Rishton mein faasle...

by daljeet_faqeer on July 13, 2009, 06:36:50 AM
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Rishton mein faasle ho to behtar hai,
Gham ka koi samaa ho to behtar hai.

Do lafzon ki baat kehne se darte hain,
Lafzon ki koi zubaan ho to behtar hai.

Woh do kadam saath na chal paaye mere,
Kadmon ka koi nishaan ho to behtar hai.

Zindagi mein kuchh khawishein aisi bhi hain,
Adhoora koi armaan ho to behtar hai.

Kaash unko dikha paate dil ke zakhm,
Aapsa koi meherbaan ho to behtar hai.

                    Daljeet'faqeer'
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2009, 06:38:30 AM »
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Wah Kya Khoob Kaha Hai Aapne, Bohat Achcha,.
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2009, 06:48:21 AM »
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bahut khoob Daljeet ji,wonderful creation, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2009, 03:47:12 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Daljeet ji... Bahut umda likha hai aapne. Daad kabul kijiyega

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