paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye:Shairi - E

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paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye
kucchh isey dena nahin sab aazmaane ke liye

kucchh isey kehna nahin bas bolti hi ja rahi
baat kartee baat ko aagey baddhhaane ke liye

ghoont pehla aatish-e-dil ko bujhaane ko piya
aakhiri thaa shamma-e-zehan jalaane ke liye

bas jagaana mat mujhe ke thak ke main hoon so gaya
jaag kar din raat soton ko jagaane ke liye

jab huween dushvariyaan aasan uthkar chal diye
ik nayee deewangee ko sar chaddhhane ke liye

meri nadaani pe mere ilm pe hairaan na ho
dono dikhlaaye namoonaa bhar zamaane ke liye


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Re: paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye

«Reply #1 on: November 06, 2010, 09:18:24 AM »

Buhat khoob zarra jee!

go hamaari naa-qas aqal k muqaabil is ghazal main lafzon ka her-pher kuch zyaada hay... lakin hum ilm-e-arooz say bilkul naa-waqif honay k baa-wajood, is ghazal main, aap ki beher par dastaras ko qaabil-e-daad samajhtay hain... zameen bhe mushkil hay.. khoob nibhaaya aap ne....


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Re: paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye

«Reply #2 on: November 06, 2010, 09:59:30 AM »

tahey dil se shukriya, vb ji. aap jaise qadradaanon aur fan ke ashikon ki vajah se hi likhte rehte hain.


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Re: paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye

«Reply #3 on: November 06, 2010, 02:10:34 PM »

Zarra Sahab Aadaab!

Ta'keer se reply dene ke liye mazarrat chahte hai..
Aapki kalaam behd khoob lagi hume.... Is mushkil kavish ko
aapne bayaaN bhi achcha kiya hai......

daad kabool kijiye khuda hafez.....

Quote from: zarra on November 05, 2010, 08:10:50 AM


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Re: paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye

«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2010, 02:18:35 PM »

bahaut shukriya parwaaz sahab. aapki zarranawazi hai.


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zarra

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Re: paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye

«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2010, 08:58:58 AM »

ek taazaa sher kaha hai is ghazal mein ....

husn ko maanaa ataa haq hai sataane ka magar
todana dil laazmee hai kya sataane ke liye


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Re: paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye

«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2010, 09:54:23 AM »

bahoooooooooooot khoooob likha ...daad kabool karen


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Re: paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye

«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2010, 10:34:56 AM »

shukriya bekarar ji


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Re: paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye

«Reply #8 on: November 09, 2010, 08:47:02 AM »

zarra ji naam zarra or asmaan jaisi baate ..kya bat he bhaii..bahut khoob..

dher sari daad~


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Re: paas aatee zindagi bas door jaane ke liye

«Reply #9 on: November 09, 2010, 04:45:32 PM »

abhi bhai. bahaut bahaut shukriya, tahe dil se .. daad ka aur woh bhi itne apnepan se.

sahab, hamein aasmaan pe mat baithaiye ... ek to is ke qabil nahin aur doosre wahan se gire to ek zarra bhi nahin bachega Usual Smile


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