Pyar Ke Do Bol..... (Neel)

by neelgold on April 20, 2010, 12:24:15 AM
Pages: 1 [2] 3  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 6049 times)
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #15 on: April 20, 2010, 10:11:39 PM »
Reply with quote
u r always welcome Neel ji...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on April 20, 2010, 10:04:38 PM
Thanx a lot Kapil ji ......

Kohsih karti rehti hoon ..... bus vahi mera kaam hai ...

Thanx a lot!!!!!!!!!
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Gum Aur Khushi.....Neel by neelgold in Shairi - E - Zindagi « 1 2 3  All »
Guanah!!! (neel) by neelgold in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2 3  All »
Meetha Dard.... (Neel) by neelgold in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq « 1 2 3  All »
Daar Lagta hai ....... <(Neel)> by neelgold in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai « 1 2 3  All »
Kamosh Jindgi .......<Neel> by neelgold in Shairi - E - Zindagi « 1 2  All »
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #16 on: April 21, 2010, 04:27:07 AM »
Reply with quote
Arey wah Neel ji aap toh bahut acha likhti hai.bahut sachai aur khoobsurat kavita pesh kiya aapne.great work.beautiful lines by Kapil ji n Cara ji. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
Logged
KOYAL46
Guest
«Reply #17 on: April 21, 2010, 07:07:39 AM »
Reply with quote

Nice poem Neel-di.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Bol bol bol Pyar ke do bol tou tu bol....
Khol khol khol dil ka darwaza tu khol....
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #18 on: April 21, 2010, 07:16:42 AM »
Reply with quote
Lovely lines Koyal ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
Logged
KOYAL46
Guest
«Reply #19 on: April 21, 2010, 10:47:10 AM »
Reply with quote
Once again thanks Madhu-di.....

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 21, 2010, 07:16:42 AM
Lovely lines Koyal ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
Logged
salil2002
Guest
«Reply #20 on: April 21, 2010, 10:56:48 AM »
Reply with quote
neel dear lines bahut hi khoobsurat hai aur yeh aapme chhupe ek khalip[an ka ehsaas bhi deti hai............do lines aapke liye pasand aaye toh daad kii guzarish hai


yoon toh humne hansna seekha
hans k humne rona seekha
zindgi ne woh sikhlaaya
humne jo bhi karna seekha
dil akela , khela baazi
ishq humne karna seekha
par abhi bhi kachche hain hum
humne bas na itna seekha
hai mohabbat toh bas dhokha
jab yeh seekha ..........kucch na seekha


yeh lines bahut hi normal hai agar aap iski teh tak pahunch pao toh mujhe khushi hogi
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #21 on: April 21, 2010, 12:23:04 PM »
Reply with quote
Thanx a lot Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 21, 2010, 04:27:07 AM
Arey wah Neel ji aap toh bahut acha likhti hai.bahut sachai aur khoobsurat kavita pesh kiya aapne.great work.beautiful lines by Kapil ji n Cara ji. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
Logged
asifahmed
Guest
«Reply #22 on: April 21, 2010, 12:55:53 PM »
Reply with quote
: :hello2:Great Think
Logged
neelgold
Guest
«Reply #23 on: April 22, 2010, 12:44:34 AM »
Reply with quote
My GOd Madhu ji Itni Tarif!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very very happy ....... happy3 happy3 happy3
Likhna nahi aata muze bus ek khosish karti hoon
Kabhi agar kuch baan jaye to app sab se share karti hoon!!!!!

Keep Smiling!!!!!!!!! Usual Smile
Quote from: madhuwesh on April 21, 2010, 04:27:07 AM
Arey wah Neel ji aap toh bahut acha likhti hai.bahut sachai aur khoobsurat kavita pesh kiya aapne.great work.beautiful lines by Kapil ji n Cara ji. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
Logged
neelgold
Guest
«Reply #24 on: April 22, 2010, 01:03:24 AM »
Reply with quote
Hey Saahil, My God Bhut hi gehri chot khaye ho...y so?
Wat shuld i say ... speechless...i can jst feel pain......
very very Deep Saahil............. tearyeyed

I m surprizd, shockd, amzd..... Shocked Even More Maine itni achi +ive poem likhi..& i alwyz trying 2 b happy  show othr ppl also tht im happy , i vna c othr ppl happy too.......i dnt vna 2 repeat ur commnt wat u said abt me .... i jst cnt belive hoe did u feel tht ?
& from such kinda of lines? Is it SO!

& abt ur lyns i already comntd if u got it ryt....
Kuch Sirf tumare liye................

