prashan

by chaitali on July 03, 2008, 07:58:43 AM
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wo puchte hain prashan kuch aise aise
jinka na jawaab wo de payegi

arrse ho gaye .... Saaloin nikal gaye
jab kabhi himaat se pesh aye thi

uljhi hai dhuniya asi ki makdi bhi shrmayegi
Jaal aise ki wo bhi kya bun payegi

kasta kabhi shulejta
panjo ka karwan hain

yeh sherni kab khol payegi....?
sawaaloin ke jawah wo kab de payegi...?
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2008, 08:28:53 AM »
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Nice one chaitali .... Keep up the good work.. Usual Smile
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chaitali
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2008, 08:51:23 AM »
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Shukriya Natural aapki jeha nawazi ka.
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Muhammed
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2008, 08:57:55 AM »
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Fir se Chaitali Ji..
Wohi Baat Dekhne Ko Mili.,
Teen Baar Padha Fir Samaj Me aaya..
Aap Ki Ye Do Line Bahot Kuch Keh Gayi..

uljhi hai dhuniya asi ki makdi bhi shrmayegi
Jaal aise ki wo bhi kya bun payegi

Bahot Khoob...
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chaitali
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2008, 09:16:38 AM »
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Muhammed sahaab jaan ke accha lega ki aap ko pasand aaya Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2008, 11:20:11 AM »
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Bohot khoob Chaitali.....!! Keep writing !!
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2008, 11:26:38 AM »
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Very Good Composition.. Chaitali 

Do Keep Writing..


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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2008, 02:41:17 PM »
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good one chaitali !!
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