ROSHNI KAM KYUN HO........ "MohanN"

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Jabin duhar pe yeh badnamaa dhabaa phir kyun ho,
Jalaa do jhaunprhe mehlon kee roshni kam kyun ho,
Aqal ke o andho, jis pairh ho baseraa usse kaatte kyun ho!
Mehlon rehne waalo, socho to aag se roshni kab.tak yeh ho gee,
Tumhaare mehlon kee safaayi karkhaanon kee kamaayee kyunkar ho gee,
Tumhaari to hogee sirf kurki rehne.ko koi jaunpree woh bhi to naa ho gee!!

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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2015, 01:55:26 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2015, 03:50:39 PM »
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very niiiiice surindarn ji

bahut shukria Suresh jee, I have made some changes in lines.

Jabin duhar pe yeh badnamaa dhabaa phir kyun ho,
Jalaa do jhaunprhe mehlon kee roshni kam kyun ho,
Aqal ke o andho, jis pairh ho baseraa usse kaatte kyun ho!
Mehlon rehne waalo, socho to aag se roshni kab.tak yeh ho gee,
Tumhaare mehlon kee safaayi karkhaanon kee kamaayee kyunkar ho gee,
Tumhaari to hogee sirf kurki rehne ko koi jaunpree woh bhi to naa ho gee!!

Surindar.N                                              "MohanN"
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2015, 10:47:33 PM »
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Waah waah. Bohat bohat umda peshkash daaaaddd
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Waah waah. Bohat bohat umda peshkash daaaaddd
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Waah waah. Bohat bohat umda peshkash daaaaddd
bahut shukria Jeet Jee.
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2015, 03:58:28 AM »
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Jabin duhar pe yeh badnamaa dhabaa phir kyun ho,
Jalaa do jhaunprhe mehlon kee roshni kam kyun ho,
Aqal ke o andho, jis pairh ho baseraa usse kaatte kyun ho!
Mehlon rehne waalo, socho to aag se roshni kab.tak yeh ho gee,
Tumhaare mehlon kee safaayi karkhaanon kee kamaayee kyunkar ho gee,
Tumhaari to hogee sirf kurki rehne.ko koi jaunpree woh bhi to naa ho gee!!

Surindar.N                                              "MohanN"
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