Qatilana....Puarana andaaz hai~~

by Pooja on November 04, 2008, 06:27:15 PM
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Jeet kar bhi, haar ka ahsaas hai
bujhati nahi jo, yah wo pyaas hai
Juda hokar, judaai ka yah ahsaas
is ahsaas main BHI, kitna tu pass hai!!

zindagi ke raahon main, ban gaye ajnabi
ajnabi ke liye yah ajnabi bahoot khas hai
banege apne, bahoot is jamane main, magar
is begaane sa na apna koi, kaya yah raz hai?

dekh kar tera aks, dil dhadak jaata hai jo mera
kaya koi bacha hua yah tere dil ka zajbaat hai
jeevan se jakar, yaadon main bas jaana
qatilana wahin, tera Puarana andaaz hai...
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«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2008, 06:16:30 AM »
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Waah... Bahut khoob likha hai Pooja di..  Clapping Smiley

Wo sach mein koi khushnaseeb hoga, jiske liye aapne itne pyaare alfaaz likhe hai..  icon_geek
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2008, 02:29:12 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 04, 2008, 06:27:15 PM
Jeet kar bhi, haar ka ahsaas hai
bujhati nahi jo, yah wo pyaas hai
Juda hokar, judaai ka yah ahsaas
is ahsaas main BHI, kitna tu pass hai!!

zindagi ke raahon main, ban gaye ajnabi
ajnabi ke liye yah ajnabi bahoot khas hai
banege apne, bahoot is jamane main, magar
is begaane sa na apna koi, kaya yah raz hai?

dekh kar tera aks, dil dhadak jaata hai jo mera
kaya koi bacha hua yah tere dil ka zajbaat hai
jeevan se jakar, yaadon main bas jaana
qatilana wahin, tera Puarana andaaz hai...

Bohot Khoob....Pooja Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2008, 02:32:24 PM »
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itna bhi kya tension lena
jab ghayel tere aas paas hain

nice work pooja
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«Reply #4 on: November 05, 2008, 02:34:58 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 05, 2008, 06:16:30 AM
Waah... Bahut khoob likha hai Pooja di..  Clapping Smiley

Wo sach mein koi khushnaseeb hoga, jiske liye aapne itne pyaare alfaaz likhe hai..  icon_geek
mahi yeh Pooja di... ke aage tum e lagana bhul gayee kya waise e nahi bhi lagao to sounds like di  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard just kidding girls.
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«Reply #5 on: November 05, 2008, 08:27:18 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 05, 2008, 06:16:30 AM
Waah... Bahut khoob likha hai Pooja di..  Clapping Smiley

Wo sach mein koi khushnaseeb hoga, jiske liye aapne itne pyaare alfaaz likhe hai..  icon_geek

Thanks Mahiya...

Kash khud ko bhi samjh sakti khushnasseb
naseeb main ajj uska sath nahi
bade armaano se thama tha mera hath usne
ajj kahin dikhta wo aass pass nahi

Jeevan ka chakarview,samjh nahi atta kuch
kis liye insaan, umarbhar kar paata pyar nahi
mere jeevan se jakar na jaane kon sa deep bhujaye wo
itna seh kar bhi, kyun dil se mere yah jata pyar nahi...
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«Reply #6 on: November 05, 2008, 08:28:11 PM »
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Thank you so much Celmira!!
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«Reply #7 on: November 05, 2008, 08:32:14 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 05, 2008, 02:32:24 PM
itna bhi kya tension lena
jab ghayel tere aas paas hain

nice work pooja

Apko meri likhi kavita pasand aai, bahoot shukar gujar hu!!

Ghayel Naam se kabhi, ghayal armaan samjhe nahi jaate
kavita ke arth samjhe bin, jawab likhe nahi jaate
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«Reply #8 on: November 05, 2008, 08:33:45 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 05, 2008, 08:27:18 PM
Thanks Mahiya...

