pathar ki aawaaz.......(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on June 11, 2012, 10:27:16 AM
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                           hoon  pathar, pathar  hi  rahoo.n  gaa.!
                           doo.n gaa choat waapas na sahoo.n gaa.!!

                           taraash   kar   mujhe  kya  paao  ge tum..!
                           kuch  boloo.n  ga na tumhein sunoo.n  gaa.!

                           hai dard-e-mohabbat kya balaa, kya pataa.!
                           hoon  pathar, sung-dil kaise banoo.n gaa.!

                           ho  gar  maqbara  ya  koi aashiyana tera.!
                           main   to  inmein  sadiyo.n  jeeo.n  gaa.!

                           hoon  bezubaan  per  sakht jaan mujh mein.!
                           rah kar 'khamosh' teri taarikh kahoo.n gaa.!!
                           

                           

                           
                           
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2012, 10:32:19 AM »
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Khamosh ji main bade fakhr se kah saktaa hoon "ISE KHATE HAIN GHAZAL" bas aur mere paas lafz naheen hain ek chhotaa saa tohfaa rau kaa
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2012, 03:22:29 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob K_A ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2012, 05:06:33 PM »
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kya baat hai sir.... kya umdaa soch hai....
apki soach ka kayal ho gaya
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2012, 05:08:45 PM »
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lajawab khamosh ji "main pathar hoon pathar hi rahunga "


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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2012, 05:12:36 PM »
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boht umda post wah
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2012, 06:07:46 PM »
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K A Jee Aadaab!


kia baat hai janab bade hi gehre aur khoob khayaal
piroye haiN... bahut khoob jee bahut khoob sabhi
ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe...

Aik khoob aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... humari
dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

youN hi likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2012, 06:25:10 PM »
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waahhhhh KA ji kya khuub gazal kahi hai aapne... har sher dil ke paar utarta hua lajawaab hai aapke khyaal
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2012, 07:37:06 PM »
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niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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 Applause Applause Applause bahut he khub
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vaah vaah jee
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«Reply #14 on: June 12, 2012, 06:06:40 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Khamosh jee
Patthar, khoobsurat bayaanee, kamaal ke khayaal, aisa laga jaise avaaj mujh tak pahunch rahee hai..
kya baat hai hai...patthar hi rahunga...
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