Pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi,pal-Pal badalte Hai Sab Rang "Khwaish"

by khwaish on August 17, 2010, 08:18:00 AM
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Yeh kavita pata Nahi kab Likhi Thi maine, Par Aaj Jab Yeh Nazron Ke saamne Aayi, To Socha Kyon Naa Isse Post karoon...Umeed Hai Aap sab Zaroor Padhenge..

Pal-Pal Badalti Hai Zindagi
pal-Pal Badalte Hai Sab Rang!!!

Kabhi Gham mein Ashko se Bhari Hai Aankhein!!!
To kabhi Khushi Mein Aankhein Hoti Hai Nam

Pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte Hai Sab rang!!!!

Kabhi Tanha Rehkar Bhi Tanhaai Ka Ehsaas Nahi
Kabhi Bhari Mehfil mein Bhi Tanha Hai hum

pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte hai sab Rang!!!

Kai Rishton ko Dum Todte Hue dekhte hai
To kai Risshto Ko Dil Mein Badi Hifaasat Se Rakhte Hai Hum

Pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-pal Badalte hai Sab rang!!

Kabhi Kuch Bhi Naa Paakar Bhi khush Rehte hai
To kabhi Sab kuch paakar Bhi Udaas Hai Hum

Pal-Pal badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal badalte hai Sab rang!!

Kabhi Apni hi pehhaan Chupate Hai Logon Se
To kabhi Ek Naam Ke liye Ulaj Padhte Hai Hum

Pal-Pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte hai Sab Rang!!!

Kabhi Halki Si Chot Par Aansoo Behte hai
To kabhi Har Gham Par Muskuratae Hai Hum

Pal-pal Badalti hai Zindagi
Pal-Pal Badalte Hia sab Rang!!!

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 08:47:49 AM »
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wow khwaish ji its awesome..... Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause


ye lines bahot pasanad aai....


Kabhi Halki Si Chot Par Aansoo Behte hai
To kabhi Har Gham Par Muskuratae Hai Hum
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 08:54:30 AM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on August 17, 2010, 08:47:49 AM
wow khwaish ji its awesome..... Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause


ye lines bahot pasanad aai....


Kabhi Halki Si Chot Par Aansoo Behte hai
To kabhi Har Gham Par Muskuratae Hai Hum

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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 12:56:05 PM »
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   Zindagi k rangon ko saadgi se batane ki bahut pyari koshish hai ye khwaish ji. Very nice. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 04:50:40 PM »
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Zindagi ka har rang samaya hai aapki iss kavita mein.....padhte padhte zindagi ki tasveer si ban jaati hai aankhon k saamne.....bahut khub likha khwaish ji..... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 04:53:37 PM »
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   Zindagi k rangon ko saadgi se batane ki bahut pyari koshish hai ye khwaish ji. Very nice. Thumbs UP

Thankyou Sooooooooooooo much Tamannaji..

Par agar sach kahoon to mujhe khud kuch kami lagi hai iss kavita mein,pata nahi kyon??

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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 07:56:12 PM »
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Hamesha ki tarha, behad khubsoorat ehsaas, behad khubsoorat kavita..Koi kami nahin lagi mujhe iss main..Bahaut acha likha hai.Zindagi ka har ehsaas hai iss main..

"Kabhi tanha rehkar bhi tanhai ka ehsaas nahin,
Kabhi bhari mehfil main bhi tanha hai hum.."

Khush rahiye..Likte rahiye.!

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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 02:14:14 PM »
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realy so beautifull poem i love your poetry,,, ap hamaisha khush raho ye dua hai humary ,,,kuch apna likha sunata hoo umeed hai pasand aye ga ,,,
tanhai ma rehna acha lagta hai
zulm sehna acha lagta hai
jab kuch dost pass ate hai
un se do batain kerna acha lagta hai
jab koi dukh deta hai rah e dosty ma          atif
to dosty k nam se der sa muj ko lagta hai
isi liye ma kehta hoo dosto
muje tanhai ma rehna acha lagta hai


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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 03:54:57 PM »
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Quote from: atif dar on August 18, 2010, 02:14:14 PM
realy so beautifull poem i love your poetry,,, ap hamaisha khush raho ye dua hai humary ,,,kuch apna likha sunata hoo umeed hai pasand aye ga ,,,
tanhai ma rehna acha lagta hai
zulm sehna acha lagta hai
jab kuch dost pass ate hai
un se do batain kerna acha lagta hai
jab koi dukh deta hai rah e dosty ma          atif
to dosty k nam se der sa muj ko lagta hai
isi liye ma kehta hoo dosto
muje tanhai ma rehna acha lagta hai


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Aur bahut bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne..Aakhri Ke Chaar lines Ne To zindagi ki Haqeeqat bayaan kar di..Bahut AChe.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch kehna Chahunga..

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Par yahan nazar Lag jaati hai zamaane Ki
Kya Bataaun Tujhe Haal-E-Dil Apna Eh dost!!!
Yahan Sazayen Milti hai Dosti Nibhaane Ki..
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 05:18:29 PM »
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bahoooooooooooooot achche bro...
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 06:02:04 PM »
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bahot khoob khwaish sahaab ..ek behtreen kavita pe aap ki nazr bahot saari daad..ek dilchasp kavita mehfil ko ata ki hai aap ne.daad
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 07:54:28 PM »
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Zindagi ke lamhaat ko lafzoN meiN khoob qaid kiya hai khawahish jee..... Daad kabool farmaiye...

Khush rahiye.......

GhamoN se tar koyiN lamhaa nahi zindagi ka
Apna lo gham to koi thikana nahi khushi ka
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«Reply #12 on: August 19, 2010, 02:57:32 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on August 17, 2010, 04:50:40 PM
Zindagi ka har rang samaya hai aapki iss kavita mein.....padhte padhte zindagi ki tasveer si ban jaati hai aankhon k saamne.....bahut khub likha khwaish ji..... Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2011, 04:06:53 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 17, 2010, 07:56:12 PM
Hamesha ki tarha, behad khubsoorat ehsaas, behad khubsoorat kavita..Koi kami nahin lagi mujhe iss main..Bahaut acha likha hai.Zindagi ka har ehsaas hai iss main..

"Kabhi tanha rehkar bhi tanhai ka ehsaas nahin,
Kabhi bhari mehfil main bhi tanha hai hum.."

Khush rahiye..Likte rahiye.!

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Dost rahim, Aapka Aakhir Kin lafzon mein Shukriya ada karoon, Aap Woh Bahut Kam Logon mein ho jisne Kabhi Mera Saath Nahi choda..Bas Dost Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: July 08, 2011, 05:18:19 PM »
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Bhuat Khoob Khwaish ji bhuat khoob
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