Rukhsat - E- zindagi

by Intezar on September 26, 2010, 06:55:10 PM
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Pehle to kayi baar seene se Lagaya gaya hai Mujhe,
apna keh kar auron ne begaana banaya hai mujhe,
meri chahat ko chheen kar mujhse aaj doston,
Saans rehte hi kabra mein dafnaya gaya hai mujhe,

Main koi numaayish ki cheez nahi tha
phir bhi sar-e-Bazar dikhaya gaya hai mujhe,
main chahata bhi to shikayat karta kaise
mere har alfaaz pe muzrim banaya gaya hai mujhe,

koi mujhe aawaaj na de ab dosto...
ek umra baad chain ke neend so raha hun,
kabhi socha bhi nahi k tumse door ho jayenge par
Saazish karke tumse door pahunchaya gaya hai mujhe,

Takreeban kayi saal ho gaye dafan huye mujhe
lekin aaj bhi ye saanse Kaayam hain,
yakeen hai hume ke mar kar bhi na mar paayenge
kyonki tumhari yaadon ke saath dafnaaya gaya hai mujhe,

Afsaano me mera zikra aaye na aaye kabhi...
lekin yaad rahe Doston...

Yaad kar kar ke har baar bhulaaya gaya hai mujhe,
Aur jaan boojh kar khud ka kaatil banaya gaya hai mujhe...!

Shukriya
Intezar...!
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2010, 06:58:24 PM »
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WAH Wh!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bhut dard hai ismain ..........

Bhut khoob likha hai............
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2010, 07:55:11 PM »
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wah Intezar ji ... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne... bahut khoob....!!!

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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2010, 07:58:02 PM »
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Shukriya Neel ji aur Hriday ji aapko bhi bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2010, 11:08:06 AM »
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bahut khoob ji mast likheli he bhiduuu~
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2010, 11:15:48 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2010, 11:59:03 AM »
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Shukriya Doston aap sabhi ke nazare karam ka...!
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2010, 03:04:53 PM »
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aaahhhhhhhh......... sad7 sad7 sad11


kuch yaadein dil pe dastak de gai
kuch alfaaz unke hain isme
kuch ehsaas mere apne hain
kuch mere diye gum hain isme..
main chahkar bhi andekha na kar saki
kuch wo jazbaat hain isme
kya kahun k kya rang hai teri kalam ka
kisi k dil k lahu se shabd likhen hon jaise........
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«Reply #8 on: September 28, 2010, 12:57:19 AM »
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haan bhai main Kapil hi hoon... kal mujhe aapke friend ne aapke baare me bataya... aap bahut achcha likhte ho yunhi likhte raho...!!!

Shukriya Neel ji aur Hriday ji aapko bhi bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: September 28, 2010, 05:07:26 AM »
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wah.. kasak ji app ke dil ki kasak dil ko choo gayee.. aise hi likhte rahiye.
aaahhhhhhhh......... sad7 sad7 sad11


kuch yaadein dil pe dastak de gai
kuch alfaaz unke hain isme
kuch ehsaas mere apne hain
kuch mere diye gum hain isme..
main chahkar bhi andekha na kar saki
kuch wo jazbaat hain isme
kya kahun k kya rang hai teri kalam ka
kisi k dil k lahu se shabd likhen hon jaise........
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