Pahron say marusthal tak------sheel didi

by sushilbansal on October 11, 2012, 04:18:04 PM
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Paharon say marusthal tak
dohendtay ho Aashiana
Aatey kyu nahi kabhi
mayre palkon ki chaon may.?

Bhagtey doerhtay ho,
hanftay sisektey ho
laytey keyu nahi vishram
Ma kay Aanchal ki chaon may.?
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2012, 04:58:20 PM »
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Quote from: sushilbansal on October 11, 2012, 04:18:04 PM
Paharon say marusthal tak
dohendtay ho Aashiana
Aatey kyu nahi kabhi
mayre palkon ki chaon may.?

Bhagtey doerhtay ho,
hanftay sisektey ho
laytey keyu nahi vishram
Ma kay Aanchal ki chaon may.?




waah sheel didi aap ki poem ne dil ki gahraai tak asar kiya. bahut khoob wah wah...!
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2012, 05:00:09 PM »
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BAHUT BADHIYA SHEEL DIIdii Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2012, 05:10:09 PM »
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waah bahut khub didi....
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2012, 07:28:43 PM »
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  Dii Aadaab!


Bahut khoob Dii badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Behad sachche ahsaas O khayaal hai... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2012, 10:33:15 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on October 11, 2012, 04:58:20 PM

waah sheel didi aap ki poem ne dil ki gahraai tak asar kiya. bahut khoob wah wah...!
sheba ji thankyou very much. Ma ka dil hai na !
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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2012, 10:38:35 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on October 11, 2012, 05:00:09 PM
BAHUT BADHIYA SHEEL DIIdii Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thankyou soudagar ji,Ma ka dil hai na bachon kay liye viyakul hota hai
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2012, 10:45:27 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 11, 2012, 07:28:43 PM
  Dii Aadaab!


Bahut khoob Dii badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Behad sachche ahsaas O khayaal hai... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 

thankyou PARWAZ Ma ki mamta sagar ki tarha hoti hai na...
Sheel didi
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2012, 01:39:09 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
sheel didi
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«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2012, 02:18:24 AM »
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sheel ji bahut khoob likha hai aapne  Applause Applause

Maan ke aanchal ki chhaon men  saree thakan mit jati hai
Maan nki goad men sar rakhkne se janat sa sukoon milta hai
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2012, 03:51:21 AM »
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waah waah didi kamaal
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2012, 04:04:51 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2012, 09:16:48 AM »
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