangHead
Please saral hindi main anuwaad kare Abd ji!!  notworthy
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2008, 02:58:26 AM »
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Pooja ji!
Saral Hindi anuwaad hai:
Binaa kisee bhi apraadh key hi anuchit maansik ya shaareerik utpeerhan ya dabaaw, bal prayog tathaa maar-peet, wyakti ko haardik beydnaa pahunchaatee hai! Binaa kisee kaaran key rachey gaye shhdyantra; kisee key bhi prati pahiley sey hi binaa kisee bhi pramaan key anuchit tathaa pratikool rai banaa leynaa;
Anyaaya-poorn pratishodh ko shaktiwaan banaa deytey hain!
 
Yadi, chhal key prayog sey, asatya ko satya siddh karnaa bahut hi saral hotaa, to, hamaarey saahitya tathaa abhileykhoun sey samast niyam-widhi-widhaan gaayab ho chukey hotey! ( Yani, asatya ko satya  ka roop dey paanaa lagbhag asambhaw hai!)
                        - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli

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«Reply #5 on: November 15, 2009, 01:33:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2009, 01:26:16 PM »
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Bahut khoob Abd Ji

Thanks, Rajesh ji!
          - abd bundeli
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