Pareshaaniyon ka aashram:Shairi - E

Prateek Mardia

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kuch leta hu mein jaan ke,
kuch behad anjaan mein,
baaki bekhauf itni nidar
lekar apna saara kehar,
aa jaato he khud-b-khud
ab mera mun pareshaaniyon ka
aashram hein doston!

Aaaye bethen ghar kar jaye
apna sampoorn jeevan yahan bitaye
faile itna ke hriday dukhaye
bebas,laachaar, asahaye
mun sisak,sikud, sankuchit ho jaaye
pur aasshram badhta he jaaye!

Kabhi kabhi kuch inme aabhagi
jo hokar apne saathiyon se baagi
aashram se bhagh jaaye,
to sekaron aane ko aatur
mun ki chowkhat khadkhadaye
ek jaaye--dus ko laaye
aashram badhta he jaaye!

youn aanker aaise kaafilon mein
kyaa jaachti ho hausla!
karna he he gar mera shakti parikshan
to aa jaon alehda alheda
youn samooh bun vaar karna
to kapat hein buzdilon
yudh he he gar zarrori
toh ek ek karke aakar milon!

woh to fir bhee tha veer Abhimanyu
pur ghir gaya maara gaya
yeh mera adna sa mun
saath subko is tarah se
kub talak jhel paayega
lekin yeh to tay he fir bhee
ladta yeh bhee jaayega...
ladte ladte gar hua parajit
to vahi itihaas dohraayega
haar kur bhee mun yeh mera
saahsi kehlaayega
aur tumhaari jeet ko
bus chul he maana jaayega!


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Rajbir

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2008, 03:52:40 PM »

Prateek

Bahut he gehrai se aap likhte hain ! Applause

Aap ka kalam padh kar bahut achcha laga !

I see a sort of revolutionary poet in you !

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Roja

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2008, 04:11:43 PM »

Superb


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2008, 05:24:39 PM »

Rajbir ji and Roja ji,

Thanks a lot.

Rajbir ji--I did recieve your PM. Thanks a lot for the promptness and help offered. But I could not find and e-mail address(all are hidden), nor I was able to send any PM for any help as your home page reads that that would be allowed only after 30 Posts.
( taumar bhee likhta raha,
to manzil shaayad na mil payegi,
saans ki dor ka kya he bharosa
29vi likhte hue toot jaayegi!)


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Ricky

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2008, 05:37:59 PM »

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sarthika

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2008, 05:43:07 PM »

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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2008, 02:44:58 AM »

Saarthika ji,

Thanks for your guidance.

Prateek


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harashmahajan

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #7 on: March 27, 2008, 03:19:14 AM »

Ek achhii peshkash prateek ji...maiN iss yaaraane-bazm meN aapko khush_aamdiid kahtaa hooN......aapki is rachna se aapki Khuda ke liye ibaadat bhi jhalakti hai...aise tohfoN ka maziid bhii intezaar rahega....bahut-bahut shukriyaa janaab
Harash


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2008, 03:51:13 AM »

Harsh ji,

Shukriya janaab.

Aapki poetry ki dedication aur alfaazon se vaakai bohut khushi bhari hairani si he.aapki urdu ki chahat kaabile-tarif se kahin jyada he.aap jaise vyaktitatva ko jaankar haardik prassanta he.

Prateek


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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2008, 06:04:22 PM »

bahut khoob prateek bro..bahut acha likha hai Applause


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #10 on: April 18, 2008, 10:27:10 AM »

khwaish ji,

bohut shukriya,nazre inaayat rakhiyega.


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charu

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2008, 01:16:24 PM »

bahut khub prateek ji,
Aapki shaili ki taarif kare jaise aapka kaayal ho koi
har lavz aapka bajta hai is kadar jaise paayal ho koi.


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2008, 02:34:19 PM »

Quote from: charu on April 18, 2008, 01:16:24 PM

bahut khub prateek ji,
Aapki shaili ki taarif kare jaise aapka kaayal ho koi
har lavz aapka bajta hai is kadar jaise paayal ho koi.

bohut shukriya charu ji,

dard zuban pe aa hi jaata jub dil machalta ghaayal ho koi
meri kishti ka doob jana tay he saath fir kyon saahil ho koi.

Prateek


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charu

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #13 on: April 20, 2008, 03:01:05 PM »

doobna to tey hai, tufaano se lad raha hai har koi
Safar ho jaata hai aasan, agar saath ho koi.


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram

«Reply #14 on: May 18, 2008, 05:00:34 PM »

main ruk chuka hu aur ub nahi ladta toofano se
kya tabaahi ka charam hoga dekhne ki aas se!

Prateek


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