Nit Naye Khawab man mein sajote rahe, Bojh hum zindagi ka yoon dhhote rahe...... Ram Saraswat

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Zindagi  se ho kyoon,  koi  shikwa   gila,
zindagi  se  nahi hamko, kyaa khuchh mila.

Narm   si  dhoop  ke   sakht   saaye   mile,
apno  ki   shakl   mein, sab  paraaye  mile. 

Kuchh  paraaye  bhi  ho  kar  ke, apne lage,
they  haqiqat  mein, per  hamko sapne  lage.

Zindagi  hamko,  aadhii   adhoori     milee,
paas   aaii  to, per rakh ke  doori   milee.
 
Ik   rawani  ke  bhi saath, thahraao    saa,
shaant  si thi  kabhi, tha kabhi taao   saa.

Unsuni   si  kabhi,  to  kabhi   un    kahi,
zindagi   apni,   yoohi   guzarti      rahi.

Minnatein  saath  thiin,  to  kabhi  iltija,
kuchh   baharon  ke  bhi saath,aaii  khizaa.

Pyaar   barsa  kabhi  to,   niradar   kabhi,
pair  lambe they, chhoti thee chaader kabhi.

Nit  naye  khawab, man  mein  sanjote  rahe,
bojh   ham  zindagi  ka yoon,  dhhote  rahe.

Aasman  tak  ko, chhoo  lene  ki chaah thee,
door  manzil  thee, behad  kathin raah thee.

Josh  man  mein to  hardam hi, bharpoor tha,
per  zameen  per they  hum,aasmaan door tha.

Dekhate   dhekhate,  umar   dhalne     lagi,
soch   kar   zindagi,  haath  malne    lagi.

Dar   gaii   zindagi,  dekh  kar    ibtada,
paas    aane     lagaa, waqt - e -  alvida.

Zindagi  mein  hamein,koii bhi gham naheen,
Zindagi "Ram"  khud, gum se hai kum naheen.   


 

   





 
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2012, 04:16:31 PM »
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Ram  saraswat  ji . Bahut   khubsurat  kalaam  pesh  kiya  hai .
Waqai  zindagi  ki  tasweer  pesh  ka r di  ,  aur  bahut  pyare
andaz mein .bahut  daad.
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2012, 04:23:34 PM »
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Ram ji, bahut hi umda bayaangi ki hai aapne, aaj ke mahaul me haal-e-zindagi sabki kuch isi tarah hai, aur sabse khoob baat ki aapne ye saari baateN bahut hi aam alfaazon men bayaan kar diya hai, bas yahi umeed karunga ki aage aapse aur bhi umda qalamkaariyaan dekhnen ko milengi... Khush rahiye aur likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2012, 04:33:04 PM »
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bahut hee laajawaab peshkash sir ji hardik badhaaai aur ek rau qubool karen
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2012, 05:18:56 PM »
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Josh  man  mein to  hardam hi, bharpoor tha,
per  zameen  per they  hum,aasmaan door tha.

Dekhate   dhekhate,  umar   dhalne     lagi,
soch   kar   zindagi,  haath  malne    lagi.

Dar   gaii   zindagi,  dekh  kar    ibtada,
paas    aane     lagaa, waqt - e -  alvida.

Zindagi  mein  hamein,koii bhi gham naheen,
Zindagi "Ram"  khud, gum se hai kum naheen.   

poora kalaam hi apne aap me naayaab hai Sir.
par inhe padhkar dil bhar aaya.
dil ko choo gayee aapki ye peshkash.
kho sa gaya padhte padhte.
ek bahti huyee dhara ki tarah..unvarat..kahi koi thahraao naheen.
taareef ke liye samuchit shabda nahee mere paas.
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«Reply #5 on: November 30, 2012, 05:21:21 PM »
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Zindagi hamko, aadhii adhoori milee,
paas aaii to, per rakh ke doori milee.



bahut badiya Ram Saraswat sb  Thumbs UP
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: December 04, 2012, 07:22:05 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 30, 2012, 04:16:31 PM
Ram  saraswat  ji . Bahut   khubsurat  kalaam  pesh  kiya  hai .
Waqai  zindagi  ki  tasweer  pesh  ka r di  ,  aur  bahut  pyare
andaz mein .bahut  daad.
Bahut bahut shukriya Siddiqui Saheb.
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«Reply #10 on: December 04, 2012, 07:24:32 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 30, 2012, 04:23:34 PM
Ram ji, bahut hi umda bayaangi ki hai aapne, aaj ke mahaul me haal-e-zindagi sabki kuch isi tarah hai, aur sabse khoob baat ki aapne ye saari baateN bahut hi aam alfaazon men bayaan kar diya hai, bas yahi umeed karunga ki aage aapse aur bhi umda qalamkaariyaan dekhnen ko milengi... Khush rahiye aur likhte rahiye...
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Taish Saheb
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 30, 2012, 04:33:04 PM
bahut hee laajawaab peshkash sir ji hardik badhaaai aur ek rau qubool karen
Bahut bahut Shukriya Dr. Saini
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«Reply #12 on: December 04, 2012, 07:27:03 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 30, 2012, 05:18:56 PM
Josh  man  mein to  hardam hi, bharpoor tha,
per  zameen  per they  hum,aasmaan door tha.

Dekhate   dhekhate,  umar   dhalne     lagi,
soch   kar   zindagi,  haath  malne    lagi.

Dar   gaii   zindagi,  dekh  kar    ibtada,
paas    aane     lagaa, waqt - e -  alvida.

Zindagi  mein  hamein,koii bhi gham naheen,
Zindagi "Ram"  khud, gum se hai kum naheen.   

poora kalaam hi apne aap me naayaab hai Sir.
par inhe padhkar dil bhar aaya.
dil ko choo gayee aapki ye peshkash.
kho sa gaya padhte padhte.
ek bahti huyee dhara ki tarah..unvarat..kahi koi thahraao naheen.
taareef ke liye samuchit shabda nahee mere paas.

Bahut bahut Shukriya MKVji
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