Nit Naye Khawab man mein sajote rahe, Bojh hum zindagi ka yoon dhhote rahe...... Ram Saraswat

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«Reply #15 on: December 04, 2012, 07:30:20 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 01, 2012, 09:13:41 AM
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«Reply #16 on: December 04, 2012, 07:31:12 PM »
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«Reply #17 on: December 12, 2012, 05:08:57 PM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on November 30, 2012, 03:48:34 PM
Zindagi  se ho kyoon,  koi  shikwa   gila,
zindagi  se  nahi hamko, kyaa khuchh mila.

Narm   si  dhoop  ke   sakht   saaye   mile,
apno  ki   shakl   mein, sab  paraaye  mile. 

Kuchh  paraaye  bhi  ho  kar  ke, apne lage,
they  haqiqat  mein, per  hamko sapne  lage.

Zindagi  hamko,  aadhii   adhoori     milee,
paas   aaii  to, per rakh ke  doori   milee.
 
Ik   rawani  ke  bhi saath, thahraao    saa,
shaant  si thi  kabhi, tha kabhi taao   saa.

Unsuni   si  kabhi,  to  kabhi   un    kahi,
zindagi   apni,   yoohi   guzarti      rahi.

Minnatein  saath  thiin,  to  kabhi  iltija,
kuchh   baharon  ke  bhi saath,aaii  khizaa.

Pyaar   barsa  kabhi  to,   niradar   kabhi,
pair  lambe they, chhoti thee chaader kabhi.

Nit  naye  khawab, man  mein  sanjote  rahe,
bojh   ham  zindagi  ka yoon,  dhhote  rahe.

Aasman  tak  ko, chhoo  lene  ki chaah thee,
door  manzil  thee, behad  kathin raah thee.

Josh  man  mein to  hardam hi, bharpoor tha,
per  zameen  per they  hum,aasmaan door tha.

Dekhate   dhekhate,  umar   dhalne     lagi,
soch   kar   zindagi,  haath  malne    lagi.

Dar   gaii   zindagi,  dekh  kar    ibtada,
paas    aane     lagaa, waqt - e -  alvida.

Zindagi  mein  hamein,koii bhi gham naheen,
Zindagi "Ram"  khud, gum se hai kum naheen.   


 

   





 









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«Reply #18 on: December 12, 2012, 06:08:46 PM »
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Ye jo Zindagi ki kitab hai, Ye kitaab bhi kya kitaab hai......
aapke likhe alfaaz padhkar ye ghazal yaad aa gayi....bahut hi khoob Ram ji
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«Reply #19 on: December 13, 2012, 11:56:35 AM »
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Saraswat Jee Aadaab!


Awwal toH muafi chahuNga ke maiN aapki is khoobsurat nazm par itni
Deri se haazri lagayi... Usual Smile

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne bade hi pur asar aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal
ko aapne bayaaN kiya hai ... Usual Smile
Zindagi ka falsafa behad khoobi se bayaaN kiya hai... Usual Smile


Is umda nazm par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye....

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #20 on: December 15, 2012, 04:18:44 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 12, 2012, 05:08:57 PM

gr8888888888888 ghazal,sir
Bahut bahut shukriya Bhai Marhoom Bahayaat ji
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«Reply #21 on: December 15, 2012, 04:21:08 PM »
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Ye jo Zindagi ki kitab hai, Ye kitaab bhi kya kitaab hai......
aapke likhe alfaaz padhkar ye ghazal yaad aa gayi....bahut hi khoob Ram ji
Bahut bahut shukriya Nikhaar ji
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«Reply #22 on: December 15, 2012, 04:22:56 PM »
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Saraswat Jee Aadaab!


Awwal toH muafi chahuNga ke maiN aapki is khoobsurat nazm par itni
Deri se haazri lagayi... Usual Smile

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne bade hi pur asar aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal
ko aapne bayaaN kiya hai ... Usual Smile
Zindagi ka falsafa behad khoobi se bayaaN kiya hai... Usual Smile


Is umda nazm par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye....

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Parwaaz ji, Bahut bahut Shukriya
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«Reply #24 on: December 31, 2012, 10:15:19 AM »
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Ram saraswat ji, zindagi ko itni khoobsorati se nazm ki shakl me dhaal diya hai aapne ....ek-ek ehsaas bilkul apna sa lagta hai...waqai bahut umda kalaam hai..meri jaanib se bahut bahut mubaarakbaad or dheron daad qubool kijiye!
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«Reply #26 on: December 31, 2012, 06:50:50 PM »
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Ram saraswat ji, zindagi ko itni khoobsorati se nazm ki shakl me dhaal diya hai aapne ....ek-ek ehsaas bilkul apna sa lagta hai...waqai bahut umda kalaam hai..meri jaanib se bahut bahut mubaarakbaad or dheron daad qubool kijiye!
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«Reply #27 on: April 07, 2013, 08:49:05 PM »
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waah kya baat hai,

nice 1 ram ji
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waah kya baat hai,

nice 1 ram ji
Shukriya bahut bahut
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«Reply #29 on: July 25, 2013, 11:01:00 PM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on November 30, 2012, 03:48:34 PM
Zindagi  se ho kyoon,  koi  shikwa   gila,
zindagi  se  nahi hamko, kyaa khuchh mila.

Narm   si  dhoop  ke   sakht   saaye   mile,
apno  ki   shakl   mein, sab  paraaye  mile. 

Kuchh  paraaye  bhi  ho  kar  ke, apne lage,
they  haqiqat  mein, per  hamko sapne  lage.

Zindagi  hamko,  aadhii   adhoori     milee,
paas   aaii  to, per rakh ke  doori   milee.
 
Ik   rawani  ke  bhi saath, thahraao    saa,
shaant  si thi  kabhi, tha kabhi taao   saa.

Unsuni   si  kabhi,  to  kabhi   un    kahi,
zindagi   apni,   yoohi   guzarti      rahi.

Minnatein  saath  thiin,  to  kabhi  iltija,
kuchh   baharon  ke  bhi saath,aaii  khizaa.

Pyaar   barsa  kabhi  to,   niradar   kabhi,
pair  lambe they, chhoti thee chaader kabhi.

Nit  naye  khawab, man  mein  sanjote  rahe,
bojh   ham  zindagi  ka yoon,  dhhote  rahe.

Aasman  tak  ko, chhoo  lene  ki chaah thee,
door  manzil  thee, behad  kathin raah thee.

Josh  man  mein to  hardam hi, bharpoor tha,
per  zameen  per they  hum,aasmaan door tha.

Dekhate   dhekhate,  umar   dhalne     lagi,
soch   kar   zindagi,  haath  malne    lagi.

Dar   gaii   zindagi,  dekh  kar    ibtada,
paas    aane     lagaa, waqt - e -  alvida.

Zindagi  mein  hamein,koii bhi gham naheen,
Zindagi "Ram"  khud, gum se hai kum naheen.   


 

   





 







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