Myous na ho mohbat main chot khane vale
Kabhi to pyar ki barsaat tum paar b hogi
Yeh jaroori nahi saab daga hi de,
Kabhi to vafa ki ummed tumari b puri hogi
Hum yeh dua karte hai Khuda appko sakoon de
Tumre Dil ki khawish ek din upper jaroor manzoor hogi......
Quote from: -Saahil- on April 21, 2010, 10:56:48 AM
neel dear lines bahut hi khoobsurat hai aur yeh aapme chhupe ek khalip[an ka ehsaas bhi deti hai............do lines aapke liye pasand aaye toh daad kii guzarish hai


yoon toh humne hansna seekha
hans k humne rona seekha
zindgi ne woh sikhlaaya
humne jo bhi karna seekha
dil akela , khela baazi
ishq humne karna seekha
par abhi bhi kachche hain hum
humne bas na itna seekha
hai mohabbat toh bas dhokha
jab yeh seekha ..........kucch na seekha


yeh lines bahut hi normal hai agar aap iski teh tak pahunch pao toh mujhe khushi hogi
Logged
neelgold
Guest
«Reply #25 on: April 22, 2010, 01:04:21 AM »
Reply with quote
Thnx a lot Asif!!!!!!!!!
Quote from: asifahmed on April 21, 2010, 12:55:53 PM
: :hello2:Great Think
Logged
salil2002
Guest
«Reply #26 on: April 22, 2010, 02:22:55 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: neelgold on April 22, 2010, 01:03:24 AM
Hey Saahil, My God Bhut hi gehri chot khaye ho...y so?
Wat shuld i say ... speechless...i can jst feel pain......
very very Deep Saahil............. tearyeyed

I m surprizd, shockd, amzd..... Shocked Even More Maine itni achi +ive poem likhi..& i alwyz trying 2 b happy  show othr ppl also tht im happy , i vna c othr ppl happy too.......i dnt vna 2 repeat ur commnt wat u said abt me .... i jst cnt belive hoe did u feel tht ?
& from such kinda of lines? Is it SO!

& abt ur lyns i already comntd if u got it ryt....
Kuch Sirf tumare liye................

Myous na ho mohbat main chot khane vale
Kabhi to pyar ki barsaat tum paar b hogi
Yeh jaroori nahi saab daga hi de,
Kabhi to vafa ki ummed tumari b puri hogi
Hum yeh dua karte hai Khuda appko sakoon de
Tumre Dil ki khawish ek din upper jaroor manzoor hogi......
thnks a lot neel dear
kucch likh raha hoon isis main jawaab hai

kucch maayne nahin paaye zindgi main mohabbat k maine
apne hissse kii har khushi bhi shayad ji li hai maine
ab toh is dil main dard hai aur door tak faili hai tanhaayi
apni kismat kii yeh ruswaayi bhi manjoor kar li maine
kii ab toh chahat nahin "SAAHIL" ko maujon kii
kii apni hasti khud saagar main doono di maine
Logged
neelgold
Guest
«Reply #27 on: April 23, 2010, 12:18:31 AM »
Reply with quote
Jab mohabat ayengi Jindgi main to mayne bi jaan jaonge TUM
Door hongi tumri tanhaiya bi aur jee bhar ke muskaroynge TUM
Abhi tumare hisse main bhut kuch hai "SAAHIL"
Door ho jayngi saari rusviya aur fir jindgi ko gale se lagonge TUM

I wish tht 4 u .........


Quote from: -Saahil- on April 22, 2010, 02:22:55 PM
thnks a lot neel dear
kucch likh raha hoon isis main jawaab hai

kucch maayne nahin paaye zindgi main mohabbat k maine
apne hissse kii har khushi bhi shayad ji li hai maine
ab toh is dil main dard hai aur door tak faili hai tanhaayi
apni kismat kii yeh ruswaayi bhi manjoor kar li maine
kii ab toh chahat nahin "SAAHIL" ko maujon kii
kii apni hasti khud saagar main doono di maine
Logged
umarzaib
Guest
«Reply #28 on: April 14, 2011, 06:59:00 PM »
Reply with quote
Jo paal dukh de usse bhool ja
Na yaad kaar usse bus usse bhool ja
main janti hoon yeh bhut muskhil hai
Paar tu har muskhil asaan kaar aur usse bhool ja....
0300-7000718
Logged
umarzaib
Guest
«Reply #29 on: April 14, 2011, 07:00:58 PM »
Reply with quote
"A boy prposd a
girl,SHE rejects,
but boy was not
sad,FRNDS ask
"why u r not sad"
boy~why sad,
I lost 1 who
never lovd me
but SHE lost 1
who really lovs
her"..



0300--7000718
Logged
Pages: 1 [2] 3  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shairi - E - Zindagi > Topic: Pyar Ke Do Bol..... (Neel)
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 08, 2024, 12:59:10 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]
INTEQAM - A sequel to "Hi...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.121 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer