Par chupchaap mai......MKV

by mkv on February 29, 2012, 05:52:32 PM
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Dard mujhe, mai dard ko hee peeta huN
Ban ke sahara, kisi aur ka mai jeeta huN
Kuchla jaata huN paaoN tale logoN ke
Par chupchaap maiN jakhma apne seeta huN
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«Reply #1 on: February 29, 2012, 07:24:21 PM »
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Bahut Khoob MKV jee.
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2012, 02:11:52 AM »
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Dard mujhe, mai dard ko hee peeta huN
Ban ke sahara, kisi aur ka mai jeeta huN
Kuchla jaata huN paaoN tale logoN keN
Par chupchaap maiN jakhma apne seeta huN


jo dusron ke dukh apna samajh ke sahta hai
dusron ke dard se dukhi ho jo rota hai

wo kuchla ja nahin sakta kabhi dusron ke paav tale
auron ke kaante chunne wo to khud bichh jaata hai

uske marz ki mere dost! koi hoti nahi dawa
wo to dusre ka dard dawa samajh ke peeta hai

apne aur apnon ke liye to jeetaa hai saara jahan
tumhaara rasta to seedha khuda ke ghar tak jaata hai

Be happy! icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2012, 03:33:40 AM »
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Bahu khub Mukesh ji Nice   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2012, 04:00:47 AM »
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kuchlaa jaataa hooN paaon tale logoN KE. bahut sunder muktak hai badhaai ho
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2012, 05:31:16 AM »
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Dard mujhe, mai dard ko hee peeta huN
Ban ke sahara, kisi aur ka mai jeeta huN
Kuchla jaata huN paaoN tale logoN ke
Par chupchaap maiN jakhma apne seeta huN


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah mkv ji waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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«Reply #6 on: March 01, 2012, 10:55:51 AM »
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Dard mujhe, mai dard ko hee peeta huN
Ban ke sahara, kisi aur ka mai jeeta huN
Kuchla jaata huN paaoN tale logoN ke
Par chupchaap maiN jakhma apne seeta huN

bahot khoob MKV sahab--
kya kehne aapke khayalon ke
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2012, 01:19:25 PM »
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Bahut Khoob MKV jee.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks for your nice words and appreciation.
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2012, 01:58:00 PM »
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Kya baat hai MkV ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai

Usha ji  Bahoot Bahoot Umda reply and khoob rahi aapki jugalbandi !!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2012, 05:54:26 PM »
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jo dusron ke dukh apna samajh ke sahta hai
dusron ke dard se dukhi ho jo rota hai

wo kuchla ja nahin sakta kabhi dusron ke paav tale
auron ke kaante chunne wo to khud bichh jaata hai

uske marz ki mere dost! koi hoti nahi dawa
wo to dusre ka dard dawa samajh ke peeta hai

apne aur apnon ke liye to jeetaa hai saara jahan
tumhaara rasta to seedha khuda ke ghar tak jaata hai

Be happy! icon_flower icon_flower

Bahut Khoob Likha hai aapne
Chand lines ke liye bahut vaqt diya aapne.
aise alfaj sunne ko tarasta hu mai.
Khuda aapki duniya me khushiya hi khushiya bhar de.

ab duaon ke siva aur mai kya du
sabki raaho se kaantey mai hata du
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2012, 01:28:48 AM »
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Bahu khub Mukesh ji Nice   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thanks pankaj
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2012, 02:22:40 AM »
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ab duaon ke siva aur mai kya du
sabki raaho se kaantey mai hata du


Waaaah! mkv ji. again beautiful lines.

"Chand lines ke liye bahut vaqt diya aapne."
Ye bhi khoob kahi aapne.Arey saheb waqt hi to ek aisi cheez hai jo sahi jagah di jaye to chamatkaar kar sakti hai. icon_flower
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Aapki duaon ka tahe dil se shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2012, 04:57:52 AM »
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Waaaah! mkv ji. again beautiful lines.

"Chand lines ke liye bahut vaqt diya aapne."
Ye bhi khoob kahi aapne.Arey saheb waqt hi to ek aisi cheez hai jo sahi jagah di jaye to chamatkaar kar sakti hai. icon_flower
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Aapki duaon ka tahe dil se shukriya.
Ji ha Usha ji
aapne bilkul theek kaha. Applause Applause
Science ise resonance kahta hai.
ye mausam, hawayen, baag bageeche, phool pattiya, gungunaate bhaurey, kal kal kal karti nadiya, chamakta suraj, jhilmilate taare, dil me khushi (list lambi ho jaayegi) sab samay ka takaaja hi to hai jo kisi chamatkaar se kam nahi.
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«Reply #13 on: March 02, 2012, 09:52:00 AM »
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kuchlaa jaataa hooN paaon tale logoN KE. bahut sunder muktak hai badhaai ho
Thanks Sir
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«Reply #14 on: March 02, 2012, 07:36:37 PM »
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Dard mujhe, mai dard ko hee peeta huN
Ban ke sahara, kisi aur ka mai jeeta huN
Kuchla jaata huN paaoN tale logoN ke
Par chupchaap maiN jakhma apne seeta huN


Bahut ache mkvji
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