Qareeb aa, jo bachaa hai usey jee saktey ho!

by abdbundeli on April 21, 2009, 07:12:44 AM
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Kyoun shab-o-roz jawaanee ki gazal likhtey ho?
Kyoun zayeefee mein jawaanoun ki tarah dikhtey ho?

Meyraa aayeenah hai: uyoon mukhaatib un key;
Aankh mein aankh daalney sey kyuun jhijhaktey ho?

Kyoun bulaauun na tumhain baam par andheyrey mein:
Arsh-e-mashrik mein maahtaab-sey tahaltey ho?

Azaan hotii wahaan: roo-b-roo tumhaarey mein,
Jhuk key aadaab bajaataa huun, to, dubaktey ho?

Minnateyn kartaa, ki, "Khalwat hai, qareeb aa jaaou!"  
Baarahaa phir wahee kahtey ho, ki, "Kyaa baktey ho?"

Mujh ko maaloom hai, aatish abhi bhi hai baaqee;
Dhuwaan naheen hai, kyoun ki, lahab ho sulagtey ho!

Ab, 'abd', maan bhi jaaou, ki, lamhey hain baaqee;
Qareeb aa, jo bachaa hai usey jee saktey ho!

                                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2009, 09:41:43 AM »
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bahut khoob Abd sahab
kamaal likha hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2009, 09:43:39 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on April 21, 2009, 09:41:43 AM
bahut khoob Abd sahab
kamaal likha hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shukriyah diya786 ji!
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2009, 09:54:03 AM »
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 KYAA BAAT HAI ADB..................ZORDAAR HAI .....
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2009, 09:59:53 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 21, 2009, 07:12:44 AM
Kyoun shab-o-roz jawaanee ki gazal likhtey ho?
Kyoun zayeefee mein jawaanoun ki tarah dikhtey ho?

Meyraa aayeenah hai: uyoon mukhaatib un key;
Aankh mein aankh daalney sey kyuun jhijhaktey ho?

Kyoun bulaauun na tumhain baam par andheyrey mein:
Arsh-e-mashrik mein maahtaab-sey tahaltey ho?

Azaan hotii wahaan: roo-b-roo tumhaarey mein,
Jhuk key aadaab bajaataa huun, to, dubaktey ho?

Minnateyn kartaa, ki, "Khalwat hai, qareeb aa jaaou!" 
Baarahaa phir wahee kahtey ho, ki, "Kyaa baktey ho?"

Mujh ko maaloom hai, aatish abhi bhi hai baaqee;
Dhuwaan naheen hai, kyoun ki, lahab ho sulagtey ho!

Ab, 'abd', maan bhi jaaou, ki, lamhey hain baaqee;
Qareeb aa, jo bachaa hai usey jee saktey ho!

                                 - abd bundeli






Excellent...Just wonderful....Really liked a lot Babu Ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2009, 04:48:47 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 21, 2009, 09:59:53 AM
Excellent...Just wonderful....Really liked a lot Babu Ji

Thanks a lot Celmira bitia!
                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2009, 04:50:29 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 21, 2009, 09:54:03 AM

 KYAA BAAT HAI ADB..................ZORDAAR HAI .....
Thanks a lot, khamosh_aawaaz  ji!
                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2009, 05:09:31 PM »
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Tum na bela ho na chemeli na ghulab na kamal

Phir kya wajah hai ABD tum phulo sa mehakte ho...

Tumhari pehchan me kya kahe GHAYEL hame bas itna pata hai

Tum ek shayer ho apne lafzo me apna dil rakhte ho......


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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2009, 05:27:26 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 21, 2009, 05:09:31 PM

Tum na bela ho na chemeli na ghulab na kamal
Phir kya wajah hai ABD tum phulo sa mehakte ho...
Tumhari pehchan me kya kahe GHAYEL hame bas itna pata hai
Tum ek shayer ho apne lafzo me apna dil rakhte ho......
-SG-

Man ney, man kee baat ko,
Pahichaanaa hai khoob!
Roop-sparsh-ras-gandh mein,
Chukey hazaaroun doob!!

           - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2009, 05:40:35 AM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji... nice lines from Sajid
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2009, 06:13:52 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2009, 05:40:35 AM
bahoot khoob Abd ji... nice lines from Sajid

Thank You Pooja.....
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«Reply #11 on: April 22, 2009, 07:20:41 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2009, 05:40:35 AM
bahoot khoob Abd ji... nice lines from Sajid

Thanks a lot, Pooja ji!
         - abd bundeli
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