Pyar Ke Do Bol..... (Neel)

by neelgold on April 20, 2010, 12:24:15 AM
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This is 2 all my frindz who r relly alwyz in Sad & bad mood...
I jst vana 2 cheer thm up
Hey Guyz ...Alwyz Keep Smiling & Life vll Smile on u ..... THTs 4 SURE



Oh haar paal rone vale , do paal muskara ke b dekh le
Gumo main jeene vale , khushi ko bi gale se laga ke dekh le

Agar tum khush hoge to sara jahan khush hoga
Agar royenga to akela hi kahi pada hoga

yeh raah pakad ya voh raah le le
kushi jahan bi mile bus usse apne main sameth le

Kon hoga kaal is jahan main , yeh kisse pata
Chod de gussa Pyaar Ke Do Bol hi bol le

Khali haath aaye hai aur khali haath hi jaynge
Chod de Gum ka daman, aur khsuhi ko saath apne le le
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2010, 12:44:40 AM »
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bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Neel ji... bahut pyari kavita hai... bahut sundar message diya hai aapne apni is kavita k through... main koshish karunga hamesha muskurate rehne ka... par kabhi kabhi koshish karke bhi muskura nahi pate hain hum...

zindagi k kuch pal aise hote hain,
jo dil me bas dard de jaate hain,
chahke bhi hum un palo ko bhula nahi paate,
un yaadon k sang hum tanhaa reh jaate hain...
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2010, 12:48:23 AM »
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So u got my msg .....chalo acha hai agar kisssi ek ko smaz aah jaye
i jst vana 2 c ppl haapy around me ,,,,
I jst alwyz keep trying 2 keep othrs happy nothng else i vant frm my lyf .....

so rembr alawyz keep smiling!!!!!!!!!! Usual Smile happy3
bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Neel ji... bahut pyari kavita hai... bahut sundar message diya hai aapne apni is kavita k through... main koshish karunga hamesha muskurate rehne ka... par kabhi kabhi koshish karke bhi muskura nahi pate hain hum...

zindagi k kuch pal aise hote hain,
jo dil me bas dard de jaate hain,
chahke bhi hum un palo ko bhula nahi paate,
un yaadon k sang hum tanhaa reh jaate hain...

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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2010, 12:55:06 AM »
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Kapil ji bhut khoob kaha bt yeh aapke liye

Jo paal dukh de usse bhool ja
Na yaad kaar usse bus usse bhool ja
main janti hoon yeh bhut muskhil hai
Paar tu har muskhil asaan kaar aur usse bhool ja....
bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Neel ji... bahut pyari kavita hai... bahut sundar message diya hai aapne apni is kavita k through... main koshish karunga hamesha muskurate rehne ka... par kabhi kabhi koshish karke bhi muskura nahi pate hain hum...

zindagi k kuch pal aise hote hain,
jo dil me bas dard de jaate hain,
chahke bhi hum un palo ko bhula nahi paate,
un yaadon k sang hum tanhaa reh jaate hain...

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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2010, 03:02:03 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai         Neelgold ji.......


Oh pal pal rone wale do pal muskare ke bhi dekh le
zindagi se nafrat karne wale zindagi jeena seekh le

oh udaas chehra rakhne wale dukh sab ko hota hai itna samajh le
zindagi toh wo hi jeeta hai jo gam mein bhi har pal has le.....




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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2010, 05:48:19 AM »
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This is 2 all my frindz who r relly alwyz in Sad & bad mood...
I jst vana 2 cheer thm up
Hey Guyz ...Alwyz Keep Smiling & Life vll Smile on u ..... THTs 4 SURE



Oh haar paal rone vale , do paal muskara ke b dekh le
Gumo main jeene vale , khushi ko bi gale se laga ke dekh le

Agar tum khush hoge to sara jahan khush hoga
Agar royenga to akela hi kahi pada hoga

yeh raah pakad ya voh raah le le
kushi jahan bi mile bus usse apne main sameth le

Kon hoga kaal is jahan main , yeh kisse pata
Chod de gussa Pyaar Ke Do Bol hi bol le

Khali haath aaye hai aur khali haath hi jaynge
Chod de Gum ka daman, aur khsuhi ko saath apne le le


Bahut khoob Neel Ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2010, 06:36:06 AM »
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Nice creation Neel ji. It conveys a remedy of sorrows and to remain happy. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2010, 02:50:13 PM »
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Bahut Khoob neelji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2010, 04:32:41 PM »
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Yes dear I got it... aap kisi ko q keh rahe hain, har koi samjhega aapki baat... aap jaise dost aas paas rahenge to har koi khush rahega... aap apni zindagi me bahut achcha aur pyaara kaam kar rahe hain... bahut kam log hote hain jo dusro ko hasaane ki koshish karte hain... hatts off...!!!

Will keep smiling and would like to see smile on ur face alwayz...!!!

So u got my msg .....chalo acha hai agar kisssi ek ko smaz aah jaye
i jst vana 2 c ppl haapy around me ,,,,
its jst alwyz keep trying 2 keep othrs happy nothng else i vant frm my lyf .....

so rembr alawyz keep smiling!!!!!!!!!! Usual Smile happy3
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2010, 04:33:51 PM »
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shukriya Neel ji... aapne bahut pyara likha hai...

main yaad nahi karta uski yaad aa jati hai,
duniya ki har cheez uski yaad dilaati hai,
main apne dhadkano se duri kaise banaun,
meri har dhadkan uski yaad dilati hai...


Kapil ji bhut khoob kaha bt yeh aapke liye

Jo paal dukh de usse bhool ja
Na yaad kaar usse bus usse bhool ja
main janti hoon yeh bhut muskhil hai
Paar tu har muskhil asaan kaar aur usse bhool ja....
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2010, 09:55:21 PM »
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Wah Cara ji kya baat hai .........

Vry vll said ji
Wah kya baat hai         Neelgold ji.......


Oh pal pal rone wale do pal muskare ke bhi dekh le
zindagi se nafrat karne wale zindagi jeena seekh le

oh udaas chehra rakhne wale dukh sab ko hota hai itna samajh le
zindagi toh wo hi jeeta hai jo gam mein bhi har pal has le.....





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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2010, 09:56:53 PM »
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Thanx Rajesh harish ji
Bahut khoob Neel Ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2010, 10:00:28 PM »
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Alwyz trying to do tht bt really dnt knoe it works /not ?

Bt anywyz thnx Riyaz ji 4 ur beautiful cmmnt...
Nice creation Neel ji. It conveys a remedy of sorrows and to remain happy. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #13 on: April 20, 2010, 10:01:15 PM »
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Thanx khwaish ji ...really appreciate!!!!!!!
Bahut Khoob neelji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: April 20, 2010, 10:04:38 PM »
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Thanx a lot Kapil ji ......

Kohsih karti rehti hoon ..... bus vahi mera kaam hai ...

Thanx a lot!!!!!!!!!
Yes dear I got it... aap kisi ko q keh rahe hain, har koi samjhega aapki baat... aap jaise dost aas paas rahenge to har koi khush rahega... aap apni zindagi me bahut achcha aur pyaara kaam kar rahe hain... bahut kam log hote hain jo dusro ko hasaane ki koshish karte hain... hatts off...!!!

Will keep smiling and would like to see smile on ur face alwayz...!!!

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