Kash khud ko bhi samjh sakti khushnasseb
naseeb main ajj uska sath nahi
bade armaano se thama tha mera hath usne
ajj kahin dikhta wo aass pass nahi

Jeevan ka chakarview,samjh nahi atta kuch
kis liye insaan, umarbhar kar paata pyar nahi
mere jeevan se jakar na jaane kon sa deep bhujaye wo
itna seh kar bhi, kyun dil se mere yah jata pyar nahi...


Pooja di, Gam jyaada hai, zindagi kam..
Kabhi kabhi samajh nahin aata naa.. ki zindagi mein dukh hote hai ya dukhon mein zindagi..  icon_silent
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«Reply #9 on: November 05, 2008, 08:35:21 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 05, 2008, 02:34:58 PM
mahi yeh Pooja di... ke aage tum e lagana bhul gayee kya waise e nahi bhi lagao to sounds like di  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard just kidding girls.


Maine "di" hi likha tha.. Didi wala "di"...
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«Reply #10 on: November 05, 2008, 08:38:11 PM »
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bahoot sahi kaha Mahiya!! yah lines thori title se alag ho gai... magar hai to zindagi he

Zindagi mai ayye dukho ne, sabak yah sikhaya hai
jahan bhi mile khushi thori si, jaan lo wo he chaya hai
Rab per karo bharosa, aor karm karo nek
her dukh ki ghari se bhi, yah insaan ubar kar ayya hai!!
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«Reply #11 on: November 05, 2008, 08:39:37 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 05, 2008, 08:27:18 PM

Kash khud ko bhi samjh sakti khushnasseb
naseeb main ajj uska sath nahi
bade armaano se thama tha mera hath usne
ajj kahin dikhta wo aass pass nahi

Jeevan ka chakarview,samjh nahi atta kuch
kis liye insaan, umarbhar kar paata pyar nahi
mere jeevan se jakar na jaane kon sa deep bhujaye wo
itna seh kar bhi, kyun dil se mere yah jata pyar nahi...


Bohot Khoob Pooja...ek baar phir bohot achcha likha hai Applause
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«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2008, 08:40:48 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 05, 2008, 08:38:11 PM
yah lines thori title se alag ho gai... magar hai to zindagi he

Zindagi mai ayye dukho ne, sabak yah sikhaya hai
jahan bhi mile khushi thori si, jaan lo wo he chaya hai
Rab per karo bharosa, aor karm karo nek
her dukh ki ghari se bhi, yah insaan ubar kar ayya hai!!



Waah...Zindagi ki sachchai likh di aapne Pooja Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: November 05, 2008, 08:42:39 PM »
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Thanks Celmira!!
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«Reply #14 on: November 05, 2008, 08:51:42 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 04, 2008, 06:27:15 PM
Jeet kar bhi, haar ka ahsaas hai
bujhati nahi jo, yah wo pyaas hai
Juda hokar, judaai ka yah ahsaas
is ahsaas main BHI, kitna tu pass hai!!

zindagi ke raahon main, ban gaye ajnabi
ajnabi ke liye yah ajnabi bahoot khas hai
banege apne, bahoot is jamane main, magar
is begaane sa na apna koi, kaya yah raz hai?

dekh kar tera aks, dil dhadak jaata hai jo mera
kaya koi bacha hua yah tere dil ka zajbaat hai
jeevan se jakar, yaadon main bas jaana
qatilana wahin, tera Puarana andaaz hai...


Quote from: Pooja on November 05, 2008, 08:38:11 PM
bahoot sahi kaha Mahiya!! yah lines thori title se alag ho gai... magar hai to zindagi he

Zindagi mai ayye dukho ne, sabak yah sikhaya hai
jahan bhi mile khushi thori si, jaan lo wo he chaya hai
Rab per karo bharosa, aor karm karo nek
her dukh ki ghari se bhi, yah insaan ubar kar ayya hai!!




Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja  Applause Applause Applause

 As Usual, Beautiful Work.. icon_salut icon_salut
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